Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise: avoid redundancy and filler words (uh, um), use correct collocations (e.g., 'thirst for reading', 'research journals'), and simplify sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Control grammar (e.g., 'I enjoy reading', 'I have a large collection of books on food and nutrition', 'I buy research journals regularly').

Exemplo: I enjoy reading. I have a strong thirst for knowledge and a large collection of books on food and nutrition; I also buy research journals regularly. Reading helps me develop my thinking and stay updated in my field.

Sugestão: Be more natural and correct collocations and grammar: replace awkward phrases ('I'm habitual to') with 'I've been used to' or 'I prefer'. Reduce repetition and use linking words (however, because). Provide a concise reason and an example. Avoid exaggerations like 'extreme strain' unless justified.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I've been used to it since childhood. Although I also use devices like phones and tablets, they give me eye strain after long periods, so I usually choose paper books for extended reading.

Sugestão: Organize answer with a clear topic sentence, then contrast two situations using linking words (for example, 'when' and 'but'). Remove fillers and improve grammar ('case studies of my patients', 'I remove distractions'). Be specific about how you read carefully (notes, highlighting) and how you skim (headings, pictures).

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when studying my patients' case studies because accuracy matters, so I remove distractions and take notes. But when I read magazines, I usually skim headlines and pictures to get the main ideas quickly.

Sugestão: Make the response clearer and grammatically correct. Start with a topic sentence: 'It depends on the material.' Use linking words to contrast examples ('for instance', 'whereas'). Be specific about when you choose detailed reading vs scanning and describe methods (taking notes, checking references). Avoid vague phrases ('more soundly').

Exemplo: It depends on the material. For research articles about food and nutrition, I prefer detailed reading so I can understand methods and update my knowledge, often taking notes and checking references. Whereas for celebrity or travel magazines I usually scan headlines and pictures to get a quick overview.

× I'm an avid reader and I have unquenchable thrust to read uh, moreover a huge collection regarding food and nutrition, uh, including publication journal I always buy at the drop of hat. I really want to occupied myself in reading, so I develop my thinking skill as well as.

✓ I'm an avid reader and I have an unquenchable thirst for reading. Moreover, I have a large collection of books and journals about food and nutrition that I always buy at the drop of a hat. I like to occupy myself with reading because it helps me develop my thinking skills.

This sentence contains several issues: wrong word choice ('thrust' should be 'thirst'), incorrect prepositions ('thirst for', 'collection of', 'occupy myself with'), missing articles ('an unquenchable thirst', 'a large collection'), noun form and agreement ('publication journal' -> 'journals'), and sentence structure problems making it run-on and unclear. Suggestion: simplify into shorter sentences, use correct collocations (thirst for, collection of, buy at the drop of a hat), ensure subject-verb agreement and plural forms where needed ('skills'). Grammar problem type ID:26

× Although I was introduced lot of device later on like phone, tablet, computer screen, but I feel an extreme strain in my head while I watch on screen for longer hours.

✓ Although I was introduced to many devices later on, such as phones, tablets, and computer screens, I feel extreme strain in my head when I look at screens for long periods.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' after 'introduced', incorrect quantifier and noun form ('lot of device' -> 'many devices'), awkward conjunction use with 'although' and 'but' together (use one), incorrect verb and preposition 'watch on screen' -> 'look at screens', and word choice 'longer hours' -> 'long periods'. Suggestion: use 'introduced to', plural nouns, avoid combining 'although' and 'but', and use 'look at screens' or 'use screens'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I'm habitual to read on paper uh since my childhood.

✓ I am used to reading on paper since my childhood.

'Habitual to' is unidiomatic; use 'used to' or 'habitual reader'. Also 'read' should be the -ing form after 'used to' ('used to reading'). Suggestion: say 'I am used to reading on paper' or 'I have been a habitual reader of printed books since childhood.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× Some terms are really very useful for me.

✓ Some terms are very useful to me.

Though not severe, 'useful for me' -> 'useful to me' is more natural; 'really very' is redundant. Suggestion: remove redundancy and use 'useful to me'. Grammar problem type ID:27

× I really want to go for detailed reading so that I update myself with the current knowledge and more soundly while I am reading magazine regarding Bollywood or holiday.

✓ I really prefer detailed reading so that I can update myself with current knowledge and understand better when I am reading magazines about Bollywood or holidays.

Errors: 'want to go for detailed reading' is unnatural; 'prefer detailed reading' or 'choose detailed reading' is better. 'Update myself with the current knowledge' -> 'update myself with current knowledge'. 'More soundly' is incorrect; likely 'understand better'. 'Reading magazine' needs plural 'magazines' and correct preposition 'about' or 'on' and 'holidays' plural. Also modal 'can' needed to show ability. Suggestion: use 'prefer' and correct -ing forms, plural nouns, and clearer verbs like 'understand'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× including publication journal I always buy at the drop of hat.

✓ including the journals I always buy at the drop of a hat.

Missing article 'the' or 'my' before 'journals', wrong noun form 'publication journal' should be 'journals' or 'academic journals', and missing 'a' in idiom 'a hat'. Suggestion: use 'the journals' or 'academic journals' and ensure idiom is complete: 'at the drop of a hat'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I really want to, umm, prefer focused reading, and I keep my old distraction away from my room so that I prepare my case studies more carefully.

✓ When studying patient case studies, I prefer focused reading, and I remove distractions from my room so that I can prepare my case studies more carefully.

Issues: awkward phrase 'I really want to, umm, prefer' — choose one verb; 'keep my old distraction away from my room' is unnatural; use 'remove distractions from my room'. Tense/modal needed: 'so that I can prepare' expresses purpose. Suggestion: use clear verbs, correct collocations 'remove distractions', and include 'can' to show ability. Grammar problem type ID:6

× But when I am reading any magazine, I really don't go through it. I just skim off the information.

✓ But when I read a magazine, I usually don't read it carefully; I just skim the information.

'When I am reading any magazine' is wordy; 'read a magazine' is natural. 'Don't go through it' is informal and ambiguous — use 'don't read it carefully'. 'Skim off the information' is incorrect; 'skim the information' or 'skim it' is correct. Suggestion: use 'skim' without 'off' and simplify tense. Grammar problem type ID:13