Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more specific and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler, and give one or two concise supporting details (what you read and why you enjoyed it). Use correct grammar for titles and descriptions.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Last week I read a novel about vampires called "The Historian," and I enjoyed its suspenseful plot and vivid characters.

Sugestão: Organize your answer into two clear sentences: state preference, then give specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'it affects my eyes and gives me headaches').

Exemplo: I prefer reading from paper textbooks because they help me focus and improve my vocabulary. In contrast, reading on screens strains my eyes and often gives me headaches.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence then one or two reasons using linking words. Correct tense and reduce repetition. Be specific about activities that require careful reading (e.g., studying or work) versus casual reading.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully in the morning because my mind is fresh and I can concentrate, especially when I study for exams. I don't read carefully at night because I'm usually tired and prefer to relax with my family.

Sugestão: State your preference directly, then give clear, specific reasons with linking words. Use correct forms (e.g., 'I prefer detailed reading to scanning') and avoid filler words. Mention concrete benefits of detailed reading.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading to scanning because it helps me learn new vocabulary and understand examples in context. As a result, I retain more information and improve my language skills.

× Yes, of course I love reading. Last week I I read the book. It's a vampire disease.

✓ Yes, of course I love reading. Last week I read a book. It's about a vampire disease.

The first sentence is fine. The second had a repeated 'I' and article misuse: 'read the book' implies a specific known book; 'a book' is more natural here. Also added 'about' to clarify relation: 'It's a vampire disease' is unnatural without a preposition; 'about a vampire disease' correctly links the book's topic. Use simple past 'read' for completed action (correct form pronounced /rɛd/).

× I prefer to read in a textbook because, uh, it, uh, it gained the knowledge and enhanced the vocabulary and uh, then I don't like to read, uh, in, uh, on screen because, uh, it's effect on my eyes and, and my headache more.

✓ I prefer to read from a textbook because it helps me gain knowledge and improve my vocabulary. I don't like reading on a screen because it affects my eyes and gives me headaches.

Use of prepositions: 'read in a textbook' is unnatural; use 'read from' or simply 'read a textbook'. 'On screen' is correct for screen reading. Verb forms: 'it gained the knowledge and enhanced the vocabulary' should be active present tense 'helps me gain' and 'improve my vocabulary' to express habitual effect. 'It's effect' is incorrect; use 'it affects my eyes'. 'My headache more' is ungrammatical; use 'gives me headaches' or 'causes headaches'. Remove filler words for clarity.

× I reading carefully in the morning time because my mind, my mind fresh and I, I concentrate reading is very carefully, but not in the but not at the night time because because that time I am tired and I'm tired and my I spend time with my family members.

✓ I read carefully in the morning because my mind is fresh and I can concentrate well, but not at night because I am tired and I spend time with my family.

Verb form: 'I reading' is incorrect; use present simple 'I read' for habitual action. 'My mind fresh' needs a verb: 'my mind is fresh'. 'I concentrate reading is very carefully' should be 'I can concentrate well' or 'I concentrate very carefully' — 'concentrate' is intransitive and 'well' is an adverb. Remove repeated words and unnecessary fillers. Use 'at night' rather than 'at the night time' for natural phrasing.

× Uh, I prefer to reading, not scanning because scanning is uh, not learn uh, more vocabulary words, but in proofreading or detailed reading in learn vocabulary skills as well as example in detailing and learn, learn more things in detailing.

✓ I prefer detailed reading rather than scanning because scanning does not help me learn many vocabulary words. Detailed reading or proofreading helps me learn vocabulary and understand examples, so I learn many more things.

'Prefer to reading' mixes infinitive and gerund; use 'prefer reading' or 'prefer to read'. 'Scanning is not learn' is ungrammatical; use 'scanning does not help me learn'. Use plural 'many vocabulary words' or 'much vocabulary'. 'In learn' is wrong; use 'helps me learn'. Clarify 'example in detailing' to 'understand examples'. Use parallel structure and correct verb forms.