Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more specific and natural: give a brief topic sentence then add one or two concrete details. Correct grammar (use plural nouns and articles) and avoid vague phrases. Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I’ve loved reading since childhood, especially adventure and fantasy books like The Chronicles of Narnia, which sparked my imagination and made me enjoy storytelling.

Sugestão: Clarify and refine your reasons, use linking words and correct phrasing. Replace vague expressions ("where I am now") with clearer ones ("my place in the book"). Keep answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it’s easier to see my place in the book and flip back to previous pages, which helps me stay motivated and focused.

Sugestão: Organize into a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Fix grammar (verb forms, articles) and use linking words ("however", "otherwise"). Give specific examples of when careful reading is needed versus when scanning is fine.

Exemplo: I read carefully when the text contains important information, such as instructions or technical details, because I need to understand every step. However, if the sentence is just filler or background information that doesn’t affect my understanding, I usually skim it quickly.

Sugestão: Make the contrast clearer and correct word choice ("detailed reading" vs "scanning", "skim" not "scheming"). Use linking words like "however" and provide a short reason for each preference.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. If I have enough time, I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the material; however, when I’m short on time I usually scan the text to pick out the main ideas.

× Yes I do, I love reading the book from my childhood.

✓ Yes, I do. I love reading the books from my childhood.

The original uses the definite article 'the' with 'book' incorrectly when referring to books in general from childhood. This is an article error (ID 22). Use plural 'books' if referring to multiple childhood books, or 'the book' only if a specific book is meant. Also add comma and split into two sentences for clarity.

× I prefer to read on paper because I can easily find out where I am now.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I can easily find where I left off.

The phrase 'find out where I am now' is awkward and uses pronouns/time awkwardly. This is an incorrect use of pronouns/phrasing (ID 12). 'Where I left off' is a natural expression meaning the position in the text. Also avoid 'find out' which implies discovering new information.

× It could make me motivated.

✓ It makes me feel more motivated.

The original 'It could make me motivated' has awkward adjective/adverb use (ID 13) and modal mismatch. Use present tense 'makes' to match general preference and 'feel more motivated' is a natural collocation.

× The sentence it could help me development, I will really carefully, but if it it will not important for my understanding I will skip it.

✓ If a sentence helps my development, I will read it very carefully, but if it is not important for my understanding, I will skip it.

Multiple issues: sentence lacks clear clauses and has incorrect word forms and repetition 'it it'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Corrections: use conditional structure 'If..., I will...', change 'help me development' to 'helps my development' or 'helps me develop', 'really carefully' to 'very carefully', and 'it it will not important' to 'if it is not important'.

× As fast as possible.

✓ As quickly as possible.

Fragment 'As fast as possible' is acceptable colloquially but here it is a sentence fragment lacking subject/verb (also sentence without a verb, ID 23). Better to use 'As quickly as possible' attached to previous sentence or make it 'I read as quickly as possible.' I treat as article/structure issue; suggestion to make it a full clause.

× It depends on the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. Included to show no applicable error from list.

× If I have enough time to read something, I will read detail compared with scheming scanning.

✓ If I have enough time to read something, I will read in detail rather than skim it.

Original has tense/form and word choice errors: 'read detail' should be 'read in detail' and 'scheming scanning' is incorrect; intended 'skimming' or 'skim'. This falls under future tense/form and verb form issues (IDs 7 and 8). Use 'will' for future and correct verb forms 'read in detail' and 'skim'.

× But I do not have enough time.

✓ But if I do not have enough time,

Sentence is grammatically fine but in context it should be connected to following clause. To be precise, make it conditional 'But if I do not have enough time,' so it links to preference. This is an issue of sentence structure/pronoun reference (IDs 26 and 12).

× I prefer scanning to to understand.

✓ I prefer scanning to understand.

There is a duplicated 'to' and awkward structure. Use 'prefer scanning to understand' or better 'I prefer scanning to understand the main points.' The issue is verb + -ing and infinitive usage (ID 8). Remove duplicate 'to' and clarify purpose.