Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は意図は伝わりますが、文法ミスや冗長表現が多く、自然さや流暢さに欠けます。まずは短い主題文で直接答え、その後に1〜2文で理由や具体例を付けてください。リンク表現（for example, because, so）を使い、発音や語順も注意しましょう。例えば「I don't like reading much.」と始め、理由を述べるときは「because...」でつなぎます。

Exemplo: I don't enjoy reading very much because I prefer watching videos in my free time. For example, I usually watch documentaries or vlogs online, which feel more engaging and require less effort than reading.

Sugestão: 回答は要点を示していますが、文法（it's more easy → it's easier）、語順、接続が不自然です。まず明確な主題文を言い、次に理由を一つか二つ挙げ、最後に簡単な具体例を加えてください。接続詞（because, so, for example）を使って論理をはっきりさせましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient. For instance, I often use my smartphone to read articles or news, so I can swipe to the next page quickly and carry many books without space.

Sugestão: 答えは簡潔ですが単純すぎます。主題文で直接答えた後、理由や対比を加えて深めてください。例えば、試験のときは注意深く読む必要があるが、普段のニュースやSNSはざっと読むことが多い、という風に具体例で示すと良いです。文をつなぐ際にlinking words（for example, however）を使ってください。

Exemplo: I need to read carefully during exams because I must understand every detail to answer questions correctly. However, I don't read carefully when browsing social media or headlines, since I'm just skimming for general information.

Sugestão: 意味は伝わりますが、'scanning'の意味が不明であることを認めるより、短く説明を求めるか推測して答える方が良いです。主題文で好みを述べ、次に理由（具体的に何を得たいのか）と短い例を加えてください。語彙を少し広げると説得力が出ます（e.g., skim, scan, in-depth）。

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand the full story and all the details. For example, when I read a novel I take my time to follow the plot and characters rather than just skimming.

× I said I don't like reading so much, Why want to spend time spend my free time? I don't.

✓ I said I don't like reading very much. Why would I want to spend my free time reading? I don't.

The student omitted the subject 'I' and auxiliary 'would' in the question form and used awkward repetition. Use 'I' as the subject and 'would' to form the conditional/question 'Why would I...'. Also replace 'so much' with 'very much' and remove the repeated 'spend'. Improve by practicing subject insertion and common question patterns.

× I never choose reading a book or something.

✓ I never choose to read a book or anything like that.

After 'choose' use the infinitive 'to read', not the gerund 'reading' in this context. Also 'something' is vague; 'anything like that' is more natural. Practice verb patterns: choose + to-infinitive.

× I choose watching video or something new outside.

✓ I choose to watch videos or to do something new outside.

Similarly, 'choose' should be followed by 'to' + verb. 'Video' should be plural if referring generally. Reorder to make parallel structure: 'to watch' and 'to do'.

× So I don't like to read.

✓ So I don't like reading.

Both forms can be correct, but 'I don't like reading' is more natural here and matches earlier statement. Use consistent gerund form after 'like' to express general preference.

× I say screen because it's more easy to.

✓ I would say a screen because it's easier to use.

Use comparative 'easier' rather than 'more easy'. Add 'to use' to complete the idea. 'I would say' is a more natural conversational phrase.

× To over the page to to read next one.

✓ To turn the page to read the next one.

The phrase was ungrammatical. Use 'turn the page' and include 'the' before 'next one'. Also remove duplicate 'to'. Practice common collocations like 'turn the page'.

× Because these days I'm don't use textbook, I use smartphone for more often so that's why.

✓ Because these days I don't use textbooks; I use my smartphone more often, so that's why.

Incorrect contraction 'I'm don't' should be 'I don't'. 'Textbook' should be plural 'textbooks' for generalization. 'For more often' is wrong; use 'more often'. Add 'my' before 'smartphone' for clarity. Use punctuation to separate clauses.

× Maybe during exam I have to read carefully.

✓ Maybe during exams I have to read carefully.

Use plural 'exams' for general situations. The original is close but needs pluralization. 'Have to read carefully' is fine; ensure plural when speaking generally.

× To know the detail about the exam.

✓ To know the details about the exam.

Fragment lacking subject; should be attached to previous sentence or made complete. Use plural 'details' and include it as 'I do that to know the details about the exam.' Practice completing fragments.

× So only exam for me.

✓ So only exams are like that for me.

Original is an incomplete fragment. Provide a complete clause and pluralize 'exam' for general meaning. Alternatively: 'So only exams require that from me.' Practice forming full sentences.

× Umm don't know about scanning so I said detail reading because maybe the reading is more easier to know about stories or details so I prefer detailed reading.

✓ I don't know much about scanning, so I said detailed reading because it is easier to understand stories and details, so I prefer detailed reading.

Missing subject 'I' at start. 'Said' should be 'said' or better 'chose' but context 'I said' okay; however 'the reading is more easier' is ungrammatical: use 'is easier' not 'more easier'. 'Know about' should be 'understand'. Remove redundancy and tighten sentence. Practice subject inclusion and comparative forms.