Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve clarity, grammar and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers, use correct verb/noun forms, and add one specific detail to support your preference. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I especially like fiction because stories help me relax and imagine different worlds. For example, I often read novels about everyday life and relationships, which I find comforting.

Sugestão: Fix minor grammar errors and add a linking phrase and a specific reason or example. Use a topic sentence, then support it with one or two specific benefits. Keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is very convenient. For example, I can carry hundreds of books on my phone and read them on the bus or during breaks, which saves space and time.

Sugestão: When you don't understand a question, ask for clarification instead of answering vaguely. Use a short clarification request, then answer both parts of the question with clear contrasting examples and linking words (e.g., 'however', 'but').

Exemplo: Could you repeat the question, please? If you mean when I read carefully, I do so when studying for exams or reading contracts because details matter; however, I skim news articles or social media posts when I just want a quick update.

Sugestão: Improve tense and word choice and expand slightly with a specific example or reason using a linking word. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one concrete example of when you use detailed reading.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the author's ideas. For instance, when I read a novel or an academic article, I read slowly and sometimes take notes so I don't miss important points.

× Yes, I enjoy living, especially I like fiction book.

✓ Yes, I enjoy reading, especially fiction books.

The student used 'living' instead of 'reading' which is a wrong lexical choice (treated here as an error in word use related to adjectives/adverbs category). Also 'fiction book' should be plural 'fiction books' to match general preference. Use 'enjoy reading' to express a hobby. Suggestion: replace 'living' with 'reading' and use plural for general statements about types of books.

× Well, I prefer read on a screen because it's really convenient. I can read everywhere.

✓ Well, I prefer to read on a screen because it's really convenient. I can read it anywhere.

After 'prefer' followed by a verb, use the infinitive 'to read' or a gerund 'reading'. Also 'everywhere' is acceptable but 'read it anywhere' is more natural when referring to reading a book or text on a screen. Suggestion: use 'prefer to read' or 'prefer reading' and add an object like 'it' or 'books' if needed.

× Sorry I doesn't understand question but I try to answer.

✓ Sorry, I don't understand the question, but I will try to answer.

The auxiliary 'doesn't' is incorrect with the first person; use 'don't'. Also 'understand question' needs the definite article 'the question'. For politeness and tense consistency, 'I will try to answer' or 'I'll try to answer' is better. Suggestion: use 'I don't' for present simple with I, include 'the' before 'question', and use a future/modal to show intent.

× I prefer detailed reading because I will understand the book.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I understand the book better.

Using 'will' here suggests a future result, but the student is describing a general truth or habitual outcome. Use present simple 'I understand' or 'I understand the book better' to show that detailed reading generally leads to better understanding. Suggestion: use present simple for general statements or habitual results.