Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give 1–2 specific reasons with brief examples. Avoid filler and unclear phrases. Work on grammar (tenses, subject-verb agreement) and smoother linking (e.g., because, so, for example).

Exemplo: No, I don't read much. I often find reading tiring and boring, especially long texts, so I usually only read when I need information for work or study. For example, I read articles to find facts quickly rather than for pleasure.

Sugestão: Good clear preference. Improve clarity by correcting vocabulary and giving a short reason with an example. Replace unclear words and reduce repetition. Use linking words like 'because' to connect reason and example.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer reading on paper because screens make my eyes tired. For example, I tried e-books once, but after long sessions my eyes hurt, so I stick to printed books.

Sugestão: Organize the answer: state the situations clearly and use contrasting linking words (when... but when...). Correct tense and phrasing (use 'I read carefully' not 'I used to'). Provide one specific example of a 'crucial' task.

Exemplo: I read carefully when I have to submit important school work, such as a final report, because mistakes matter. In contrast, I skim casual articles or stories when I'm just reading for fun.

Sugestão: Good intention—state preference clearly then give concise reason and an example. Fix unclear phrases and redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' and keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I don't like missing important information. For example, when studying for exams I read chapters slowly and take notes to make sure I understand all key points.

× Not usually, I don't like reading 'cause when I started to read something I'm really tired and it's very boring.

✓ Not usually; I don't like reading because when I start to read something I get really tired and find it very boring.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: 'started' is past but context requires present habitual 'start' (Present tense issue, ID 6). 'I'm really tired' is okay but better as 'I get really tired' to show change when reading (Verb in the present participle/verb choice, ID 10). 'cause' is informal; use 'because'. Suggestions: Use consistent present tense for habits (I don't like reading; when I start to read...), choose verbs that express change/state (get tired), and avoid informal contractions in formal answers.

× I sometimes started to read it when and to get some information.

✓ I sometimes start to read it when I want to get some information.

Present tense issue (ID 6): 'started' is past but sentence describes a habitual action, so use present 'start'. Also sentence structure is fragmented ('when and to get'); correct structure is 'when I want to get'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions and include a subject for 'when' clauses.

× But yes, many times I failed it.

✓ But yes, many times I fail at it.

Subject-verb agreement/verb form (ID 27): 'failed it' is past; context suggests habitual failure so use present simple 'fail' and correct verb pattern 'fail at something'. Suggestion: Use present simple for repeated experiences and correct collocations (fail at it).

× Really everything.

✓ Really, everything does.

Sentence structure error (ID 26): Fragment 'Really everything.' lacks clarity and a verb. Correction adds a verb to make a complete sentence, though better context-specific phrasing would be 'Really, everything is boring' or omit the fragment. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; ensure subject and verb are present.

× Definitely paper, one time I subscribed it, the Electro books, scream books I mean, but it was quite like it made me make my eyes very tired.

✓ Definitely paper. One time I subscribed to electronic books, I mean e-books, but they made my eyes very tired.

Several issues: incorrect preposition and verb patterns for subscriptions (should be 'subscribed to', ID 11), incorrect singular/plural and word choice 'the Electro books, scream books' intended 'electronic books' or 'e-books' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1), and awkward phrasing 'it made me make my eyes very tired' should be 'they made my eyes very tired' (pronoun and subject agreement, ID 12/1). Suggestion: Use 'subscribed to e-books' and match plural pronouns with plural nouns.

× So definitely I prefer reading paper books.

✓ So definitely I prefer reading paper books.

No grammatical error requiring correction under provided list; sentence is correct. Included here to show it's acceptable; no change needed.

× If I really have to submit some pretty crucial product to school, I used to read carefully, but the other days, such as just to read something like interesting one usually I didn't focus on very well.

✓ If I really have to submit an important project to school, I read carefully, but on other days, when I read something just because it's interesting, I usually don't focus very well.

Multiple tense and word-choice issues: 'used to read carefully' implies past habitual (ID 6) but context requires present habit 'read carefully'. 'Product' is incorrect word choice for school assignment; 'project' is more natural. 'the other days' should be 'on other days' (preposition error, ID 11). 'such as just to read something like interesting one' is ungrammatical; correct clause is 'when I read something just because it's interesting'. 'I didn't focus on very well' uses past; use present 'I usually don't focus very well'. Suggestions: Use present simple for habits, choose correct nouns ('project'), and simplify clauses for clarity.

× Uh, usually I prefer reading carefully.

✓ Usually I prefer reading carefully.

Minor: leading filler 'Uh' removed for clarity. Present tense 'prefer' correctly used (ID 6). Suggestion: Avoid fillers in test answers.

× If I miss you to some detail, I feel like I didn't read the book will.

✓ If I miss some details, I feel like I didn't read the book well.

Sentence structure and word choice errors (ID 26): 'miss you to some detail' is ungrammatical — should be 'miss some details' (pronoun misuse ID 12). 'didn't read the book will' uses wrong word 'will' instead of 'well' and mixes past tense with present feeling — context fits past consequence so 'didn't read the book well' is acceptable. Suggestions: Use correct collocations ('miss details'), correct adverb 'well', and keep tenses consistent.

× I don't want to feel that kind of a feeling.

✓ I don't want to feel that kind of feeling.

Awkward article usage (ID 22) and redundancy: 'that kind of a feeling' is wordy; 'that kind of feeling' is more natural. Suggestion: Remove unnecessary articles and avoid redundant phrasing.

× So usually I really try to read it.

✓ So usually I really try to read it carefully.

Verb in the present participle form / missing adverb to complete meaning (ID 10/20): 'try to read it' is okay but adding 'carefully' clarifies intent as discussed earlier. Suggestion: Add adverb to specify how you read.

× I'm trying to capture the detail well.

✓ I'm trying to capture the details well.

Use of singular 'detail' vs plural 'details' (Past participle/number issue, ID 9/1): 'details' is more natural when referring to multiple small points. Suggestion: Use plural 'details' to match general meaning.