Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um) and redundant repetition, and expand with one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. It’s my main hobby because it helps me relax and offers new perspectives on the world. For example, reading biographies gives me insight into different people’s lives, so I often learn useful lessons.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference sentence and explain one or two specific reasons with correct vocabulary. Correct mistakes (e.g., "digital book" not "digital broker") and finish sentences fully. Use linking words like "because" and "for example".

Exemplo: I prefer reading physical books because I enjoy the tactile feel of paper and find it easier to annotate. For example, when studying I highlight passages and write notes in the margins, which helps me remember better.

Sugestão: Provide a direct topic sentence and give specific examples with reasons. Remove fillers and use linking words such as "when" and "because". Make grammar corrections (e.g., "it requires" not "it is requires").

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when the material is complex or important, such as history or philosophy, because these subjects require deep understanding. For example, when reading a philosophy text I slow down to note arguments and check sources.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and give a concise reason with a specific example. Avoid repetition of the same phrase and correct grammar ("detailed reading", "it requires a larger..." is incomplete). Use linking words like "because" and "for example".

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex ideas thoroughly. For example, when studying a history book I read slowly and take notes so I can remember dates and causes of events.

× Yeah, absolutely. Yes. I always like, I my hobby is reading.

✓ Yes, I always like reading. My hobby is reading.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced pronouns and fragments ('I my hobby'). Combine ideas and use clear pronoun structure: 'I always like reading' and 'My hobby is reading.' This fixes sentence structure and pronoun misuse.

× It can help me, uh, relax and, uh, give me different ways of looking up the world.

✓ It can help me relax and give me different ways of looking at the world.

The phrase 'looking up the world' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'looking at.' Remove extra filler commas and 'uh' for clarity. This corrects prepositional choice and adverbial phrasing.

× I like read a book with paper, the physical book.

✓ I like reading a paper book, the physical book.

After 'like' when describing a general preference, use the -ing form 'reading' rather than base form 'read.' Also reorder to 'paper book' or 'physical book' for natural phrasing.

× I don't like the digital broker because it is not the feeling of reading you.

✓ I don't like digital e-readers because they do not give me the feeling of reading a physical book.

'Digital broker' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'e-reader' or 'digital device.' Subject-pronoun agreement and phrasing 'the feeling of reading you' is wrong; replace with 'give me the feeling of reading a physical book.' This fixes vocabulary and pronoun reference.

× I like to take some notes on the.

✓ I like to take some notes on them.

Sentence ends abruptly with a missing object. Use 'them' to refer to books or e-readers mentioned earlier or explicitly say 'on books' or 'on the book.' This completes the sentence structure.

× There are some books it's difficult or important to read.

✓ There are some books that are difficult or important to read.

The original omits the relative pronoun and a linking verb. Insert 'that are' to connect 'books' with the adjectives 'difficult' and 'important.' This fixes the 'there are' clause structure.

× I will read it very carefully.

✓ I read it very carefully.

Question asks about general habit; use simple present 'I read' rather than 'I will read' which indicates future. Use present tense for habitual action.

× For example, some books about history or philosophy.

✓ For example, books about history or philosophy require careful reading.

Original is a sentence fragment. Combine with main clause to form a complete sentence and place verb to show requirement.

× It is requires some professional knowledge.

✓ They require some professional knowledge.

'It is requires' mixes forms; use correct subject-verb agreement. 'Books' plural take 'require.' Use simple present 'require' for general statements.

× I will read it carefully.

✓ I read them carefully.

Again, for habitual action use simple present. Match pronoun number to 'books' (them) and use 'read' for habit.

× I prefer the detail reading because the detail reading can help me understand more clearly.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand more clearly.

Use the adjective 'detailed' instead of the noun 'detail' before 'reading.' Also avoid repetition by using 'it' and use present tense 'helps' for general preference.

× For example some books, some book about history, it is requires a larger.

✓ For example, some books about history require more extensive reading.

The original is ungrammatical and fragmented. Remove repetition, use plural 'books' consistent with verb 'require,' and replace vague 'a larger' with 'more extensive reading' to complete the idea.