Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and organized: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like reading, then give one or two specific supporting details (types of reading and why). Avoid repetition and grammar errors. Use linking words like “because” or “for example.” Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy reading. I especially like novels and news articles because they help me relax and keep me informed. For example, I read a novel last month that improved my vocabulary and a daily newspaper to follow current events.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference and explain with one reason and an example. Use linking words (e.g., “however,” “because,” “for example”) to connect ideas. Complete sentences and correct grammar will improve clarity.

Exemplo: It depends on the material; however, I prefer reading newspapers on paper because it feels easier to focus. For example, I read the daily paper at breakfast, but I use my tablet to read academic articles when I travel.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear topic sentence: say when careful reading is needed and when scanning is enough. Provide one concrete example and use linking words like “because” and “so.” Avoid hesitations and incomplete clauses.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when the material affects my studies or work, for example, exam texts or official instructions, because mistakes matter. If the information is casual, like social media posts, I usually skim it to save time.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and give a specific reason and example. Use linking words (e.g., “because,” “so”) and avoid repeating words. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences and correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles).

Exemplo: I prefer scanning because it is faster and helps me find the main idea quickly. For instance, when I read news sites I scan headlines and the first paragraph to decide which articles to read in detail.

× As I like reading the things I did since my childhood, the readings can make a man perfect and I can can I dislike reading.

✓ As I have liked reading since my childhood, reading can make a person better and I cannot dislike it.

The sentence misuses pronouns and has extra repeated words. 'I did since my childhood' is incorrect; use present perfect 'have liked' to express a continuing preference from the past to now. 'The readings' is awkward; use 'reading' or 'reading books' and 'a man perfect' is unnatural and gender-specific; use 'a person better'. 'I can can I dislike' has repetition and wrong modal; use 'I cannot dislike it'. Suggestion: simplify the structure, use present perfect for continued action, use neutral noun 'person', and remove duplicate words.

× I absolutely like and I love to reading especially novel and my textbook and any news anything I love to read.

✓ I absolutely like reading and I love to read, especially novels, my textbooks, and news; I enjoy reading anything.

Incorrect verb form 'to reading' should be 'to read' or simply 'reading'; nouns need plural forms 'novels' and 'textbooks' for general statements. The list order and repetition are awkward. Suggestion: use parallel structure ('love to read' or 'love reading'), pluralize general nouns, and combine ideas to avoid repetition.

× It depends on subject.

✓ It depends on the subject.

Missing definite article before 'subject' when speaking about a specific topic category. Use 'the subject' to indicate a particular subject area. Suggestion: include 'the' in such expressions.

× I need to prefer to read like newspaper and anything related news I need I want to read in paper.

✓ I prefer to read newspapers and news-related items on paper.

Redundant modal 'need to prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' alone expresses choice. 'Like newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers' and 'in paper' should be 'on paper'. The clause is repetitive ('I need I want'). Suggestion: use simple present 'I prefer' and correct preposition 'on paper', pluralize countable nouns.

× But uh. The technology gets so in my in advanced so recently I.

✓ But technology has advanced a lot recently.

The original is fragmented and word order is incorrect: 'gets so in my in advanced' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'has advanced' to show recent development and concise adverb 'a lot' or 'greatly'. Suggestion: reorganize into a single clear clause and use correct tense for recent changes.

× If the topics are the related program is very important for our life and just uh for our exams, I need uh to read carefully.

✓ If the topics are related to an important program for our lives or are important for our exams, I need to read them carefully.

The sentence mixes structures and lacks parallelism. 'Are the related program is' is incorrect. Use 'related to' plus a noun and make subjects parallel. 'Need to read carefully' is acceptable but requires a direct object ('them'). Suggestion: restructure the conditional clause, use 'related to', and include object pronoun.

× Then I cannot find any important topics and related to my exams, then I usually skip their type of.

✓ If I cannot find any important topics related to my exams, I usually skip that type of material.

Awkward word order and repetition of 'then'. 'And related to my exams' should be attached to 'topics' ('topics related to my exams'). 'Skip their type of' is ungrammatical; use 'skip that type of material'. Suggestion: remove redundant 'then', attach modifiers directly to nouns, and use clear noun phrases.

× I prefer to scanning because is convenient and it takes less time.

✓ I prefer scanning because it is convenient and it takes less time.

Incorrect combination 'prefer to scanning' mixes infinitive and gerund forms; 'prefer scanning' or 'prefer to scan' are correct. Also missing subject 'it' before 'is convenient'. Suggestion: use either 'prefer scanning' (gerund) or 'prefer to scan' (infinitive) and include the subject for 'is'.

× I uh understanding.

✓ I try to understand.

'I understanding' is not a complete verb phrase; needs auxiliary or correct verb form. Likely intended 'I am understanding' (progressive) or better 'I try to understand'. Suggestion: use a full verb phrase such as 'I try to understand' to express effort.

× I try to understand the what the the information says or what the paragraph says instead of reading details in details.

✓ I try to understand what the information or the paragraph says instead of reading all the details.

Extra 'the' repeated twice and wrong word order 'the what the' are errors. 'Reading details in details' is redundant; use 'reading all the details' or 'reading every detail'. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, correct word order, and use clear noun phrase for the details.