Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating whether you like reading, then give a brief reason and one specific example. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and articles) and avoid confusing phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I do enjoy reading. I don't read much for fun, but I often read non-fiction books to gain knowledge, for example biographies and popular science, which help me learn new facts and ideas.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly, then give 1–2 clear reasons with correct vocabulary. Avoid invented words and finish your sentence. Use linking words (because, however, therefore).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it is gentler on my eyes and I find it easier to concentrate. However, screens are often unavoidable for work and studying, so I use them when necessary but try to limit screen time.

Sugestão: Provide at least a short direct answer. State situations when careful reading is necessary and contrast with times when skimming is enough. Use simple linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when the material is important, such as contracts, academic articles, or instructions for medicine. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I am browsing news headlines or social media posts, where a quick scan is usually enough.

Sugestão: Start with a clear choice and give specific reasons with correct word choice. Explain exceptions using a linking word like 'but' and finish your thought. Avoid vague words like 'constants' and repeat words.

Exemplo: I prefer scanning because it helps me get the main idea quickly, especially when I have limited time. But for important documents, such as legal papers or research reports, I read in detail to understand every point and avoid mistakes.

× I'm a lot of persons that would book for hobbies, but I do read books for knowledge.

✓ I am one of many people who buy books for hobbies, but I read books for knowledge.

The student used 'a lot of persons' and 'that would book' incorrectly. Use 'one of many people' or 'I am one of many people who...' to express belonging; 'people' not 'persons' is more natural. 'Who' is the correct relative pronoun for people. 'Buy books' or 'get books' is appropriate instead of 'book'. This preserves present simple tense for habitual actions.

× I prefer to read them papers because the papers is better to my eyes.

✓ I prefer to read paper books because paper is easier on my eyes.

'Them papers' is incorrect; use 'paper books' or 'printed books'. 'Paper' is an uncountable noun here, so 'is' refers to 'paper' (singular/invariable), and the phrase 'easier on my eyes' is the natural idiom instead of 'better to my eyes'. Also avoid using 'them' as a demonstrative pronoun in standard grammar.

× If I'm reading on the screens, there is a lot of bull rates that will admit to my eyes and that is harming my eyes.

✓ If I read on screens, there is a lot of blue light that reaches my eyes and harms them.

Several issues: 'I'm reading on the screens' should be general habit 'I read on screens'. 'There is a lot of bull rates' is incorrect word choice; likely 'blue light'. Use singular 'there is a lot of blue light' and active verb 'reaches' (not 'admit to'). 'That is harming my eyes' should be 'harms them' for concision and correct subject-verb agreement.

× But I think in today it is inevitable to use the screens because.

✓ But I think today it is inevitable to use screens.

The phrase 'in today' is wrong; use 'today'. End the sentence with the statement; do not leave 'because' without a clause. 'Use screens' is more natural than 'use the screens' in general statements. Ensure complete sentence structure.

× No idea.

✓ I have no idea.

'No idea' is a fragment lacking a verb. Use 'I have no idea' to form a complete sentence with subject and verb suitable for the question about when to read carefully.

× I prefer scanning because they can give me a brief understanding of the constants, but if a very important documents or a a.

✓ I prefer scanning because it can give me a brief understanding of the content, but if a document is very important, I read it in detail.

Problems: 'they' does not agree with 'scanning' (use 'it' or 'scanning can'). 'Constants' is incorrect word choice; likely 'content'. 'If a very important documents or a a.' is ungrammatical: use singular/plural agreement and complete the conditional clause: 'if a document is very important, I read it in detail.' Remove duplicated 'a a' and ensure subject-verb agreement.