Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more natural by using a topic sentence, correcting grammar, and adding one or two specific details. Keep it under five sentences and avoid repetition. For example, say which genres you like and give one brief memory or reason using linking words (e.g., "for example", "because").

Exemplo: I enjoy reading, especially adventure stories and popular science books. For example, when I was a child I read a book called The Cherry about an adventure with a dog and four children, and it sparked my love of exploring. I like these genres because they are exciting and often teach me new facts.

Sugestão: Avoid short unclear phrases and correct basic grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two concise reasons with linking words. Use accurate expressions (e.g., "I prefer reading on paper"; "I find it harder to remember details on screens").

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I remember details better and concentrate more. For example, when I read on a screen I often forget the main points and get distracted by scrolling, which makes comprehension difficult.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then contrast two situations using linking words (e.g., "when... but when..."). Fix grammar and keep sentences concise. Provide a specific example of a document type and a social media behavior to illustrate the difference.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I handle work emails and official documents because a small mistake could cause misunderstandings or serious problems. In contrast, I just skim social media posts for fun and don't read them in detail.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then give concise reasons with linking words and a specific example. Correct tense and phrasing (e.g., "saves me time", "news articles online"). Avoid repetition and keep within four sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer scanning because it saves time, especially for online news articles. If I read every word I get bored and it takes too long, so I quickly look for key points or headings to get the main idea.

× Yes, I like especially the book of adventure stories and scientific.

✓ Yes, I especially like books of adventure stories and science (fiction).

The sentence misplaces 'especially' and uses incorrect adjective 'scientific' instead of 'science (fiction)'. Move 'especially' before the verb to modify 'like' and use plural 'books' to match general preference. Use 'science fiction' if referring to that genre; otherwise 'science books'. Suggestion: Place adverbs near the verb they modify and choose correct noun forms for genres.

× I still remember when I was a kid I read a student book called The Cherry.

✓ I still remember that when I was a kid I read a book for students called The Cherry.

The original lacks a clear connector and uses 'student book' unnatural in English. Adding 'that' clarifies the subordinate clause and 'a book for students' is a clearer phrase. Ensure article 'a' is present before singular countable nouns.

× Nice. It's tell tells a adventure term.

✓ It was nice. It tells an adventure story.

Several issues: tense and verb form ('It tells' is present but context past is better: 'It was nice'), duplicated verb 'tell tells', incorrect article 'a' before a vowel sound word 'adventure' should be 'an', and 'term' is wrong word; 'story' fits. Use consistent tense and correct article. Suggestion: Match tense and use 'a' vs 'an' based on sound.

× Adventure tour with one dog, three boys and a girl.

✓ The adventure is about a trip with one dog, three boys, and a girl.

Original is a sentence fragment lacking a verb. Recast as a full sentence with subject and verb and include commas in a list. Ensure complete clause structure.

× I prefer red on paper though screen reading is more convenient.

✓ I prefer reading on paper, though reading on a screen is more convenient.

The verb 'read' is misspelled as 'red' and gerund 'reading' is needed. Also clarify 'screen' as 'on a screen' to be natural. Use consistent noun/verb forms.

× Is this? But I found I couldn't.

✓ Is that so? But I find I can't.

Original is unclear and mixes tenses. 'Is this?' is unnatural; 'Is that so?' asks for confirmation. Use present tense 'find' and 'can't' to match general preference. Ensure question phrasing is correct.

× I can't remember the scene or remember the main point after I read on the screen.

✓ I can't remember the scenes or the main points after I read on a screen.

Use plural 'scenes' and 'main points' for general experiences, and 'on a screen' is more natural. Maintain present tense for habitual inability. Also avoid repeating 'remember' twice; can be kept but better to pluralize objects.

× And sometimes I feel a little bit more hard to control me to not light my finger rolls.

✓ And sometimes I find it harder to stop myself from mindlessly scrolling with my finger.

Original misuses reflexive pronoun and idioms: 'control me to not light my finger rolls' is ungrammatical. Use 'stop myself' for reflexive action and 'mindlessly scrolling' or 'scrolling with my finger' for intended meaning. Use comparative 'harder' correctly. Suggestion: Use 'stop myself from' + gerund.

× Are you really read carefully when I deal with some office documents like work emails or official documents?

✓ I really read carefully when I deal with office documents like work emails or official papers.

The original incorrectly starts with 'Are you' and mixes person. It should be a statement about the speaker: 'I really read carefully...' Also avoid repeating 'documents' by using 'official papers'. Use present tense 'read' for habitual action.

× Because one small mistake could make everything be different and might cause big trouble.

✓ Because one small mistake could make everything different and might cause big trouble.

Remove unnecessary 'be' after 'make everything'. 'Could' and 'might' are acceptable modals here; the error was extra verb 'be'. Keep modal verbs to express possibility.

× But I just scrolling through the screen when I read some relaxing social media.

✓ But I just scroll through social media when I'm relaxing.

Original uses wrong verb form 'scrolling' without auxiliary. Use simple present 'scroll' for habitual action and rephrase 'relaxing social media' to 'when I'm relaxing' or 'relaxing on social media'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct clause structure.

× I prefer scanning because it saved me a lot of time, especially when I read some news or journalists online.

✓ I prefer scanning because it saves me a lot of time, especially when I read news or journalism online.

Mix of present preference 'prefer' with past 'saved' is inconsistent. Use present 'saves' for general truth. 'Read news' or 'read journalism' is more natural than 'read some news or journalists'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent across clauses.

× If I read every word, if I read any sentence, the whole article will take me a lot of time and it really makes me bored.

✓ If I read every word or every sentence, the whole article will take me a lot of time and it really bores me.

Avoid repeating 'if' unnecessarily; combine clauses. Use 'bores me' instead of 'makes me bored' for natural active phrasing. Maintain future/present consistency: 'will take me' for consequence is okay; 'bores me' present simple for general effect is fine.