Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your hobby, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors (a lot of → a lot of; reading book → reading books; it finds me feel quite → it helps me feel quiet/relaxed).

Exemplo: I enjoy reading books in my free time. For example, I usually read novels and non-fiction for about an hour each evening, which helps me relax and learn new vocabulary.

Sugestão: Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and give one clear example. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like "but" or "however" correctly. Clarify meaning: say you used to play cricket and spent most of your time on it.

Exemplo: When I was a child I had many hobbies, but the main one was playing cricket. I used to spend most of my free time practicing with friends after school.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct tense and vocabulary. If you did not keep a childhood hobby, say so briefly, then explain your current hobby with specific reasons and a linking word (e.g., "however" or "so"). Replace unclear phrases ("it fills me," "local vocabulary") with precise expressions.

Exemplo: No, I don't have a hobby that I've kept since childhood. However, I recently took up reading books because it helps me improve my vocabulary and relax before work.

Sugestão: Be clear and organized: start with a topic sentence stating whether your hobbies match your family's, then give a specific example. Avoid confusing phrases and redundancy. Use linking words like "however" or "although" to contrast. Correct vocabulary ("read books", "siblings").

Exemplo: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. For instance, I enjoy reading books, but my brother prefers playing cricket, so we don't share the same interests.

× Yeah, of course I have a lots of movies which I perform in my daily life.

✓ Yeah, of course I watch a lot of movies in my daily life.

The phrase 'a lots of' is incorrect; the correct form is 'a lot of' (uncountable quantifier) or 'lots of'. Also 'perform in my daily life' is wrong contextually; 'watch' fits with movies. Use 'a lot of movies' to match plural noun.

× One of them is my most useful hobbies, reading book.

✓ One of them is my most useful hobby: reading books.

Mismatch between singular/plural: 'One of them is my most useful hobbies' should use singular 'hobby'. 'Reading book' should be plural or 'reading a book' depending on meaning; 'reading books' is natural. Use a colon or rephrase for clarity.

× I prefer to read books alone because it finds me feel quite and relaxed.

✓ I prefer to read books alone because it makes me feel quiet and relaxed.

Incorrect pronoun and verb: 'it finds me feel' is ungrammatical. Use 'it makes me feel' to express causation. 'Quite' (adverb) was intended as 'quiet' (adjective meaning calm). Ensure adjective 'quiet' modifies 'me' via 'feel'.

× Yes I have a hobby when I was a child but when I was a child I have a lot of hobby but now I have only one hobby that is reading the books.

✓ Yes, I had a hobby when I was a child; I had many hobbies then, but now I have only one hobby, which is reading books.

Tense mismatch: the time frame 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'had', not 'have'. Use plural 'many hobbies' instead of 'a lot of hobby'. 'Reading the books' should be 'reading books'.

× But when I was child I have a cricket because I major time of my life I spent in.

✓ But when I was a child I played cricket because I spent a major part of my time on it.

Multiple structural issues: missing article 'a child', wrong tense 'have' instead of 'played', and awkward phrase 'I major time of my life I spent in.' Rephrase to 'I spent a major part of my time on it' for clarity.

× No, I didn't have any hobby which I which is my my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't have any hobby during my childhood.

Redundant words 'which I which is my my childhood' and awkward structure. Use 'during my childhood' with past tense 'didn't have'.

× But presently I have a new hobby which is reading a book because it fills me.

✓ But currently I have a new hobby, which is reading books, because it fulfills me.

'Presently' is acceptable but 'currently' is clearer. 'Reading a book' vs 'reading books' depends, but plural is natural. 'Fills me' is vague; 'fulfills me' or 'is fulfilling' is better. Ensure tense consistency.

× It helps me to find local vocabulary and relax before my work.

✓ It helps me learn new vocabulary and relax before work.

'Find local vocabulary' is unnatural; use 'learn new vocabulary'. Omit 'my' before 'work' unless specifying a particular job. Use infinitive 'helps me learn'.

× As per my observation, in my regular family no one has a hobby to read B books because I don't know about my siblings because I prefer to live alone.

✓ In my immediate family, no one has a hobby of reading books; I don't know about my siblings because I prefer to live alone.

'As per my observation' is wordy; 'immediate family' is standard. 'Hobby to read B books' is incorrect—use 'hobby of reading books'. Remove redundant 'because' clause or clarify reasoning.

× But I think my brother has a hobby to play cricket.

✓ But I think my brother's hobby is playing cricket.

'Has a hobby to play cricket' is unnatural. Use possessive 'brother's hobby is' or 'he likes to play cricket'.

× Not my, not the same of me, just.

✓ Not mine; his hobby is not the same as mine.

Fragmented and ungrammatical sentence. Replace with a complete sentence expressing that his hobby differs from the speaker's.