Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your main hobby, avoid fillers and grammatical errors, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Pronunciation of key words should be clearer (e.g., 'gym' not 'genes').

Exemplo: Yes, my main hobby is working out. I usually exercise at the gym three times a week and also enjoy walking in nearby parks because it helps me relax and stay fit.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear past-tense statement. Remove hesitations and fix grammar (e.g., 'since childhood' or 'when I was a child'). Provide one specific detail about frequency or who you played with, and use linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child I enjoyed going to the park. For example, I often played football there with my friends after school, which helped me make close friendships.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatically correct answer using present perfect or simple present to show continuity (e.g., 'I have had...since childhood'). State one reason why you kept the hobby and a specific example of how you practice it. Avoid repetitions and filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, I have had a passion for exercising since childhood. I continue to go to the gym and play sports because staying active improves my mood and health; for instance, I still work out three times a week.

Sugestão: Answer succinctly and clearly. Say whether your hobbies match your family's, then give one specific contrast or similarity with linking words like 'however' or 'for example'. Avoid unclear phrases and hesitations.

Exemplo: Not really. My family members do not usually exercise regularly; however, my grandfather enjoys daily walks, so I sometimes join him on weekends.

× I have lots of hobbies, but the most important hobby that I often use to perform is to going for a workout in the genes as well as out in the parks.

✓ I have lots of hobbies, but the most important one that I often do is going for a workout in the gym as well as out in the parks.

The phrase 'is to going' mixes infinitive 'to' with gerund 'going'. Use either 'is to go' (infinitive) or 'is going' (gerund). Here 'is going' fits conversational style: 'the most important one that I often do is going...'. Also corrected 'genes' to 'gym' and 'one' for clearer reference.

× Yes, I like to walk in extra.

✓ Yes, I like to walk outdoors.

'in extra' is incorrect. Use 'outdoors' or 'in addition' depending on meaning. For expressing walking outside, 'walk outdoors' is correct.

× Yes, I, uh, since from my childhood, I love to go for a walk as my parents said, you are fond of go, uh, for a home.

✓ Yes, since my childhood I have loved going for walks; my parents always said, 'You are fond of going for walks at home.'

Tense and tense form issues: 'since from my childhood' should be 'since my childhood'; 'I love to go' for an experience from past to present should be present perfect 'I have loved'. Also 'fond of go' requires 'fond of going'. Clarified 'at home' to make sense.

× Uh, yes, when I was a child, I used to go, uh, I remember that I used to go in a park and play a football with my colleagues or the.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I used to go to a park and play football with my friends.

Use 'go to a park' not 'go in a park'. 'Play a football' is incorrect article use for the sport; say 'play football'. 'Colleagues' is odd for children; 'friends' fits. 'Used to' correctly expresses past habitual actions; streamline repetition.

× Yeah, uh, working out or, uh, working in the gym or do exercise, uh, this hobby, uh, since from my childhood and till now, uh, it retain it retained and also as well as I love to work out because of this problem.

✓ Yes, working out, going to the gym, and exercising have been my hobbies since childhood and continue to be so; I also love to work out because it helps me stay healthy.

Use gerunds consistently for listing activities: 'working out, going to the gym, exercising'. 'Since from' should be 'since'. Use present perfect 'have been' for continuing states from past to present. 'It retain it retained' is ungrammatical; replace with 'continue to be so'. Added a clear reason 'helps me stay healthy' instead of 'this problem' which is unclear.

× Not quietly, uh, because in my family there's no, any such a type of rule that you have to work to work out or do you have to do exercises or go for a walk or something else, uh, like that.

✓ Not really, because in my family there's no rule that you must work out, exercise, or go for walks.

'Quietly' is wrong; use 'really'. Remove extra words 'any such a type of' for natural phrasing. 'You have to' should be 'you must' or 'you have to' but keep concise: 'there's no rule that you must...'. Pronouns and modal redundancy were confusing; simplified.

× But uh, uh, I quietly say my grandfather has to be, uh, obedient to, uh.

✓ But I would say my grandfather used to be very disciplined.

Original is vague and ungrammatical: 'I quietly say' is incorrect—use 'I would say' for opinion. 'has to be obedient to' is incomplete; likely intended 'used to be disciplined' or 'was very obedient/disciplined'. Chose 'used to be very disciplined' for clarity.