Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct: start with a clear topic sentence stating your current hobby, then give one or two brief reasons or details. Correct basic grammar (use past/present forms and articles) and avoid redundancy. Use linking words (for example, "but", "because", "so") to connect ideas. Keep the answer to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy going to the gym these days. I used to like drawing when I was younger, but I stopped because I was busy with my studies. Now I prefer the gym because it helps me relax and stay healthy.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence using correct verb forms ("used to draw"). Add one or two specific details and link them logically. Avoid vague phrases like "such"; instead describe what you drew or why it mattered. Keep it concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to draw when I was a child. I often went to the beach with my grandfather and sketched the waves and people playing, which helped me practise different shapes and perspectives.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clarify timeline. Use correct tense and clearer linking words ("however", "because"). Explain briefly what you switched to and why. Avoid vague phrases like "jumped after that".

Exemplo: No, I don't have a hobby I've kept since childhood. I used to draw, but I stopped because of my studies and later focused on gym workouts for fitness and stress relief.

Sugestão: Be concise and polite. State your situation clearly, correct prepositions and plurals, and give one brief consequence or example. Use linking words like "because" to explain. Avoid overly negative phrasing—keep it neutral.

Exemplo: I'm not sure if I share hobbies with my family because I'm not in regular contact with them. For example, I don't know if my siblings go to the gym or enjoy drawing, since we rarely speak.

× Well it depends on my thought.

✓ Well, it depends on my thoughts.

The noun 'thought' should be plural when referring to general opinions or ideas. Use 'thoughts' to match the meaning of changing opinions over time. Also add a comma after 'Well' for natural speech punctuation.

× It changed every time I remember I used to drawing but I stop pursue it and currently I prefer to go to the gym.

✓ It changed often; I remember I used to draw, but I stopped pursuing it, and currently I prefer to go to the gym.

Multiple issues: 'changed' and 'remember' require consistent past tense and better adverb choice ('often'). 'used to drawing' is incorrect: after 'used to' use the base verb 'draw'. 'stop pursue' should be past tense 'stopped pursuing' (use past tense + gerund for 'stop' when describing action that was ended). Add commas and semicolon for clarity.

× Yes, I used to drawing when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I used to draw when I was a kid.

'Used to' must be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'draw' not 'drawing'. The sentence describes a habitual past action, so 'used to draw' is correct.

× I remember I used to go to the beach with my grandfather and draw the beach and people there such.

✓ I remember I used to go to the beach with my grandfather and draw the beach and the people there.

'Such' is misplaced and unnecessary. Add article 'the' before 'people' to specify those people, and remove 'such'. This fixes sentence structure and makes the list of objects ('the beach and the people') parallel.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I don't.

'I don't have' is incomplete without an object (what the speaker does not have). In context, answering 'Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?' the short answer is 'No, I don't.' which implies 'do not' have such a hobby.

× As I told you, I used to drawing, but I stopped pursuing it because I was busy with my studies.

✓ As I told you, I used to draw, but I stopped pursuing it because I was busy with my studies.

Again, 'used to' requires the base verb 'draw', not the -ing form. The rest of the sentence uses correct tense and gerund 'pursuing' after 'stopped'.

× I didn't have much time, so I jumped after that to another.

✓ I didn't have much time, so I moved on to another hobby after that.

'Jumped after that to another' is unidiomatic. Use 'moved on to another hobby' to express transitioning to a different activity. This corrects verb choice and word order.

× Honestly, I don't know if I have the same hobbies with my family member or my siblings because I don't have a relation with them or hear anything about them.

✓ Honestly, I don't know if I have the same hobbies as my family members or my siblings because I am not in contact with them and haven't heard anything from them.

Use 'same hobbies as' rather than 'with'. 'Family member' should be plural 'family members' to match 'siblings'. 'I don't have a relation with them' is better expressed as 'I am not in contact with them'. 'Or hear anything about them' should be 'haven't heard anything from them' for correct tense and preposition.