Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise: correct word choice (e.g., 'loud music' or a genre), avoid redundancy, and keep sentences clear and within 3–4 short sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'also' and 'in addition') and give one specific detail about each hobby to make your answer vivid.

Exemplo: I have several hobbies. I enjoy listening to classical and pop music because it helps me relax after a busy day. I also play badminton twice a week to stay fit, and I like spending quality time with my husband, for example, when we cook together or go for evening walks.

Sugestão: Avoid unclear phrases and hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples and a brief reason or effect. Keep sentences short and use linking words like 'for example' or 'which' correctly.

Exemplo: Yes. As a child, I enjoyed playing hide-and-seek and football with my school friends. We played in the playground after school, which was fun and kept us active. These games helped me make friends and improve my coordination.

Sugestão: Be consistent and avoid contradictions. Answer directly (yes/no) and then explain briefly. Use correct verb tenses and plural forms, and give specific examples of how your interests changed. Limit to 2–4 clear sentences.

Exemplo: No, I don't have a hobby I've kept since childhood. When I was a child I enjoyed drawing and collecting stickers, but my interests changed as I grew up. Now I prefer listening to music and playing badminton, and I also enjoy spending time with my husband.

Sugestão: Use natural phrases and correct grammar. Start with a clear statement, then provide specific examples of shared hobbies and how you do them together. Avoid idioms that may sound unnatural and fix subject-verb agreement and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, my brother and I share many hobbies. We both enjoy playing badminton and often play together on weekends. We also like listening to music and watching movies in the evenings, which is a nice way for us to relax and bond.

× I enjoy listening to big music because it helps me to relax from the hustle and bustle of my life.

✓ I enjoy listening to loud music because it helps me relax from the hustle and bustle of my life.

The adjective 'big' is incorrect for describing sound; 'loud' is appropriate. Also, 'helps me to relax' is acceptable but 'helps me relax' is more natural. Suggestion: use correct collocations for sound (loud, soft, calm) and omit the optional 'to' after 'helps'.','grammar_problem_type_id':13},{

× I also sometimes love to play badminton and like to spend some quality time with my husband, especially when we are cooking and going for a walk together.

✓ I also sometimes enjoy playing badminton and like to spend quality time with my husband, especially when we cook or go for a walk together.

Use 'enjoy playing' rather than 'love to play' for smoother parallel structure, and use base verbs 'cook' and 'go' to match present simple habitual actions. Also 'some quality time' -> 'quality time' is more natural. Suggestion: keep verb forms parallel and use simple present for habits.

× Well it is a daunting task for me to know about the hobbies when what I was doing when I was a child.

✓ Well, it is difficult for me to remember what hobbies I had when I was a child.

The original sentence has awkward ordering and redundancy ('to know about the hobbies when what I was doing'). Use 'difficult to remember' and place 'when I was a child' at the end. Suggestion: simplify the idea and use correct verb 'remember' for past recollection.

× I think I love I usually love to play hide and seek and football with my school friends after school which was a fun and kept us active.

✓ I think I usually loved to play hide-and-seek and football with my school friends after school, which was fun and kept us active.

Mix of present and past tenses: talking about childhood requires past tense 'loved'. Also remove repeated 'I love I' and use hyphen 'hide-and-seek'. Use 'which was fun' not 'which was a fun'. Suggestion: keep past tense for past habits and avoid repetition.

× No, I don't think so. I have the same hobbies that I kept since childhood.

✓ No, I don't think so. I don't still have the same hobbies I had since childhood.

The sentence mixes present perfect with 'kept' incorrectly. If meaning is 'I do not have the same hobbies anymore', express it clearly: 'I don't still have the same hobbies I had since childhood' or 'I no longer have the same hobbies I had as a child.' Suggestion: use 'had' for past and 'no longer' or 'don't still' for negation about continuity.

× I think I enjoy drawing and collecting sticker when I was a child, but my interest has been changed as I grew up.

✓ I drew and collected stickers when I was a child, but my interests changed as I grew up.

Use past tense 'drew' and 'collected' for childhood activities. 'Sticker' should be plural 'stickers'. 'My interest has been changed' is passive and awkward; use active simple past 'my interests changed'. Suggestion: match number (stickers) and use simple past for completed past actions.

× Nowadays I love to listen to music, playing badminton, sometimes spending quality time with my husband because I have a different.

✓ Nowadays I love listening to music, playing badminton, and sometimes spending quality time with my husband because my interests are different.

Maintain parallel gerund forms: 'listening', 'playing', 'spending'. The clause 'because I have a different' is incomplete; specify 'my interests are different'. Suggestion: use parallel -ing forms and complete the comparative clause.

× I think me and my brother ride on the same boat.

✓ I think my brother and I are in the same boat.

Use subject pronoun order 'my brother and I' not 'me and my brother', and 'are in the same boat' is the correct idiom. Suggestion: put others before self and use subject pronoun 'I'.

× He also have a same interest that I have.

✓ He also has the same interests that I have.

Subject 'He' requires 'has' (third person singular). Use 'the same interests' (plural) or 'the same interest' with 'the'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject and use article 'the' with 'same'.

× Like I I love to play badminton sometimes and he left to play badminton with me as well and we both love to listen to the music and watching movies together.

✓ For example, I sometimes love to play badminton and he likes to play badminton with me as well, and we both love to listen to music and watch movies together.

Remove duplicated 'I I'. 'He left to play' is wrong; use 'he likes to play' or 'he comes to play'. Maintain parallel verbs: 'listen' and 'watch' (not 'watching') and omit 'the' before 'music'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct verbs for preference ('likes'), and keep parallel verb forms.