Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the hobby, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (plural/singular), and give one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Keep answers to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy reading, especially scientific books. For example, I recently finished a book on neuroscience that helped me understand how memory works, and this knowledge has improved my study methods.

Sugestão: Use past tense for childhood activities and correct verb forms. Give a clear topic sentence, then a specific reason or example using linking words like "because" or "for example." Avoid irrelevant or conflicting time references (e.g., "last week" when talking about childhood).

Exemplo: When I was a child, I loved swimming, especially with my cousins. We swam because it improved our fitness and helped us relax, and I remember practicing every summer at my grandparents' pool.

Sugestão: Answer with a clear topic sentence using correct tense and noun forms ("swimming" not "swim"). Avoid confusing or unclear claims (e.g., "pro player" and "rewards" need specifics). Provide one concise supporting detail with logical linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I have been swimming since childhood. In fact, I compete in local meets now, which motivates me to stay fit and has improved my overall health.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer about similarity, then support with a specific comparison. Use correct grammar (e.g., "we don't share the same hobbies", "my brother prefers walking"). Avoid excessive hesitations and irrelevant details ("dentist").

Exemplo: Not really; we have different interests. For example, I enjoy reading and swimming, whereas my brother prefers walking alone and spending time outdoors rather than joining group activities.

× one of the interesting hobby is, uh, reading books, especially scientific books, which helped me to improve my knowledge and, uh, my, uh, experience and the life.

✓ one of the interesting hobbies is reading books, especially scientific books, which help me to improve my knowledge, my experience, and my life.

The noun 'hobby' should be plural after 'one of the' (rule: 'one of the' + plural noun). Also 'which helped' should be 'which help' to match the present habit (present tense) since reading is ongoing; maintain consistent present tense. Removed filler words and added commas for clarity.

× For example, the last, uh, three time I had, I always, I was reading.

✓ For example, in the last three times I had, I was always reading.

The phrase 'the last three time' needs plural 'times'. The placement of 'always' was awkward; 'I was always reading' uses past continuous which suits repeated past contexts. Adjusted word order for natural English.

× Honestly when I was a child I prefer to swimming a lot, especially with my cousins because they told me to improve my hour fitness and also be relaxed all the day for example last week for example.

✓ Honestly, when I was a child I preferred swimming a lot, especially with my cousins because they told me it would improve my overall fitness and help me relax all day.

When referring to past habits, use past tense 'preferred' not present 'prefer'. 'Prefer to swimming' is incorrect: after 'prefer' use gerund 'swimming' or 'to swim'; here 'preferred swimming' is natural. 'Hour fitness' is incorrect; likely 'overall fitness'. 'Be relaxed all the day' corrected to 'help me relax all day'. Removed duplicate 'for example' and streamlined sentence.

× I definitely think swim is uh my hobby I had since childhood.

✓ I definitely think swimming is my hobby that I have had since childhood.

Use the gerund 'swimming' as a noun for hobbies. 'I had since childhood' should be present perfect 'I have had since childhood' to show a state continuing to the present.

× Uh, right now I being a pro player and swimming and had rewards that nobody had uh told me to be fitness all the day and relax and improve my over health, my overhealth.

✓ Right now I am a pro swimmer and I have won awards; nobody told me to be fit all the time, but swimming helps me relax and improve my overall health.

'I being' is incorrect; use 'I am'. 'Pro player and swimming' -> 'pro swimmer'. 'Had rewards' should be 'have won awards' (present perfect). 'Told me to be fitness all the day' is ungrammatical: 'told me to be fit all the time' or better 'nobody told me to be fit all the time'. 'Over health' not correct; use 'overall health'. Adjusted sentence structure for clarity.

× Actually, it depends on the person, like, uh, some, uh, some people prefer reading compared of uh, swimming or something like that.

✓ Actually, it depends on the person; some people prefer reading compared to swimming or something like that.

The correct preposition is 'compared to' (or 'compared with') not 'compared of'. Removed duplicate 'some' and filler words for clarity.

× But in my family that we didn't sharing the same hobbies, uh, as my brother preferred to walking along, uh, dentist instead of me.

✓ But in my family we do not all share the same hobbies; for example, my brother prefers walking with the dentist instead of me.

The original had incorrect clause 'that we didn't sharing' and wrong tense/verb forms. Use 'we do not all share' or 'we don't share the same hobbies'. 'Preferred to walking' should be 'prefers walking' (prefer + gerund). The phrase 'walking along, dentist' unclear; assumed 'walking with the dentist' but clarify if meaning differs. Adjusted sentence structure and tense for grammatical correctness.