Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., 'sometimes', 'experiment', 'helps'). Avoid repeating the same idea (exploring new places) twice.

Exemplo: Yes, I have several hobbies. For example, I play badminton regularly with my brother because it keeps me fit and energized. I also enjoy cooking new cuisines sometimes, which allows me to experiment with flavours and relax.

Sugestão: Use simple past consistently for past habits and improve sentence structure. Give one clear topic sentence about childhood hobbies, then add a specific example and a short reason. Avoid mixing tenses in the same sentence.

Exemplo: Yes, I had several hobbies when I was a child. For instance, I used to dance and sing regularly, which made me feel energetic and happy. I also began cooking simple dishes with my parents, which is why I still enjoy cooking today.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clean up grammar. Use present perfect or present simple to show continuity (e.g., 'I've enjoyed cooking since I was a child' or 'I have cooked since childhood'). Give one specific example of what you still do and a short reason why.

Exemplo: Yes, I have enjoyed cooking since I was a child. I still like experimenting with recipes — for example, I often try new sauces or spice combinations — because cooking relaxes me and I love tasting different foods.

Sugestão: Use correct pronouns and possessive forms, and add linking words to make it coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly contrast with specific examples of family members' hobbies and reasons.

Exemplo: No, my hobbies are different from my family members'. For example, my father enjoys reading books because it helps him stay informed, while my brother prefers playing cricket to stay active.

× Firstly, I like to play badminton with my brother regularly which keeps me fit and energizes.

✓ Firstly, I like to play badminton with my brother regularly, which keeps me fit and energizes me.

The verb 'energizes' requires an object here; adding 'me' completes the verb's transitive sense. Also add a comma before 'which' to introduce the non-restrictive relative clause. Suggestion: Include the object for transitive verbs and punctuate the relative clause correctly.

× Even sometime I cook different cuisines just to experiments and even I love to travel in different places a lot which help me to explore new places.

✓ Sometimes I cook different cuisines just to experiment, and I also love to travel to many places, which helps me explore new places.

Multiple issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'experiments' should be the verb 'experiment' after 'to'. 'even I love' is awkward; use 'I also love'. Use 'travel to' not 'travel in', and 'a lot' is informal and redundant with 'many'; 'which help' must agree with singular 'which' referring to 'travel' or plural 'traveling' so use 'helps me explore'. Suggestion: Use correct adverb forms, the infinitive after 'to', proper preposition 'to' with 'travel', and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, when I was a child I was having variety of hobbies like dancing which keeps me active or even singing.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a variety of hobbies like dancing, which kept me active, and singing.

Use simple past 'had' rather than 'was having' for habitual past. Add 'a' before 'variety'. Relative clause should use past 'kept' to match past time frame. Use commas to separate items. Suggestion: Use simple past for past habits and add appropriate articles and punctuation.

× I used to sing different songs which makes me feel happy and even I love to cook different cuisines as now I am following it.

✓ I used to sing different songs, which made me feel happy, and I still love to cook different cuisines as I do now.

'Used to' refers to past habit, so the relative clause should use past 'made'. 'Even I love' should be 'and I still love'. 'As now I am following it' is awkward; replace with 'as I do now' to show continuation. Suggestion: Match tense with 'used to' and use clearer phrasing for ongoing habits.

× Yes, as I have said you earlier that when I was a child I used to cook different cuisines and doing experiments regarding different dishes.

✓ Yes, as I told you earlier, when I was a child I used to cook different cuisines and experiment with different dishes.

'As I have said you earlier' is incorrect word order and tense; use 'as I told you earlier'. After 'used to' use the base verb 'cook' and parallel structure: 'experiment' rather than 'doing experiments'. Use 'experiment with' for phrasing. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and maintain parallel verb structure.

× So cooking is a hobby which I still follow today and which makes me feel happy and I love to eat food a lot.

✓ So cooking is a hobby I still follow today; it makes me feel happy, and I love to eat.

Avoid repetitive 'which' clauses and awkward 'eat food a lot'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity, and 'eat' suffices without 'food a lot'. Suggestion: Simplify sentences, avoid redundancy, and use concise expressions.

× No, me and my family members do not have same hobbies.

✓ No, my family members and I do not have the same hobbies.

Subject pronoun order: 'my family members and I' is correct; 'me' is an object pronoun and incorrect as subject. Add 'the' before 'same hobbies' or 'the' optional but include 'the same hobbies' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: Use subject pronouns in subject position and natural word order.

× Firstly my father hobby is to read books which help him to stay updated and my brother favorite hobby is to play cricket which makes him active.

✓ Firstly, my father's hobby is reading books, which helps him stay updated, and my brother's favorite hobby is playing cricket, which keeps him active.

Use possessive forms 'father's' and 'brother's'. Use gerunds 'reading' and 'playing' for hobbies. 'Which help' must agree with singular 'reading books', so 'helps'. 'Makes him active' is better as 'keeps him active'. Add commas for clause separation. Suggestion: Use possessives for 'X's hobby', gerund forms for activities, and ensure subject-verb agreement in relative clauses.