Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers (uh), correct grammar (e.g. “I am an introverted person”), and give one or two specific examples to support your point. Keep answers to a maximum of five sentences and use linking words like “however” or “but” to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I’m quite introverted, so I don’t enjoy small talk. However, I do chat with friends when it’s meaningful, such as discussing plans or sharing important news. For instance, I usually message a close friend when I need advice about work.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and specific details. Fix grammar (e.g. “we discuss students’ levels” or “how to improve our lesson plans”) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “for example” or “in addition” to organize supporting details.

Exemplo: Mostly we talk about work-related topics because I’m a teacher. For example, we discuss students’ levels and ways to improve our lesson plans. In addition, we sometimes share personal experiences from our day to unwind.

Sugestão: Lead with a direct answer, then give a reason and a specific example. Correct small errors (“I identify as an introvert”), avoid repeated words, and use linking words like “but” and “for example” to clarify contrast and illustration.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting in small groups rather than one-on-one. Although I’m introverted, I enjoy inclusive gatherings because they feel relaxed; for example, we often play Uno and chat about work and hobbies while playing.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct grammar (“I prefer to communicate face-to-face”), remove filler repeats, and add a concise reason using linking words like “because” or “so”. Limit to three sentences maximum.

Exemplo: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I’m camera-shy and dislike seeing myself on screen. Also, face-to-face interaction lets me read facial cues and emotions, which makes conversation more meaningful.

Sugestão: Give a clear, natural response and avoid contradictory or confusing phrasing. Correct grammar (“I don’t argue with my friends”) and be specific about why you avoid arguments, using one or two supporting reasons. Avoid excessive repetition and unclear metaphors.

Exemplo: No, I don’t usually argue with my friends because I prefer to keep relationships peaceful. If disagreements arise, we try to resolve them calmly by listening and finding compromises rather than having heated arguments.

× Well to be honest I am much uh, introverted person.

✓ Well, to be honest, I am quite an introverted person.

'Much' is not the typical adverb to modify a negatable adjective in this context; 'quite' or 'very' is natural. Also 'introverted person' needs the indefinite article 'an' before a vowel-starting adjective. Add commas for clarity.

× I don't like chatting on frivolous things and topics and I am not like a big fan of small talk.

✓ I don't like chatting about frivolous things or topics, and I'm not a big fan of small talk.

Use 'about' with 'chatting', not 'on'. Use 'or' to link similar nouns. 'I am not like a big fan' is ungrammatical; use 'I'm not a big fan'. Also combine clauses with a comma before 'and' for clarity.

× Also I actually interact with others but based on need.

✓ Also, I actually interact with others only when necessary.

'Based on need' is awkward; 'only when necessary' is a natural idiom. Add a comma after 'Also'.

× If I am being honest it's mostly about work and students because I'm a teacher so we always discuss about students levels and how to improve our lesson plans.

✓ If I'm being honest, it's mostly about work and students because I'm a teacher, so we always discuss students' levels and how to improve our lesson plans.

Remove 'about' after 'discuss' (discuss is transitive). Use the possessive form 'students' levels' for levels belonging to students. Add commas for clause separation.

× Also talking about talking and exchanging opinions about our own days, experience, experience, day, days.

✓ We also talk and exchange opinions about our days and experiences.

Sentence contains repetition and awkward structure. Simplify using 'talk and exchange opinions about our days and experiences.' Use plural 'experiences' for generality.

× Also, I identify myself as an introvert person but I actually like inclusivity.

✓ Also, I identify as an introverted person, but I actually like inclusivity.

'Identify myself as' is less natural than 'identify as'. Use 'an introverted person' (article and adjective form). Add comma before 'but'.

× I would love to to talk with friends in groups and playing while talking.

✓ I would love to talk with friends in groups and play while talking.

After 'would love to' use the base verb 'talk' not 'to talk'. Parallel structure requires 'play' (base form) to match 'talk' rather than 'playing'.

× For example playing Uno while talking about our work.

✓ For example, playing Uno while talking about our work.

Add a comma after 'For example' for clarity. The rest of the phrase is acceptable.

× To be honest, I'm a camera shy person, I don't like to see my face on screen so I prefer communicate face to face and this way I can actually analyze and feel the other person's emotion and facial cues so it it will be much more helpful and stimulating.

✓ To be honest, I'm camera-shy; I don't like to see my face on screen, so I prefer to communicate face to face. This way I can actually analyze and feel the other person's emotions and facial cues, so it will be much more helpful and stimulating.

Use 'camera-shy' with a hyphen and no article. Use 'prefer to communicate' (include 'to'). Separate into shorter sentences for clarity; use plural 'emotions' and correct duplicated 'it it' to single 'it'.

× I would say no, never. I never agree argue with my friends.

✓ I would say no, never. I never argue with my friends.

'Agree argue' is incorrect; likely intended 'argue'. Remove 'agree' to form 'I never argue with my friends.'

× I actually don't like arguing about superficial things and I think everything in this world is superficial so I don't I don't actually think that arguing has a good impact and bring such lovely what talks.

✓ I don't like arguing about superficial things, and I think many issues in this world are superficial. I don't actually think that arguing has a positive impact or leads to constructive conversations.

Remove repetition 'I don't I don't'. 'Has a good impact and bring such lovely what talks' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'has a positive impact or leads to constructive conversations.' Use commas to separate clauses.