Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and small errors (e.g., "I feeling" → "I feel", "go walk or for a walk" → "go for a walk").

Exemplo: It depends on my mood. If I feel energetic, I can chat with friends for hours because it helps me relax and catch up. However, when I’m tired I prefer to go for a walk alone to recharge.

Sugestão: Organize your response with a clear topic sentence then list specific topics concisely. Use linking words like "for example" or "mainly" and avoid repeating phrases ("about" twice). Improve grammar: "work or even study" → "work or studies".

Exemplo: I usually chat with my close friends about personal matters. For example, we talk mainly about my private life, my work, and sometimes my studies.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct topic sentence and tighten the explanation. Correct minor grammar: add "to" after "prefer" and avoid redundant phrases like "alone only with my one friend." Add a linking word such as "because" or "so" and give a brief reason or example.

Exemplo: I prefer to chat with one friend rather than in a group because I’m introverted; when it’s just one person I can relax and speak openly about personal topics.

Sugestão: Make the conditional structure clearer and fix articles and word order ("depends on the person"). Use linking words and be more specific about why you prefer each mode. Avoid vague phrases like "my the closest one."

Exemplo: It depends on the person. If someone is very close to me, I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows more open and honest conversation; for acquaintances I usually use social media for convenience.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words ("umm") and finish your thought. Start with a clear topic sentence and then give one specific example with a short explanation of the outcome or reason. Keep it concise and grammatical.

Exemplo: Yes, occasionally. For example, I once argued with a roommate about keeping the house clean; we resolved it by agreeing on a cleaning schedule so the problem didn’t continue.

× If I am in the right mood and I feeling energetic, I can chat with my friends for hours because it helps me to relax and catch up.

✓ If I am in the right mood and I feel energetic, I can chat with my friends for hours because it helps me to relax and catch up.

The verb 'feeling' is a present participle and incorrectly used here; the correct finite verb form is 'feel' to match the present simple structure with 'I'. Use 'I feel' not 'I feeling'. Suggestion: use the simple present verb after 'I' for habitual or conditional statements: 'I feel'.

× But when I'm tired or low on energy I prefer to go walk or for a walk alone to recharge.

✓ But when I'm tired or low on energy I prefer to go for a walk alone to recharge.

The phrase 'go walk' mixes base verb forms incorrectly; the correct idiom is 'go for a walk' using the noun 'walk' with the preposition 'for'. Also remove redundant 'or' before 'for a walk'. Suggestion: use 'go for a walk' or 'take a walk'.

× I usually chat with my close friends about anything such as my private life, my work or even study maybe I chat with them about mostly about my private life.

✓ I usually chat with my close friends about various things, such as my private life, my work or my studies; mostly I talk about my private life.

The original has redundancy ('about mostly about'), incorrect noun form 'study' instead of 'studies', and awkward quantifier 'anything' with examples. Use 'various things' and plural 'studies' when referring generally to academic matters. Also split into clearer clauses. Suggestion: avoid repeating 'about' and use plural 'studies' for general reference.

× I would prefer chat with only one friend rather than a group of people because I am an introverted person and when I am alone only with my one friend, I can relax and talk about anything openly.

✓ I would prefer to chat with only one friend rather than a group of people because I am an introverted person, and when I am alone with just one friend, I can relax and talk openly about anything.

The verb 'prefer' requires 'to' before the following verb: 'prefer to chat'. Also 'my one friend' is unnatural; 'just one friend' or 'a single friend' is better. Word order 'talk about anything openly' is improved to 'talk openly about anything'. Suggestion: use the infinitive 'prefer to + verb' and prefer natural phrasing like 'just one friend'.

× I suppose it depends on person. Like if the person is my the closest one I would prefer to communicate face to face to speak more openly.

✓ I suppose it depends on the person. For example, if the person is one of my closest friends, I would prefer to communicate face to face so I can speak more openly.

Missing article 'the' before 'person' and incorrect phrase 'my the closest one'. Also use 'face to face' correctly and 'so I can' to show purpose. 'Like' is conversational; 'for example' is clearer in formal correction. Suggestion: include necessary articles ('the person'), use 'one of my closest friends' for clarity, and express purpose with 'so I can'.

× But if it's not my close person I choose social media.

✓ But if it's not someone close to me, I choose social media.

'My close person' is not natural English; use 'someone close to me'. Also contracting 'it is' to 'it's' is acceptable but ensure pronoun reference is clear. Suggestion: use 'someone close to me' or 'a close friend'.

× Actually, yes, but not often. Umm, I remember the last time I argued with my friend about umm, household things like umm, keeping the house clean and.

✓ Actually, yes, but not often. I remember the last time I argued with my friend about household things, such as keeping the house clean.

The original ends with a trailing 'and' and filler words 'umm' make the sentence incomplete. Remove fillers and the dangling conjunction 'and' and finish the list properly with 'such as'. Suggestion: avoid fillers in spoken answers for clarity and ensure lists are completed without trailing conjunctions.