Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Keep the answer direct but make it more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar (e.g., 'advise me' not 'advice for me'). Limit to up to 3–4 short sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially at the weekend. I feel more relaxed and happier when we talk because they give me useful advice and emotional support. That's why I look forward to our conversations.

Sugestão: Be specific and organized. Start with a topic sentence naming main topics, then give one specific example using linking words (for example, 'for instance' or 'also'). Avoid vague phrases like 'I think so.'

Exemplo: I usually chat about food and everyday events. For example, we often discuss new restaurants we tried or recipes for home cooking. We also talk about things that happened at work or school.

Sugestão: Make the comparison clearer and use correct grammar. Begin with a direct preference sentence, then explain with a specific reason and one brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Avoid repetition ('advice' only once).

Exemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because there are more perspectives and stories to hear. For example, if I need help deciding something, several friends can offer different suggestions, which helps me choose.

Sugestão: Express your preference clearly and reduce hesitation. Give one clear reason and one specific example of what you can do online. Replace filler words like 'uh' and avoid repeating words. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel less nervous than speaking face-to-face. For example, I can take my time to think about messages and share photos or links easily, which makes conversations easier for me.

Sugestão: This answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. State a clear response, then briefly explain with a specific reason or example. Use simple correct sentences and avoid unfinished thoughts.

Exemplo: No, I don't argue with my friends often. We usually get along well and resolve small disagreements quickly by talking them through.

× Yes I do, I really love chatting with my friends especially on the weekend because when I chat with them I can feel more relaxed and happier and also they can advice for me and support for me.

✓ Yes, I do. I really love chatting with my friends, especially on weekends, because when I chat with them I feel more relaxed and happier, and they can give me advice and support.

Errors: run-on sentence and incorrect use of 'advice' as a verb and repetition 'for me'. Also missing commas. Suggestions: split into two or more sentences, use 'give me advice' (advice is a noun), remove redundant 'for me', and use plural 'weekends' for habitual actions.

× To be honest, I usually chat about foods. Someone or something happen in my daily life with my friends. I think so.

✓ To be honest, I usually chat about food. I talk about things or events that happen in my daily life with my friends.

Errors: 'foods' is incorrect when talking about the general topic 'food' (uncountable). 'Someone or something happen' has subject-verb agreement and awkward phrasing. Suggestions: use 'food' for general category, and rephrase to 'things or events that happen' with correct verb 'happen' matching plural subject 'things or events'.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people more than only one friend, because in a Group A have many people and they can tell many stories and when I need some advice they can give me various advice.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than with only one friend, because a group has many people who can tell many stories, and when I need advice they can give me various suggestions.

Errors: awkward comparative 'more than only one friend' and incorrect structure 'in a Group A have many people' (subject-verb agreement). Repetition 'many advice' and 'various advice' misuse of 'advice' (uncountable). Suggestions: use 'rather than', 'a group has', and replace one 'advice' with 'suggestions' or 'pieces of advice'.

× I prefer to communicate via social media rather than face to face, uh, because actually I am not confident to talk face to face with someone. Uh, and in the social media I can talk anything, anything.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media rather than face to face because I am not confident speaking face to face with someone. Also, on social media I can talk about anything.

Errors: awkward infinitive 'to talk face to face' better as 'speaking face to face'; unnecessary 'the' before 'social media'; 'talk anything' requires 'talk about anything'. Suggestions: use gerund after 'confident' ('confident speaking'), omit 'the', and include 'about' with 'anything'.

× No, I don't. The argue very hard happens between me and my friends because we have many.

✓ No, I don't. Serious arguments rarely happen between my friends and me because we get along well.

Errors: 'The argue very hard' is ungrammatical; incorrect noun/verb forms and wrong word order. 'Between me and my friends' is acceptable but 'between my friends and me' is more natural. 'Because we have many' is incomplete. Suggestions: use 'serious arguments' (noun), 'rarely happen' (verb), and complete the reason ('we get along well') or specify what 'many' refers to.