Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be natural, concise and relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (like), correct word choice (e.g. strengthen our bond, not bones), and keep to 2–3 supporting details. Use one linking word if adding a reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends online. It helps us stay in touch even when we are busy, and we can quickly share news or support each other when needed.

Sugestão: Respond directly and structure your answer: give a topic sentence, then 1–2 specific supporting details with clear linking words. Avoid repetition and grammar errors (e.g. “discuss” → “discussions”; “present a presentation” → “give presentations”).

Exemplo: We usually talk about our schoolwork. For example, we discuss exam preparation and share ideas for group projects, so we can divide tasks and improve our grades.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference first, then one reason with correct grammar. Avoid hesitation and repetition. Use linking words like “because” and concise phrasing (e.g. “share secrets” not “discuss secrets which each other”).

Exemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I feel more comfortable sharing personal matters, and I trust that a single close friend will keep my confidence.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then give 1–2 concise reasons. Watch word choice and avoid odd phrases (e.g. “strengthen our sports” is incorrect). Use linking words such as “because” or “so” and correct comparative forms (e.g. “closer” not “more closer”).

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because personal interaction helps build trust and allows us to read body language, which makes relationships closer.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then explain briefly with a clear result. Remove filler words and correct grammar (e.g. “have a debate” not “make an debated”; “we learn more about each other” not “we knew more”). Keep to 2–3 sentences max.

Exemplo: Occasionally we argue when problems arise. However, these discussions usually help us understand each other better and strengthen our friendship afterwards.

× Absolutely, I'm a big fan of like chatting with my friends through the online platforms because that our friendship can be more closer and like we can strengthen our bones more effectively.

✓ Absolutely, I'm a big fan of chatting with my friends on online platforms because our friendship can become closer and we can strengthen our bonds more effectively.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'through the online platforms' -> 'on online platforms'; unnecessary filler 'like'; wrong determiner 'that'; comparative phrase 'more closer' is incorrect; 'strengthen our bones' is a word choice error — should be 'bonds'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary fillers, use 'on' for platforms, use 'become closer' or 'closer' without 'more', and use 'bonds' for relationships.

× Normally I could chat with my friends about our academic performance at school because we have a lot of discuss and I think that's good.

✓ Normally I chat with my friends about our academic performance at school because we have a lot to discuss and I think that's good.

Problems: modal 'could' is unnecessary here (present habitual) -> use simple present 'chat' (present tense issue but listed as quantifier here because 'a lot of discuss' is incorrect); 'a lot of discuss' is wrong phrase; correct is 'a lot to discuss' or 'many discussions'. Suggestion: use 'a lot to discuss' or 'many discussions' and use simple present for routines.

× Nowadays is like kind of busy and have a lot of workload for us to like discuss and we even have to like present a presentation so that.

✓ Nowadays we are quite busy and have a heavy workload to discuss, and we even have to give presentations.

Problems: missing subject 'we' after 'Nowadays'; filler 'like' repeated; 'have a lot of workload' -> 'have a heavy workload' or 'a lot of work'; 'present a presentation' is redundant -> 'give presentations'. Suggestion: include the subject, remove filler words, use natural collocations like 'heavy workload' and 'give presentations'.

× I could like to chat with only one of my friends because that we often discuss secrets which each other so that I I I would like to I would like to have my secret being kept rather than being like revealed to anyone.

✓ I prefer to chat with just one friend because we often discuss secrets with each other, and I would like my secrets to be kept rather than revealed to anyone.

Problems: 'could like to' is incorrect modal and structure -> use 'prefer' or 'would like'; 'that we often discuss secrets which each other' has wrong relative structure and preposition -> 'discuss secrets with each other'; 'have my secret being kept' uses wrong passive form -> 'have my secrets kept' or 'my secrets to be kept'. Suggestion: use 'prefer', correct 'with each other', and use 'to be kept' or 'kept' in passive constructions; remove repeated fillers.

× I could gravitate towards face to face communications because when we interact like personally and directly, we can like really strengthen our friendships as well as our sports and we can eventually become more closer.

✓ I tend to gravitate toward face-to-face communication because when we interact personally and directly, we can really strengthen our friendships and become closer.

Problems: 'could gravitate towards' is awkward -> 'tend to gravitate toward' or 'prefer'; 'communications' should be uncountable 'communication'; 'like' fillers; 'as well as our sports' is incorrect word choice -> likely 'social bonds' or omit; 'become more closer' -> 'become closer'. Suggestion: use 'toward' (US) or 'towards' (UK) consistently, use 'communication', remove filler words, and use 'become closer'.

× From time to time, whenever we encounter some problems, we can like make an debated or even a heated argument and after that like we knew more, we know more about each other and our friendships become more closer.

✓ From time to time, whenever we encounter problems, we may have a debate or even a heated argument, and after that we learn more about each other and our friendships become closer.

Problems: 'can like make an debated' is ungrammatical; use 'may have a debate' or 'have a debate'; tense inconsistency 'we knew more, we know more' -> use present 'we learn more'; 'more closer' incorrect comparative. Suggestion: use 'may' for possibility, 'have a debate' or 'a heated argument', maintain consistent tense, and use 'closer' not 'more closer'.