Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one specific supporting detail. Use correct verbs and prepositions (e.g., 'chat with each other', 'share interests and photos').

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It lets us stay connected when we can't meet in person, and we often share photos and updates about our lives.

Sugestão: Organize the answer: give a topic sentence then two clear examples. Use correct tense and avoid filler words like 'like'. Be specific (e.g., types of study problems or dishes) and use linking words such as 'for example' and 'also'.

Exemplo: I usually talk about my studies and food. For example, I often ask friends for help with difficult homework problems, and I also discuss what meals I cooked or plan to cook.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear preference sentence, then give concise reasons using linking words (because, so). Correct word choice ('private message', 'directly') and avoid repetition. Provide one or two specific scenarios showing why you prefer one-to-one chats.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's more private and I can speak directly. For example, I discuss personal problems or ask for detailed help in a private message rather than in a group chat.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences and provide a concrete example showing emotional nuance (e.g., needing support).

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more personal and you can show emotions. For instance, when I have a bad day I prefer meeting a friend so they can see I'm upset and give a hug.

Sugestão: Keep answers natural and avoid disfluent repetitions. Give a clear topic sentence, then explain frequency and reasons with specific examples. Use correct noun/verb forms ('argue', 'arguments') and limit to a few sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, we do argue sometimes because we are close and comfortable with each other. For example, we often disagree about which food to order, who plays in a football game, or how to divide study tasks, but we quickly make up.

× Yes, of course I do like chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, of course I like chatting with my friends.

Using 'do' for emphasis is possible but unnecessary here; simple present 'I like' is more natural in this context. Use auxiliary 'do' only for emphasis or questions. Suggestion: say 'I like chatting with my friends.'

× We can chat each other and ensure our interest and photo to each other without even like meeting each other physically.

✓ We can message each other and share our interests and photos without meeting physically.

The reflexive phrase 'chat each other' is incorrect; use 'message each other' or 'chat with each other'. 'Ensure our interest and photo to each other' is ungrammatical; use 'share our interests and photos'. Remove filler 'like'. Suggestion: 'We can message each other and share our interests and photos without meeting physically.'

× Oh that's an interesting question.

✓ Oh, that's an interesting question.

Missing comma after introductory interjection. Also contraction 'that's' is fine. Suggestion: include comma for correct punctuation to reflect natural pause.

× I usually chat about like food or something that I struggle while I'm studying.

✓ I usually chat about food or things I struggle with while studying.

The filler 'like' is unnecessary. Use 'things I struggle with' rather than 'something that I struggle'. 'While I'm studying' can be shortened to 'while studying' for concision. Suggestion: 'I usually chat about food or things I struggle with while studying.'

× If there is a tough question that I don't know how to solve it I sent to to my friends and I told them if anyone can help me.

✓ If there is a tough question I don't know how to solve, I send it to my friends and ask if anyone can help me.

Mixed tenses and wrong verb forms: 'sent' is past but context requires present 'send'. 'it' was missing after 'solve'. 'I told them' should be 'ask' for present habit. Remove duplicate 'to'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions: 'I send it to my friends and ask if anyone can help me.'

× Moreover, I chat with them about the food like see what did I make? What do I will make?

✓ Moreover, I chat with them about food, like what I made or what I will make.

Interrogative word order 'what did I make?' is incorrect inside reported speech; use statement order 'what I made'. 'What do I will make?' mixes auxiliary 'do' with future 'will' incorrectly; use 'what I will make'. Suggestion: 'what I made or what I will make.'

× Actually I prefer to chat with only one friend, like chatting with a group chat, it's very hard like I want to speak to direct to someone.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat with only one friend; chatting in a group is difficult because I want to speak directly to someone.

Awkward phrasing: 'chatting with a group chat' is redundant. Use 'chatting in a group'. 'it's very hard like I want to speak to direct to someone' should be 'difficult because I want to speak directly to someone'. Suggestion: simplify and use 'directly' adverb and a clear connector 'because'.

× If I send him a message on a group everyone will see this match at no.

✓ If I send him a message in a group, everyone will see it.

'on a group' should be 'in a group'. 'this match at no' is meaningless; likely meant 'it'. Remove unclear fragment. Suggestion: 'If I send him a message in a group, everyone will see it.'

× I need some privacy, I need a private chat that only me and my friend who talk about that something only.

✓ I need some privacy; I need a private chat that only my friend and I use to talk about certain things.

Subject pronoun order and form: use 'my friend and I', not 'only me and my friend'. 'who talk about that something only' is ungrammatical; use 'to talk about certain things' or 'about private matters'. Suggestion: 'a private chat that only my friend and I use to talk about certain things.'

× Of course, without hesitation, I would love to communicate face to face.

✓ Of course, without hesitation, I would love to communicate face to face.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable; keep as is. Use 'face-to-face' hyphen in writing, but allowed. No change needed.

× Communication in chat is good, but actually it's not accurate.

✓ Communicating by chat is convenient, but it is not always accurate.

'Communication in chat' is awkward; use 'communicating by chat' or 'chatting'. 'actually it's not accurate' is vague; 'not always accurate' is clearer. Suggestion: 'Communicating by chat is convenient, but it is not always accurate.'

× Like I want to tell. I want to tell my friend some something.

✓ For example, I might want to tell my friend something.

Fragments and repetition: 'Like I want to tell.' is a sentence fragment. 'some something' is incorrect. Combine into one complete sentence: 'I might want to tell my friend something.' Suggestion: avoid starting sentences with 'Like' in formal speech and ensure complete clause.

× I need a hug.

✓ I need a hug.

Grammatically correct; no change needed.

× I was very like had a very tough days.

✓ I had a very tough day.

Wrong verb structure and pluralization: 'I was very like had' is ungrammatical; use simple past 'I had'. 'a very tough days' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'a very tough day' or 'very tough days'. Suggestion: 'I had a very tough day.'

× My friend will not feel that I have that with chat, but she will feel when she saw me like I'm.

✓ My friend will not feel that through chat, but she will when she sees me in person.

Use 'through chat' rather than 'with chat'. Tense consistency: 'she will feel when she saw me' mixes future and past; use 'she will when she sees me'. 'like I'm' is incomplete; replace with 'in person.' Suggestion: 'My friend will not feel that through chat, but she will when she sees me in person.'

× Yes, of course. I argue with my friends a myriad of times.

✓ Yes, of course. I have argued with my friends many times.

'A myriad of times' is acceptable but formal; more natural is 'many times'. Use present perfect 'have argued' to indicate experience up to now. Suggestion: 'I have argued with my friends many times.'

× I, I'm, I'm on, I, I'm on. I'm an argumentative person.

✓ I am an argumentative person.

Disfluent fillers 'I, I'm...' are spoken hesitations; in corrected grammar, keep the clear sentence 'I am an argumentative person.' Suggestion: avoid fillers in formal responses.

× Actually, I would love to argument in anything.

✓ Actually, I would love to argue about anything.

'Argument' is a noun; the correct verb is 'argue'. Preposition 'in' should be 'about'. Suggestion: 'I would love to argue about anything.'

× And my friend is we are so close together.

✓ My friends and I are very close.

Original is ungrammatical and confusing. Use clear subject 'My friends and I' and 'are very close' for correct agreement and natural phrasing. Suggestion: 'My friends and I are very close.'

× So everything we need to we arguments together about the food, playing football, studying and even watching.

✓ So we argue about everything together: food, playing football, studying, and even watching (movies or shows).

Incorrect noun form 'we arguments' should be 'we argue' or 'arguments' used differently. 'everything we need to we arguments together' is ungrammatical. List items should be parallel. Suggestion: 'We argue about everything together: food, football, studying, and even what to watch.'