Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and repetition. Pay attention to correct plural/singular forms and verb tenses (e.g., "life updates", "they never judge me").

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Although I don't have many, they are loyal and supportive, so I often share life updates and problems with them and take their advice when needed. Because they never judge me, I feel comfortable speaking openly.

Sugestão: Organise your answer: give a general topic sentence, then list specific topics with linking words. Use correct nouns and plurals ("live updates" -> "life updates", "problems"). Avoid hesitations and complete unfinished phrases. Be more precise about frequency or examples.

Exemplo: We usually talk about life updates, such as work or study problems, and sometimes current news. We also enjoy gossiping occasionally for fun. Additionally, because some friends are interested in fashion, we often discuss beauty and cosmetic products and share recommendations.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give two clear reasons with linking words. Reduce hesitations and repetition. Use smoother expressions ("talk to a few friends at once" and "express my thoughts").

Exemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one. Firstly, I feel embarrassed talking to a few people at once, and secondly I have more time to express my thoughts and to focus on the other person.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference then explain the exception. Correct word choice and grammar ("extrovert", "it feels", "meet them in person"). Use linking words like "however" or "but" to contrast. Be concise and avoid fragmented endings.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal. However, since I live in Japan and most of my friends are in Sri Lanka, I usually keep in touch through social media and video calls until we can meet in person.

Sugestão: Make your answer coherent: give a clear statement, then explain reasons and methods for avoiding arguments. Remove irrelevant or unclear words ("Tiktoks" unclear) and fix grammar. Use linking words ("however", "so") and specific examples of how you resolve conflicts.

Exemplo: Sometimes I argue, but recently I try to avoid conflicts. When I feel upset, I take some space and stay calm so the argument doesn't escalate. For example, I will pause the conversation and return later to discuss the issue politely.

× I don't have many friends but the few I have are loyal and very supportive, so I often share life update and problems with them and take their advice when I need help.

✓ I don't have many friends, but the few I have are loyal and very supportive, so I often share life updates and problems with them and take their advice when I need help.

Use plural 'updates' because 'life updates' refers to multiple pieces of information. Also add a comma before 'but' for clarity. 'Many friends' is correct; the error is the singular noun form after 'life'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items (life updates, problems).

× And I know the friends I have never judge me.

✓ And I know the friends I have never judge me.

This sentence has a subject-verb agreement issue rather than a pronoun issue; correct classification is 'Subject-verb agreement errors' (ID 27). The corrected sentence should be: 'And I know the friends I have never judge me.' However, proper correction is 'And I know the friends I have never judge me.' This still remains ungrammatical. Corrected final: 'And I know the friends I have never judge me.' Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb agreement: 'the friends ... never judge me.'

× And I know the friends I have never judge me.

✓ And I know the friends I have never judge me.

The verb should agree with the subject 'friends' (plural), so the correct verb is 'judge' not 'judges'. The sentence should read 'And I know the friends I have never judge me.' Suggestion: Ensure plural subjects take plural verbs.

× Umm, that's the good thing and that's that.

✓ Umm, that's the good thing and that's that.

This sentence needs the definite article 'the' before 'good thing', which is already present; classification may be unnecessary. No change required.

× I have a good friends, actually.

✓ I have good friends, actually.

Use no 'a' with plural noun 'friends'. Either 'a good friend' (singular) or 'good friends' (plural) is correct. Suggestion: Choose singular or plural consistently: 'I have a good friend' or 'I have good friends'. Grammar problem type ID:1 (Singular and plural issue).

× I usually chat about news and live updates and about problem I have at work or with my studies.

✓ I usually chat about the news and life updates and about problems I have at work or with my studies.

Use 'the news' for news in general; 'life updates' (not 'live'), and plural 'problems' to match 'I have'. Also include 'the' before 'news' for naturalness. Suggestion: Use correct nouns ('life' not 'live') and pluralize when appropriate.

× It's a normal, fun part of our social life and we often talk about beauty products and fashion because the friends I have, uh, interesting with fashion and.

✓ It's a normal, fun part of our social life and we often talk about beauty products and fashion because the friends I have are interested in fashion.

Use the verb 'are' with 'the friends' and the adjective phrase 'interested in' to describe their interest. 'Interesting with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'interested in'. Suggestion: Use 'interested in' to indicate someone's interest in a topic.

× Cosmetic products, we usually talk about that and buying new products.

✓ We usually talk about cosmetic products and buying new products.

Combine fragments into a single coherent sentence. Change 'that' to 'them' or remove; ensure parallel structure: 'talk about cosmetic products and buying new products.' Suggestion: Keep parallel structure and avoid sentence fragments.

× the friends I have never judge me.

✓ the friends I have never judge me.

This repeats earlier error; correct verb for plural 'friends' is 'judge' (no -s). Classification ID 2 is for third person singular; here the error is subject-verb agreement (ID 27).

× I prefer chatting with, uh, only one friend.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend.

Remove the extra commas and filler words for fluency. Article use 'one friend' is correct. Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary pauses and commas in written form.

× I can listen to one person and keep focus of that one.

✓ I can listen to one person and keep focus on that person.

Use 'focus on' not 'focus of'. Also use 'that person' instead of 'that one' for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct preposition collocations (focus on, depend on).

× I'm outrovert uh I'm not shy.

✓ I'm an extrovert; I'm not shy.

The word 'outrovert' is incorrect; the standard word is 'extrovert'. Include the article 'an' before a singular noun. Suggestion: Use standard vocabulary and include articles with countable nouns.

× I prefer face to face communication because it feel more personal.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal.

Subject 'communication' (singular) requires 'feels' with -s. Also hyphenate 'face-to-face' and include articles as needed. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with subject and use hyphens for compound adjectives.

× But since I live in Japan and most of my friends live in Sri Lanka, I often keep in touch through social media and video calls.

✓ But since I live in Japan and most of my friends live in Sri Lanka, I often keep in touch through social media and video calls.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. Preposition usage 'in touch' is correct.

× I would like to meet them person so on through.

✓ I would like to meet them in person sometime soon.

Use the phrase 'meet them in person' and add a time expression 'sometime soon' for naturalness. Original 'person so on through' is jumbled. Suggestion: Use set phrases like 'meet in person' and place adverbs appropriately.

× Sometimes I do, but recently I avoid arguing with friends.

✓ Sometimes I do, but recently I have been avoiding arguing with friends.

Use present perfect continuous 'have been avoiding' to describe a recent ongoing habit. 'Avoid' simple present is less natural with 'recently'. Suggestion: Use present perfect continuous for actions continuing into the present.

× Not only friends, anyone, uh, I keep quiet and uh, take my space and I try to stay friendly and umm, keep my friendship without uh, arguments and any unnecessary.

✓ Not only with friends but with anyone, I keep quiet and take my space, and I try to stay friendly and keep my friendships without arguments or any unnecessary conflict.

Add correct preposition 'with', use 'keep my friendships' plural or 'friendship' singular consistently, and complete the phrase 'unnecessary conflict'. Also improve punctuation. Suggestion: Complete phrases and choose consistent singular/plural forms.

× Tiktoks, it's hurt me, I don't like that.

✓ Tiktoks hurt me; I don't like that.

Remove extra 'it's' and use correct verb form 'hurt' for the plural subject 'Tiktoks'. Use a semicolon or period to separate clauses. Suggestion: Keep sentence structure simple and match verb forms to subjects.