Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct small grammatical errors; add a short specific example to make your answer more vivid. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Chatting with friends helps me relax and stay connected, especially after a stressful day. For example, last week I talked with a friend about a tough work issue and her advice helped me feel better and find a solution.

Sugestão: Improve accuracy and use parallel structure; correct pluralization and prepositions. Add a linking phrase and one specific example to show range of topics.

Exemplo: We usually talk about daily life, work, and future plans. Sometimes, we also discuss movies, travel destinations, or interesting posts we see on social media; for instance, we recently planned a weekend trip after seeing photos of a nearby town.

Sugestão: Fix grammar (singular/plural) and tighten phrasing. Use a clear topic sentence and a linking word to contrast preferences, plus a brief example to illustrate when group chats are useful.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because conversations tend to be deeper and more meaningful. However, group chats are great when we need to coordinate plans, such as organising a birthday party.

Sugestão: Correct verb agreement and article use, and combine sentences for clarity. Mention a brief specific situation showing the advantage of face-to-face communication.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and natural. For example, during difficult conversations I rely on facial expressions and body language to understand emotions better.

Sugestão: Avoid short fragmented sentences and fix grammar (adverbs, plurals, word choice). Provide a coherent two-sentence answer with a linking word and a specific example of resolving a disagreement.

Exemplo: Not very often; when disagreements arise, we usually resolve them calmly and try to understand each other's points of view. For instance, last month a friend and I disagreed about finances, but we talked it through and reached a compromise.

× We often share our experience and support each other when we have problems.

✓ We often share our experiences and support each other when we have problems.

The noun 'experience' in this context refers to multiple instances, so the plural 'experiences' is required. Use the plural when speaking about more than one occurrence. Suggestion: use 'experiences' when referring to multiple events or stories.

× We usually talk about our daily life, work and future plans.

✓ We usually talk about our daily lives, work, and future plans.

'Daily life' here refers to the routines of multiple people, so the plural 'daily lives' is more appropriate. Also add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity. Suggestion: match number when discussing habits of more than one person.

× Sometime we discuss about movie travel, destinations or interesting things we see on social media.

✓ Sometimes we discuss movies, travel destinations, or interesting things we see on social media.

Do not use 'discuss about'; the verb 'discuss' is transitive and does not take 'about'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). Also separate 'movie' and 'travel destinations' for clarity and pluralize where needed. Suggestion: use 'discuss' + direct object, and use 'sometimes' for frequency.

× I prefer chatting with one friends at a time because the conversation is usually deeper and more meaningful.

✓ I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because the conversation is usually deeper and more meaningful.

'One' requires a singular noun, so 'friends' must be 'friend'. Suggestion: when using 'one' as a determiner, follow it with a singular noun.

× However, group chat can be fun when we want to share ideas or planned activity together.

✓ However, group chats can be fun when we want to share ideas or plan activities together.

Use plural 'group chats' to match general situations. 'Planned activity' is awkward; either 'planned activities' or use the verb 'plan activities'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and choose verb form 'plan' for activity description.

× I prefer face to face communication because it feel more personal and natural.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and natural.

Hyphenate 'face-to-face' as a compound modifier. The subject 'it' requires the third-person singular verb 'feels'. Suggestion: use 'feels' with 'it' and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× I can see the other person facial expressions and body language with help me understand them better.

✓ I can see the other person's facial expressions and body language, which help me understand them better.

Use the possessive 'other person's' to show that the facial expressions belong to the person. 'With help me' is ungrammatical; use a relative clause 'which help me' and match plural verb 'help' to plural subject 'expressions and body language'. Suggestion: use possessive form and correct connector 'which' with proper verb agreement.

× Not very often. Of course. We sometime have a different opinions, but we usually discard the issue calmly and try to understand each other point of view.

✓ Not very often, of course. We sometimes have different opinions, but we usually discard the issue calmly and try to understand each other's point of view.

Combine short fragments into complete sentences. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'A different opinions' is wrong number: either 'a different opinion' or 'different opinions' — here plural fits. 'Each other point of view' needs the possessive 'each other's'. Also 'discard the issue' is odd but kept; consider 'resolve' or 'move past' instead. Suggestion: fix adverb form, plural agreement, and use possessive for 'each other's'.