Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and repetitions, use a clear topic sentence, and give one specific supporting detail with correct grammar. Pay attention to verb forms and word choice (e.g., 'meet' → 'meet up', 'stronger' → 'strengthen'). Keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends in my free time. For example, we often meet up at a café and talk for hours, which helps strengthen our friendships.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence naming typical topics, then give one specific example and explain briefly using linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'because'). Avoid vague phrases and finish the thought clearly.

Exemplo: We usually talk about everyday topics, such as family matters and relationships. For example, my friends and I share family news because it helps us understand each other's situations better.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer first, then provide one or two concise reasons with a specific example. Fix grammar (e.g., 'is not' → 'are not', 'the family such as family matters' → 'personal family matters'). Keep sentences complete.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one because personal topics are easier to discuss privately. For example, I feel more comfortable talking about family issues with a single close friend rather than a large group.

Sugestão: Answer directly and succinctly, avoid repetition, and use correct comparative structures (e.g., 'better than social media'). Provide a specific reason with linking words and correct noun phrases ('other friends' → 'a friend's').

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than social media because it's easier to read facial expressions and emotions, which helps us understand each other better.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No/Sometimes), then give a brief reason and an example. Use correct sentence order and plural forms (e.g., 'different ideas', 'we usually listen to each other'). Avoid convoluted structures.

Exemplo: Sometimes we argue, but not often, because we usually respect each other's opinions. For example, when we disagree, we listen carefully and calmly explain our points instead of getting angry.

× Umm, absolutely MMM in my free time I really enjoy chatting with my friends.

✓ Umm, absolutely. In my free time I really enjoy chatting with my friends.

The original sentence had filler sounds and missing punctuation; grammatically, 'enjoy chatting' is correct. Remove extraneous 'MMM' and add a period to separate clauses for clarity. Keep 'chatting' as the gerund after 'enjoy'. Suggestion: remove fillers and use punctuation to separate ideas.

× for example, we met meet at cafe and chatting uh, all day.

✓ For example, we met at a cafe and chatted all day.

The verb forms were mixed: 'met meet' combined present and past; 'chatting' should be past to match 'met'. Use past tense verbs for a past event: 'met' and 'chatted'. Also include the article 'a' before 'cafe'. Suggestion: when describing past events, use past tense verbs consistently.

× Uh, I think it is a good way to to stronger our relationship and friendship.

✓ Uh, I think it is a good way to strengthen our relationship and friendship.

The phrase 'to to stronger' is incorrect: 'stronger' is an adjective but after 'to' an infinitive verb is required. Use the infinitive 'to strengthen'. Remove the duplicate 'to'. Suggestion: after 'a good way to' use a base verb (infinitive without to) like 'strengthen' preceded by 'to'.

× Old topics umm, from uh, from maybe family to love.

✓ Old topics, maybe from family to love.

The original had redundant 'from' and disfluent fillers. Use 'from ... to ...' once to show range: 'from family to love'. Suggestion: avoid repeated prepositions and remove fillers for clarity.

× And I think chat with each other is uh, can help us better understand each other.

✓ And I think chatting with each other can help us better understand each other.

'Chat with each other' as a noun phrase should be the gerund 'chatting', and 'is can help' is incorrect because two auxiliaries combine. Use 'can help' directly with the gerund subject. Suggestion: use 'chatting' as subject and one modal 'can' for ability.

× Umm, in addition, it can help me understand.

✓ Umm, in addition, it can help me understand my friends better.

The original sentence is incomplete and vague; 'help me understand' requires an object to be clear. Add what is being understood to complete the idea. Suggestion: specify the object being understood (e.g., 'my friends better').

× And actually I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think some personal topics is not suitable for a group.

✓ Actually I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think some personal topics are not suitable for a group.

The subject 'some personal topics' is plural, so the verb must be 'are', not 'is'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree in number with their subjects.

× For example the family such as family matters.

✓ For example, family matters.

The original is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'The family such as family matters' is redundant. Concise phrase 'family matters' conveys the meaning. Suggestion: avoid redundancy; use concise noun phrases.

× I think maybe we want to share our.

✓ I think maybe we want to share our problems or our feelings.

The sentence is incomplete; 'share our' needs a noun (e.g., 'problems' or 'feelings') to complete the idea. Suggestion: always include the object after verbs like 'share'.

× I think I prefer to communicate this face to face instead of social media because I think real real chatting can help us more a better understand each other.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face instead of via social media because real chatting can help us better understand each other.

Remove the extra 'this' before 'face to face' and use 'via social media' for the preposition. 'More a better understand' is ungrammatical; use 'better understand' (no extra 'a' or 'more'). Suggestion: use appropriate prepositions ('face to face', 'via social media') and the adjective 'better' with the verb 'understand'.

× Umm for example you can look other friends face and their emotions.

✓ For example, you can look at your friends' faces and their emotions.

Use the preposition 'at' after 'look' in this context. Possessive form is needed: 'friends' faces' (plural possessive) or 'your friend's face' for singular. Also add punctuation and remove filler. Suggestion: use 'look at' and the correct possessive form (friends' faces).

× Maybe sometimes, but I think I and my friends usually prefer to respect each other.

✓ Maybe sometimes, but I and my friends usually prefer to respect each other.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but stylistically better to say 'my friends and I'. The original word order 'I and my friends' is not preferred in English. Suggestion: use the conventional order 'my friends and I' for politeness and style.

× In addition, we have although we have different idea to be usually listen to each other and give our opinion.

✓ In addition, although we have different ideas, we usually listen to each other and give our opinions.

The clause order was mixed and 'idea' should be plural 'ideas'. Remove extra 'have' and place 'although' at clause start, with commas to separate clauses. Use plural 'opinions'. Suggestion: structure the sentence as 'Although X, we Y' and ensure plural agreement where needed.