RulesPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Candidato

There are quite good of plenty of rules that our students do, uh, for example, just being quite and don't running across the corridors in the school. So it will be so noisy if they will do or, you know.

Examinador

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Candidato

I think rules can reduce injury in our school so it's much better and beneficial to students if they will just following the rules and it will helps our school to be more convenient to studying and that is all.

Examinador

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Candidato

Yeah, exactly. It is our mathematic teacher who teaches very well and I certainly confident that her level of teaching is quite high. So she always try to best that he can do.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, избегать лишних слов и пауз, а также четко отвечать на вопрос с примерами. Попробуйте использовать связки для логичности.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students must be quiet and not run in the corridors to avoid noise and accidents.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и немного нечеткий смысл. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и структуру предложений, а также добавить связующие слова для плавности речи.

Exemplo: I believe that having rules helps reduce injuries at school. Therefore, following rules makes the school environment safer and more comfortable for studying.

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Pontuação: 58.0

Sugestão: В ответе есть ошибки в согласовании времен и местоимений, а также нечеткая структура. Рекомендуется использовать правильные местоимения, глагольные формы и связки для улучшения связности.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a math teacher who teaches very well. I am confident that her teaching skills are excellent because she always tries her best.

Gramática

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× There are quite good of plenty of rules that our students do, uh, for example, just being quite and don't running across the corridors in the school.

There are quite a lot of good rules that our students follow, for example, just being quiet and not running across the corridors in the school.

The phrase 'quite good of plenty of rules' is incorrect. The correct quantifier is 'quite a lot of' or 'plenty of' to indicate many rules. Also, 'do' is incorrect here; 'follow' is appropriate for rules. 'Being quite' should be 'being quiet' (correct adjective). 'Don't running' should be 'not running' because after modal verbs or auxiliary verbs, the base form or gerund is used correctly.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× There are quite good of plenty of rules that our students do, uh, for example, just being quite and don't running across the corridors in the school.

There are quite a lot of good rules that our students follow, for example, just being quiet and not running across the corridors in the school.

The word 'quite' is an adverb but was used incorrectly as 'being quite' instead of 'being quiet' (adjective). The correct adjective to describe silence is 'quiet'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× There are quite good of plenty of rules that our students do, uh, for example, just being quite and don't running across the corridors in the school.

There are quite a lot of good rules that our students follow, for example, just being quiet and not running across the corridors in the school.

The phrase 'running across the corridors' is acceptable but 'running in the corridors' is more natural. However, this is minor and acceptable. The main preposition error is not present here, so no change needed.

Modal verb usage

× So it will be so noisy if they will do or, you know.

So it will be so noisy if they do, you know.

In conditional sentences, the present simple is used in the 'if' clause, not 'will'. 'If they will do' is incorrect; it should be 'if they do'.

Modal verb usage

× I think rules can reduce injury in our school so it's much better and beneficial to students if they will just following the rules and it will helps our school to be more convenient to studying and that is all.

I think rules can reduce injury in our school, so it's much better and beneficial to students if they just follow the rules, and it will help our school to be more convenient for studying, and that is all.

'If they will just following' is incorrect; after 'if', use present simple 'follow'. 'It will helps' is incorrect; 'help' should be base form after 'will'. 'Convenient to studying' should be 'convenient for studying'.

Verb + -ing form

× I think rules can reduce injury in our school so it's much better and beneficial to students if they will just following the rules and it will helps our school to be more convenient to studying and that is all.

I think rules can reduce injury in our school, so it's much better and beneficial to students if they just follow the rules, and it will help our school to be more convenient for studying, and that is all.

'Following' is incorrectly used after 'will'; after modal verbs or auxiliaries, the base form is used, not the '-ing' form.

Third person singular issue

× I think rules can reduce injury in our school so it's much better and beneficial to students if they will just following the rules and it will helps our school to be more convenient to studying and that is all.

I think rules can reduce injury in our school, so it's much better and beneficial to students if they just follow the rules, and it will help our school to be more convenient for studying, and that is all.

'It will helps' is incorrect because after 'will' the base form of the verb is used. The correct form is 'it will help'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think rules can reduce injury in our school so it's much better and beneficial to students if they will just following the rules and it will helps our school to be more convenient to studying and that is all.

I think rules can reduce injury in our school, so it's much better and beneficial to students if they just follow the rules, and it will help our school to be more convenient for studying, and that is all.

'Convenient to studying' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'convenient for studying'.

Third person singular issue

× Yeah, exactly. It is our mathematic teacher who teaches very well and I certainly confident that her level of teaching is quite high.

Yeah, exactly. It is our math teacher who teaches very well and I am certainly confident that her level of teaching is quite high.

The sentence 'I certainly confident' is missing the verb 'am' for first person singular present tense. It should be 'I am certainly confident'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× So she always try to best that he can do.

So she always tries her best that she can do.

The pronouns are inconsistent: 'she' and then 'he'. It should be consistent referring to the same person. Also, 'try' should be 'tries' for third person singular. 'Try to best' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'tries her best'.

Vocabulário

BestFinest; To the highest standard
BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
NoisyRowdy; Loud
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