Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "To start with" when not listing multiple points immediately. Also, correct grammar errors such as "as a graduated" to "as I graduated". Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: I graduated 10 years ago, but I remember my school had several important rules. For example, wearing a uniform was mandatory for all students. Moreover, rules about punctuality and behaviour helped maintain discipline throughout the school.

Sugestão: Your answer is well-structured and balanced, showing both sides of the argument. To improve, use more precise linking words such as "however" instead of "on the other hand" for variety. Also, correct minor grammar issues like "students self-expression" to "students' self-expression". Adding a concluding sentence would make your answer more complete.

Exemplo: It depends on the type of rules. On the one hand, more rules can help students develop discipline and prepare for adult responsibilities. For example, rules about punctuality and respect teach important life skills. However, too many rules might restrict students' self-expression and creativity. Therefore, a balance is necessary.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Avoid awkward phrases like "in my elder" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Try to be more specific about what makes the teacher effective and how their strictness influenced you positively.

Exemplo: I had a teacher whom I respect deeply because they were strict but fair. From the first day, I followed their classroom rules, which taught me discipline and helped me develop respect for others as I grew older.

× To start with, I am no longer a student as a graduated 10 years ago, but I do remember that my school had quite a few rules.

✓ To start with, I am no longer a student as I graduated 10 years ago, but I do remember that my school had quite a few rules.

The phrase 'as a graduated 10 years ago' is incorrect because 'graduated' is a past tense verb and needs a subject. The correct form is 'I graduated 10 years ago' to indicate the past action performed by the subject 'I'.

× One of the most important was the requirements to wear a uniform which was mandatory for all the students.

✓ One of the most important was the requirement to wear a uniform which was mandatory for all the students.

The word 'requirements' is plural, but the sentence refers to 'one of the most important', which should be singular. Therefore, 'requirement' is correct. Also, 'to wear a uniform' is correct as an infinitive phrase describing the requirement.

× On the other hand, too many rules might restrict students self-expression and creativity.

✓ On the other hand, too many rules might restrict students' self-expression and creativity.

The phrase 'students self-expression' lacks the possessive apostrophe. It should be 'students' self-expression' to show that the self-expression belongs to the students.

× I've got a fantastic example of this teacher whom I respect deeply because as soon as I entered their class, I remember I felt their strictness and I always obeyed the rules that they stated in the class which helped me later to find respect for everyone else in my elder.

✓ I've got a fantastic example of this teacher whom I respect deeply because as soon as I entered his or her class, I remember I felt his or her strictness and I always obeyed the rules that he or she stated in the class which helped me later to find respect for everyone else in my elder.

The pronouns 'their' and 'they' are used to refer to a singular teacher, which is grammatically incorrect in formal English. The correct singular pronouns are 'his or her' and 'he or she' to agree with the singular noun 'teacher'. Additionally, 'in my elder' is unclear and likely incorrect, but since it is not listed in the grammar problem types, it is not corrected here.