Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "avoiding" và nên dùng từ phù hợp hơn như "not allowed" hoặc "prohibited". Bạn cũng nên thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: At my university, there is a rule that students are not allowed to be absent for more than 20% of the total class time. This rule encourages us to attend classes regularly and helps us keep up with the coursework.

Sugestão: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời để tránh bị bỏ dở và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "students creativity" nên là "students' creativity" và "maintained the supply" không rõ nghĩa, nên dùng "maintain discipline" hoặc tương tự.

Exemplo: I believe that having some rules can benefit students to a certain extent. Rules help maintain discipline and create a structured learning environment, which is essential for academic success. However, too many rules might restrict students' creativity and freedom, so it's important to find a balance.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không chính xác như "ability to transparent" nên là "ability to explain clearly". Bạn nên hoàn thành câu trả lời và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đầy đủ, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: I really admire my biology teacher from high school, not only because of his academic achievements and his ability to explain all the information clearly, but also because of his emotional intelligence, as he was able to understand and support students effectively.

× In my university there was a regulation avoiding students to be absent more than 20% of total the period of class, which I mean I guess that the school want us to attain as much as possible.

✓ In my university there was a regulation avoiding students from being absent more than 20% of the total class period, which I mean I guess that the school wants us to attend as much as possible.

The phrase 'avoiding students to be absent' is incorrect; the correct form is 'avoiding students from being absent' because 'avoid' is followed by a gerund with 'from'. Also, 'total the period of class' should be 'the total class period' for correct word order. Additionally, 'school want' should be 'school wants' to agree with the singular subject 'school'. Finally, 'attain' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'attend' meaning to be present.

× In my university there was a regulation avoiding students to be absent more than 20% of total the period of class, which I mean I guess that the school want us to attain as much as possible.

✓ In my university there was a regulation avoiding students from being absent more than 20% of the total class period, which I mean I guess that the school wants us to attend as much as possible.

The verb 'want' must agree with the singular subject 'school', so it should be 'wants'. This is a common third person singular verb agreement issue.

× I believe that having more is for students can be beneficial for a certain extent.

✓ I believe that having more rules for students can be beneficial to a certain extent.

The original sentence is missing the object 'rules' after 'more' and has an incorrect phrase 'for a certain extent' which should be 'to a certain extent'. Also, 'is for students can be' is ungrammatical; it should be 'rules for students can be'.

× Rules have maintained the supply and create a structured learning environment which is essential for academic success.

✓ Rules maintain discipline and create a structured learning environment which is essential for academic success.

The phrase 'maintained the supply' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'maintain discipline' is a common collocation. Also, 'Rules have maintained' is present perfect but the context suggests simple present 'Rules maintain' is better. The verb 'create' agrees with plural 'Rules' so it is correct.

× However, too many rules might restrict students creativity and freedom, so it's important to find a balance that.

✓ However, too many rules might restrict students' creativity and freedom, so it's important to find a balance.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'that.' which is incomplete. Also, 'students creativity' needs a possessive apostrophe: 'students' creativity'. The conjunction 'so' is used correctly here.

× Well, I really admire my my biology teacher back in high school, not only because of his academic achievement and the ability to transparent all the information for us effectively, but also his emotional intelligence since he able to.

✓ Well, I really admire my biology teacher back in high school, not only because of his academic achievements and the ability to explain all the information to us effectively, but also his emotional intelligence since he was able to.

The sentence has a repeated word 'my my'. 'Academic achievement' should be plural 'achievements' to match context. 'Ability to transparent' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'explain'. The phrase 'since he able to' is incomplete and should be 'since he was able to'. Also, 'explain information to us' is the correct prepositional phrase.