Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Oh yes, there are many rules in my school. For example, during the breaks teachers don't allow us to run and play and because they want to keep our safety.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
I think maybe yes, because rules can let students be safe and have more happy life and but two more rules is also not is also not good for students because they can't have creative.
Examinador
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidato
Oh yes, my math teacher does her job very well. For example in the classes she always let me to answer the questions and after class she let us to do homework and then she will teach it to us.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并且注意连贯性。可以用更自然的表达方式说明规则及其原因。
Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, during breaks, teachers don't allow us to run or play to ensure our safety.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,且逻辑混乱。建议分两部分表达观点,使用连接词使句子更连贯,并注意词汇的准确使用。
Exemplo: I think having some rules is good because they keep students safe and happy. However, too many rules might limit students' creativity.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的时态和动词形式,并且用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, my math teacher is very good at her job. For example, she often encourages me to answer questions in class, assigns homework, and then explains it to us afterwards.
× For example, during the breaks teachers don't allow us to run and play and because they want to keep our safety.
✓ For example, during the breaks teachers don't allow us to run and play because they want to keep us safe.
句中使用了两个连词“and”和“because”,造成连接混乱,应去掉“and”,并将“keep our safety”改为“keep us safe”,更符合英语表达习惯。
× I think maybe yes, because rules can let students be safe and have more happy life and but two more rules is also not is also not good for students because they can't have creative.
✓ I think maybe yes, because rules can keep students safe and make their lives happier, but having two more rules is also not good for students because they can't be creative.
句中“and but”连用不正确,应去掉“and”只用“but”。“have more happy life”表达不自然,应改为“make their lives happier”。“can't have creative”缺少名词,应改为“can't be creative”。
× Oh yes, my math teacher does her job very well. For example in the classes she always let me to answer the questions and after class she let us to do homework and then she will teach it to us.
✓ Oh yes, my math teacher does her job very well. For example, in class she always lets me answer the questions, and after class she lets us do homework and then she teaches it to us.
“in the classes”应改为“in class”,更符合习惯用法。动词“let”后不加“to”,应直接接动词原形。主语是第三人称单数,动词应加-s。