Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like buying shoes and how often. Avoid grammar errors (articles, plural forms), redundant phrases, and unclear fragments. Use one or two supporting details with correct grammar and a linking word. Keep answers under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and I go shopping for them a few times a year. For example, I have about eleven pairs at home, including sneakers and sports shoes, because I like collecting different styles.

Sugestão: Answer directly and explain briefly with logical reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases ('motor shoes', 'have none of my father') and fix tense and pronoun errors. Use two sentences: a clear negative/positive statement and one reason with specific detail.

Exemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer trying them on in local shops. Also, shop owners I know often offer me good advice and fair prices, so I feel more confident buying in person.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct estimate of your usual spending, then give a specific recent example. Avoid filler phrases and unclear brand/store references. Use linking words like 'for example' and keep grammar consistent. Provide a concise average and one example with price and opinion.

Exemplo: I usually spend between ₹1,000 and ₹3,000 on shoes. For example, I recently bought a pair of sneakers from Red Tape for about ₹7,000, which I thought was quite expensive compared with my normal budget.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference statement and use present tense. Explain with two specific contexts using linking words (e.g., 'when' or 'but'). Correct awkward phrasing and redundancy ('occasionally' repeated). Keep it to two sentences with clear reasons.

Exemplo: I prefer fashionable shoes for special occasions such as weddings because they look better with formal outfits. However, when I go to the gym I choose comfortable shoes that support my feet while running and doing exercises.

× 'Of course, I love to buy a new shoes because I have a passionate for a new shoes.'

✓ 'Of course, I love to buy new shoes because I have a passion for new shoes.'

'a new shoes' is incorrect because shoes is plural and does not take 'a'; 'a passionate' is wrong noun form and article. Use 'new shoes' (no article) and 'a passion' (correct noun) to match noun forms and articles.'

× 'I have a lots of pair at my home of many different types of shoes like sneakers and sports shoes.'

✓ 'I have a lot of pairs at home of many different types of shoes, like sneakers and sports shoes.'

'a lots of pair' mixes singular/plural and incorrect quantifier. Use 'a lot of' or 'lots of' and 'pairs' (plural) to match shoes. Also remove unnecessary 'my' before home and add comma for clarity.'

× 'I you know 11 of.'

✓ 'I have, you know, 11 pairs.'

Original lacks a proper verb and clear object. Adding 'have' provides the verb and 'pairs' clarifies the count; 'you know' is parenthetical and set off by commas.'

× 'No, I don't buy motor shoes from online platform because I prefer to buy shoes from my local market because the shop owners have none of my father.'

✓ 'No, I don't buy shoes from online platforms because I prefer to buy from my local market; the shop owners know my father.'

Tense/forms and word choice errors: 'motor shoes' is likely wrong term so changed to 'shoes'; 'from online platform' -> 'from online platforms' (plural) or 'online platforms'; 'have none of my father' is incorrect phrase — intended meaning is 'know my father', so corrected. Also adjusted punctuation for clarity.'

× 'So if they give uh he gives me a better pair of shoes that is reasonable price.'

✓ 'So if they give me a pair, he gives me a better pair of shoes at a reasonable price.'

Original mixes subjects and verb forms. Clarified conditional sequence and ensured verbs agree with subjects. 'that is reasonable price' -> 'at a reasonable price' uses correct preposition and article.'

× 'That's the interesting question. I have never thought that before, but recently I bought a new pair of shoes which is the sneaker I bought from a red tape and it was approx around ₹7000.'

✓ 'That's an interesting question. I had never thought about that before, but recently I bought a new pair of sneakers from Red Tape for around ₹7000.'

'That's the interesting' -> 'That's an interesting' uses correct article; 'have never thought that before' should be 'had never thought about that before' to indicate prior thinking before recent purchase, though present perfect can also work; simplified to past simple 'bought' and corrected 'the sneaker I bought from a red tape' to 'sneakers from Red Tape' (brand name capitalized) and 'approx around' is redundant, use 'around'.'

× 'So that was very expensive as per my observation.'

✓ 'So that was very expensive in my opinion.'

'as per my observation' is wordy and awkward. 'In my opinion' or 'in my view' is more natural. Also ensure tense and tone match spoken response.'

× 'I prefer to wear fashionable shoes when I was attending a function which is occasionally, uh occasionally and a function related to marriage.'

✓ 'I prefer to wear fashionable shoes when I attend a function, such as a wedding, which happens occasionally.'

Mix of past and present: 'prefer' is present, so subordinate clause should be present simple: 'when I attend.' 'a function related to marriage' -> 'a wedding' is more natural. 'occasionally' placed appropriately.'

× 'But when I was going to a gym, I prefer to wear comfortable shoes because it helps me while running and doing perform exercise.'

✓ 'But when I go to the gym, I prefer to wear comfortable shoes because they help me when running and exercising.'

Tense consistency: use present simple 'when I go' with 'prefer'. 'a gym' -> 'the gym' is more natural; 'it helps me' should be 'they help me' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'doing perform exercise' is ungrammatical; use 'exercising' or 'doing exercises.'