Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy, reduce repetition, and make answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tenses and articles and avoid redundant phrases like “shoe guy” repeated ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new ones about every six months because I wear them a lot. For example, I choose shoes with good cushioning and arch support so I can be comfortable at work all day.

Sugestão: Fix grammar (word order, articles) and streamline explanation. Use linking words like “because” and give a brief specific example of a past fitting problem to strengthen the answer.

Exemplo: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on first. For instance, once I ordered shoes without trying them and they were too narrow, so I returned them. Therefore I now buy shoes in stores to ensure a good fit.

Sugestão: Make the response clearer and grammatically correct. Give a specific typical price range or an average monthly/annual amount. Avoid vague or emotional phrasing; instead explain priorities (comfort, durability) that justify spending.

Exemplo: I don't have a strict budget, but I typically spend between $50 and $120 on a pair of shoes. I prefer to invest in comfortable, durable shoes because they last longer and protect my feet during long working days.

Sugestão: Good content and reason. Improve naturalness by shortening and polishing sentences; use linking words like “because” and add a brief specific example of shoe features you look for (e.g., cushioning, slip-resistance).

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I work as a civil engineer and often stand all day. For example, I look for shoes with good cushioning and slip-resistant soles so I can work safely and comfortably.

× I buy shoe for every six months.

✓ I buy shoes every six months.

'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to more than one item purchased periodically; also 'for' is unnecessary before 'every six months'. Use plural with expressions of repeated purchases.

× I'm moving to shoes, so I prefer to buy comfortable shoes that can keep me going all day long without any pain.

✓ I am fond of shoes, so I prefer to buy comfortable ones that keep me going all day without pain.

'I'm moving to shoes' is ungrammatical; use 'I am fond of' or 'I like shoes'. Also replace 'can keep me going' with 'keep me going' for natural present-tense habitual meaning and use 'ones' to avoid repetition.

× No, I have not purchased any shoes on online.

✓ No, I have not purchased any shoes online.

Use 'online' without the preposition 'on'. 'On online' is incorrect; 'online' functions as an adverb here.

× The reason is I prefer to go to the fitting first and then pay the money.

✓ The reason is that I prefer to try them on first and then pay.

Use 'try them on' for fitting shoes and omit 'the money' for natural phrasing. 'That' introduces the clause; keep present simple for habitual preference.

× I don't want to put myself in a hard situation where I don't where the shoe doesn't fit me after paying the money.

✓ I don't want to put myself in a difficult situation where I don't know whether the shoes will fit me after I pay.

Original sentence has repetition and missing verb 'know'. Replace 'hard' with 'difficult', use 'know whether' to express uncertainty, plural 'shoes', and correct tense 'will fit' for future result after paying.

× There is no constraint on the spending over the shoes as shoe is my comfortable place where I can spend any money so I I can be happy and make myself a happy.

✓ There is no limit to how much I spend on shoes because they are my comfort and I can spend money on them to make myself happy.

Use 'no limit to' rather than 'no constraint on the spending over'. 'Shoe is my comfortable place' is incorrect metaphor and singular; use plural 'they' and 'my comfort'. Remove duplicate 'I'. Keep present simple for habitual statement.

× I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable shoes due to the reason of my career.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because of my career.

Use 'comfortable shoes' vs 'fashionable ones' to avoid repetition. 'Due to the reason of' is wordy and incorrect; use 'because of'.

× Since I'm a professionally qualified civil engineer, I need to stand one full day on the side, so comfortable shoes will keep me going without any discomfort.

✓ Since I am a professionally qualified civil engineer, I need to stand all day on site, so comfortable shoes keep me going without discomfort.

Use 'stand all day on site' (not 'one full day on the side') and prefer present simple 'keep' for habitual truths. Remove 'will' because general fact is expressed in present tense and 'without any' can be shortened to 'without'.