Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'As a psychology student, I often visit the library because it has all the books on disorders and medicines arranged in order, which makes it easy for me to access the knowledge I need.'

Exemplo: As a psychology student, I often visit the library because it has all the books on disorders and medicines arranged in order, which makes it easy for me to access the knowledge I need.

Sugestão: Your answer covers the main points but is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words like 'moreover' and 'because' correctly to improve coherence. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas. For example, 'I usually read books because the library provides easy access to them. Moreover, the quiet environment helps me concentrate and study for long hours without getting bored.'

Exemplo: I usually read books because the library provides easy access to them. Moreover, the quiet environment helps me concentrate and study for long hours without getting bored.

Sugestão: Your answer is honest but contains unclear expressions and grammatical errors. Avoid using inappropriate words and be more specific. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. For example, 'To be honest, I did not like going to the library as a kid because I preferred watching cartoons and playing games. I found studying in the library boring at that age.'

Exemplo: To be honest, I did not like going to the library as a kid because I preferred watching cartoons and playing games. I found studying in the library boring at that age.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs better structure and grammar. Avoid repeating 'I think' and use linking words to connect your points. For example, 'I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because China values education highly. Moreover, the high standards and pressure in schools encourage students to study hard and manage their schedules effectively.'

Exemplo: I believe Chinese kids often go to the library because China values education highly. Moreover, the high standards and pressure in schools encourage students to study hard and manage their schedules effectively.

× I often visit to library because I think all the books related to disorder and medicines was easily assemble in line to order so I can easily access the books and gain the knowledge which I wanted to know.

✓ I often visit the library because I think all the books related to disorders and medicines are easily assembled in order online, so I can easily access the books and gain the knowledge I want to know.

The phrase 'visit to library' is incorrect; the correct form is 'visit the library' without 'to'. Also, 'was easily assemble' is incorrect; it should be 'are easily assembled' to match plural subject and present tense. 'In line to order' is unclear and corrected to 'in order online' to convey the intended meaning. These corrections improve preposition use and verb agreement.

× I often visit to library because I think all the books related to disorder and medicines was easily assemble in line to order so I can easily access the books and gain the knowledge which I wanted to know.

✓ I often visit the library because I think all the books related to disorders and medicines are easily assembled in order online, so I can easily access the books and gain the knowledge I want to know.

The word 'disorder' should be plural 'disorders' to match the plural 'books'. Also, 'medicines' is correct as plural. The verb 'was' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'books'. This correction addresses singular and plural agreement.

× I think all the books related to disorder and medicines was easily assemble in line to order so I can easily access the books and gain the knowledge which I wanted to know.

✓ I think all the books related to disorders and medicines are easily assembled in order online, so I can easily access the books and gain the knowledge I want to know.

The phrase 'which I wanted to know' incorrectly uses past tense 'wanted' when the knowledge is currently desired. It should be 'I want to know' to reflect present tense. This corrects the past tense issue.

× So as I already mentioned that the my most majority and the most preferable thing is that easy access to books.

✓ As I already mentioned, my majority preference is easy access to books.

The phrase 'the my most majority and the most preferable thing' is incorrect and confusing. 'My majority preference' or 'my main preference' is clearer. Also, 'the my' is incorrect pronoun/determiner usage. This correction improves pronoun and determiner use.

× Moreover, in library there was a quiet environment so I can sit there and I can also study for about long hours without getting bored because in library you get more focused in comparison to your houses.

✓ Moreover, in the library there is a quiet environment, so I can sit there and study for long hours without getting bored because in the library you can focus more compared to your house.

The phrase 'in library there was a quiet environment' should be 'in the library there is a quiet environment' to correctly use 'there is' for existence and present tense. Also, 'your houses' should be singular 'your house' for comparison. This corrects the 'there be' issue and plural usage.

× I dislike library when I was a kid because I think when you were a kid you most prefer to watch cartoons and play games instead of taking the burden of reading and doing all the study in library.

✓ I disliked the library when I was a kid because I think when you are a kid you mostly prefer to watch cartoons and play games instead of taking the burden of reading and studying in the library.

The verb 'dislike' should be in past tense 'disliked' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'most prefer' should be 'mostly prefer' to correctly use the adverb. 'Doing all the study' is better as 'studying'. This corrects past tense and adverb usage.

× I dislike library when I was a kid because I think when you were a kid you most prefer to watch cartoons and play games instead of taking the burden of reading and doing all the study in library.

✓ I disliked the library when I was a kid because I think when you are a kid you mostly prefer to watch cartoons and play games instead of taking the burden of reading and studying in the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Missing 'the' before 'library' is incorrect. This correction adds 'the' appropriately.

× It's a ********.

✓ It's a burden.

The original sentence contains '********' which seems to be a placeholder or censored word. Assuming the intended word is 'burden', this correction clarifies the pronoun 'It' refers to the library or studying, making the sentence meaningful.

× So I think when I was a kid I did not like and often visit library.

✓ So I think when I was a kid I did not like and did not often visit the library.

The phrase 'did not like and often visit' mixes past negative with present tense 'visit'. It should be 'did not like and did not often visit' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'library' needs 'the'. This corrects past tense and article usage.

× Moreover, their schools and their high class standard of education give a lot of pressure to students and I think the kids were also prefer to visit library to manage their overall schedule and to focus and study a lot.

✓ Moreover, their schools and their high-class standard of education give a lot of pressure to students, and I think the kids also prefer to visit the library to manage their overall schedule and to focus and study a lot.

The phrase 'were also prefer' is incorrect modal/verb usage. It should be 'also prefer' to express present habitual action. Also, 'high class' should be hyphenated 'high-class', and 'library' needs 'the'. This corrects modal verb and article usage.