Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Javobingiz tabiiy va tushunarli, lekin gaplaringizni yanada aniqroq va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qilish uchun e'tibor bering. Masalan, 'I cannot go often to library' o'rniga 'I cannot go to the library often' deyish yaxshiroq. Shuningdek, 'I am always hurry to library' o'rniga 'I always hurry to the library' deb ayting. Gaplaringizni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilishga harakat qiling.

Exemplo: No, I don't go to the library often because I have a hectic schedule. However, whenever I have free time, I always hurry to the library because it is my comfort zone and a convenient place to study.

Sugestão: Javobingizda fikrlaringizni yanada aniq va mantiqiy bog'lash uchun bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, 'I study Korean and English' deb aniqroq ayting. 'I work on myself especially' jumlasi noaniq, uni aniqroq qilib, nima qilayotganingizni tushuntiring. Shuningdek, 'e-mail ebooks' o'rniga 'e-books' deb ayting. Gaplaringizni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilishga harakat qiling.

Exemplo: In the library, I usually study Korean and English. I especially focus on improving my skills by doing mock exams. Also, I read e-books there. Moreover, I enjoy sharing my opinions and ideas with other book lovers.

Sugestão: Javobingizda grammatik xatolarga e'tibor bering. Masalan, 'didn't used to' o'rniga 'didn't use to' deb aytiladi. 'They work with both for this reason' jumlasi noaniq va noto'g'ri, uni aniqroq qilib tushuntiring. Gaplaringizni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilib, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning.

Exemplo: No, I didn't use to go to the library when I was a kid because my parents were very busy and didn't have enough time to take me. However, when I grew up, I started going to the library with my friends.

Sugestão: Javobingiz savolga to'liq javob bermaydi va grammatik jihatdan noto'g'ri. Savolga aniq javob bering va fikrlaringizni mantiqiy bog'lang. Masalan, 'I rarely see foreigners in the library because I live in Uzbekistan, where mostly Russian and Korean people live' deb ayting. Shuningdek, savolga to'g'ridan-to'g'ri javob berishga harakat qiling.

Exemplo: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library here because I live in Uzbekistan, where most foreigners are Russian and Korean people.

× For this reason I cannot go often to library.

✓ For this reason, I cannot go often to the library.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so the definite article 'the' is required before it.

× But whenever I have time I am always hurry to library because it's my comfort zone and convenient place.

✓ But whenever I have time, I always hurry to the library because it's my comfort zone and a convenient place.

The adverb 'always' should come before the verb 'hurry'. Also, 'hurry' needs to be in base form after 'I' and 'to the library' requires the definite article 'the'. Additionally, 'a' is needed before 'convenient place' as it is a singular countable noun.

× I study from Korean language and English language.

✓ I study Korean and English languages.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here. We say 'study' a language without 'from'. Also, 'language' should be plural when referring to more than one language.

× I work on myself especially.

✓ I especially work on myself.

The adverb 'especially' should be placed before the verb for clarity. The phrase 'work on myself' is acceptable but could be clearer with context.

× I do like mock exams there and also use e-mail ebooks just to read those.

✓ I do like mock exams there and also use e-mail ebooks just to read them.

The pronoun 'those' is less appropriate here; 'them' is better to refer to ebooks. Also, 'e-mail ebooks' is acceptable but could be clearer as 'e-books'.

× In the library I can share my opinions, ideas with other book lovers too.

✓ In the library, I can share my opinions and ideas with other book lovers too.

A comma is needed after 'library' for clarity. Also, 'opinions, ideas' should be connected with 'and'.

× Unfortunately my parents didn't used to take me to the library or book shops because they didn't have enough time.

✓ Unfortunately, my parents didn't use to take me to the library or bookshops because they didn't have enough time.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb 'use' is required, not 'used'. Also, 'bookshops' is one word.

× They work with both for this reason.

✓ They worked both jobs for this reason.

The sentence is about past events, so past tense 'worked' is appropriate. Also, 'work with both' is unclear; likely meaning they worked both jobs.

× No, but when I grew up I started to go library with my friends.

✓ No, but when I grew up, I started to go to the library with my friends.

The phrase 'go library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. Also, a comma after 'grew up' improves readability.

× I rarely see the foreigners because I live in Uzbekistan and there are mostly there lives, mostly Russian and Korean people.

✓ I rarely see foreigners because I live in Uzbekistan, and mostly Russian and Korean people live here.

'The foreigners' is incorrect without context; 'foreigners' is better. The phrase 'there are mostly there lives' is ungrammatical; it should be 'mostly Russian and Korean people live here'.