Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "first of all" and "moreover" together. Also, use correct prepositions such as "go to the library" and correct grammar like "study by myself". Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences and use linking words effectively.

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my home. It takes about 15 to 20 minutes to get there, so I prefer reading ebooks and studying at home, which is more convenient for me.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and lacks clarity. Use past tense correctly (e.g., "did offer" instead of "do offer") and avoid repeating "I do" unnecessarily. Also, try to connect your ideas smoothly using linking words and be more specific about what you enjoyed in the library.

Exemplo: When I was a kid, my school had a library that everyone could use. During library periods, I enjoyed reading storybooks and exploring the dictionary to learn new words, as well as discovering information about different animals and species.

Sugestão: Your answer has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently (e.g., "I visited"), avoid unnecessary repetition of "do", and improve sentence structure. Also, try to be more concise and clear, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I visited the library often when I was a kid, especially during school time. I used it for my studies and to read new books. Once, I even went to a public library to find a book for a project.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and repetitions. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use correct verb forms (e.g., "a survey was conducted"). Also, try to give a more complete and coherent answer with linking words and specific details.

Exemplo: I am not very sure about Chinese kids, but I read that a recent survey was conducted which shows that Chinese students tend to visit libraries more often than students from other countries.

× No, I do not go to a library because first of all I do like to read ebooks or the material I have.

✓ No, I do not go to the library because first of all I do like to read ebooks or the material I have.

In this context, 'library' refers to a specific place known to the speaker, so the definite article 'the' should be used instead of the indefinite article 'a'.

× if I wanted to go library it took almost 15 to 20 minutes.

✓ if I wanted to go to the library it took almost 15 to 20 minutes.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' here as it refers to a specific library.

× So staying at home and study by my own self is more convenient.

✓ So staying at home and studying by myself is more convenient.

The phrase 'study by my own self' is incorrect. The correct reflexive pronoun is 'myself' and the verb should be in the gerund form 'studying' to match 'staying'. This improves sentence structure and clarity.

× my school do offer a library for everyone

✓ my school did offer a library for everyone

The subject 'my school' is singular, so the verb should be 'does' in present tense or 'did' in past tense. Since the sentence refers to the past ('when I was a kid'), 'did' is appropriate.

× my school do offer a library for everyone

✓ my school did offer a library for everyone

No article needed before 'library' here because it is a general statement about the school's facilities.

× I do visit to a library when I was a kid.

✓ I did visit the library when I was a kid.

The verb 'visit' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, 'the library' is correct because it refers to a specific library known in context. The past tense 'did visit' matches the time frame.

× I do visit to a library when I was a kid.

✓ I did visit the library when I was a kid.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the past tense auxiliary 'did' is appropriate instead of 'do'.

× I do visit to a library when I was a kid.

✓ I did visit the library when I was a kid.

The verb 'visit' should not be followed by the preposition 'to'.

× Specially I do visit to the library when in my school time

✓ Especially, I did visit the library during my school time

'Especially' is the correct adverb. 'Did visit' is past tense. 'During' is the correct preposition for a time period. 'School time' is better phrased as 'my school time' or 'my time at school'.

× I do visit to a library when in my school time

✓ I did visit the library during my school time

The verb 'visit' should not be followed by 'to'. Also, 'during' is the correct preposition to indicate a time period.

× to seek for a book for my project.

✓ to seek a book for my project.

The verb 'seek' is not followed by the preposition 'for'.

× Chinese Chinese Chinese learner do used to visit to a library rather than other students around the world as they were more.

✓ Chinese learners do use to visit the library more than other students around the world.

The repetition 'Chinese Chinese Chinese' is an error. 'Learner' should be plural 'learners'. 'Do used to' is incorrect; it should be 'do use to' or better 'are used to'. The phrase 'visit to a library' should be 'visit the library'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.