Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because I love reading. It offers me a chance to discover new books and enjoy a quiet environment for learning.

Sugestão: Be careful with word choice and clarity. 'Gain some money' is incorrect here. Use precise vocabulary and link your ideas logically. Keep your answer focused and avoid vague expressions.

Exemplo: Usually, I go to the library to borrow books and study. I find it a peaceful place that helps me gain knowledge and improve my skills.

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I didn't often go to the library on my own because our school had a large library. However, our teachers took us there regularly to read storybooks, which sparked my interest in reading.

Sugestão: Clarify your opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use appropriate linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid vague or confusing statements.

Exemplo: In my opinion, Chinese kids don't often go to public libraries because most schools have their own libraries. Therefore, students usually rely on school resources for studying and reading.

× As I am such kind of person who love reading books, so yes I usually go to library for for giving such a new experience and for getting new books.

✓ As I am the kind of person who loves reading books, yes I usually go to the library to have new experiences and to get new books.

The phrase 'such kind of person' should be 'the kind of person' to be grammatically correct. 'Love' should be 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'person' (third person singular issue). 'Go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'. The phrase 'for for giving such a new experience' is incorrect; it should be 'to have new experiences' to express purpose correctly. Similarly, 'for getting new books' should be 'to get new books'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× As I am such kind of person who love reading books, so yes I usually go to library for for giving such a new experience and for getting new books.

✓ As I am the kind of person who loves reading books, yes I usually go to the library to have new experiences and to get new books.

'Love' should be 'loves' because the subject 'person' is singular third person, requiring the verb to be in third person singular form.

× Usually I go to library to gain some money and to borrow books.

✓ Usually I go to the library to borrow books.

'Go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'. The phrase 'to gain some money' is inappropriate in this context as libraries do not provide money; it should be removed for clarity and correctness.

× Also I believe that library is such a heaven kind place which give us more and more knowledge and give us more experience.

✓ Also, I believe that the library is a kind of heaven, a place that gives us more and more knowledge and experience.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'such a heaven kind place' is awkward; 'a kind of heaven' is more natural. 'Which give' should be 'that gives' to agree with singular 'place'. 'Give us more experience' is better as 'gives us more experience' for subject-verb agreement.

× Well, if I remember, I don't go to the library when I was a child because our school has a large library.

✓ Well, if I remember correctly, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because our school had a large library.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't go' with past time 'when I was a child'. The verb should be in past tense 'didn't go' to match the time frame. Also, 'has' should be 'had' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Our teachers usually take us to the library for to read story books and gain some more experience.

✓ Our teachers usually take us to the library to read story books and gain more experience.

'For to read' is incorrect; the correct infinitive form is 'to read'. 'Some more experience' is better as 'more experience' for natural phrasing.

× And that's from that I got interested in reading books.

✓ And that's when I got interested in reading books.

'That's from that' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'that's when' to indicate the time or event when the interest began.

× As per my opinion, I don't think so.

✓ In my opinion, I don't think so.

'As per my opinion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'In my opinion' to express personal viewpoint.

× Chinese students go to a library because I think their school should provide this much knowledge to them.

✓ Chinese students go to the library because I think their schools should provide this much knowledge to them.

'A library' should be 'the library' to refer to a specific place. 'School' should be plural 'schools' to agree with plural 'students' unless referring to a single school. This correction improves subject-verb and article agreement.