Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is quite long and a bit repetitive. Try to be more concise and direct. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like "to be honest" and "don't get me wrong". Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading in my own comfortable space, and I find it inconvenient to travel there."

Exemplo: I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading in my own comfortable space, and I find it inconvenient to travel there.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using better linking words. Instead of repeating "books in the library," you can say "borrow books" or "use resources." Also, try to combine sentences for better flow. For example: "When I visit the library, I usually borrow books that I don't have at home, especially those not available online, to help with my studies."

Exemplo: When I visit the library, I usually borrow books that I don't have at home, especially those not available online, to help with my studies.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be more natural by correcting grammar and making sentences smoother. For example, instead of "give lessons learned from," say "share what we learned from the books." Also, avoid repeating "back then" and "when I was a kid."

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a kid, my family had a tradition of visiting the nearest library every weekend to pick books together. After reading, we would share what we learned from them.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, "libel kids" is incorrect. Also, the explanation is confusing. Try to be clearer and more accurate. For example: "Chinese kids often do not visit libraries because many books are in English, which is not their first language, making it difficult for them to read."

Exemplo: Chinese kids often do not visit libraries because many books are in English, which is not their first language, making it difficult for them to read.

× Besides, I don't like the hassle of walking down to the nearby library simply because I want to reach.

✓ Besides, I don't like the hassle of walking down to the nearby library simply because I want to go there.

The verb 'reach' is incorrectly used without an object or preposition. The correct phrase is 'go there' to indicate the destination. Using 'reach' requires an object, e.g., 'reach the library.' Here, 'go there' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Our family every weekend would take a trip down to the nearest library and would pick a book together.

✓ Our family would take a trip to the nearest library every weekend and pick a book together.

The phrase 'every weekend' is better placed after the verb phrase for natural word order. Also, 'take a trip down to' is wordy; 'take a trip to' is sufficient. The correction improves sentence flow and preposition use.

× After reading, we get home and give lessons learned from.

✓ After reading, we get home and share the lessons we learned.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Give lessons learned from' is incorrect; it should be 'share the lessons we learned' to clearly express the intended meaning.

× This is because going to the library would entail them learning a new language or trying to read books in English language and their more traditional speakers than English speakers in China.

✓ This is because going to the library would entail them learning a new language or trying to read books in English, and they are more traditional speakers than English speakers in China.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used; it should be 'they are' to correctly refer to the subject. Also, the sentence is clarified by adding a comma and restructuring for better meaning.

× Because of this, it deters people from using the libel kids.

✓ Because of this, it deters kids from using the library.

The phrase 'using the libel kids' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'using the library' to make sense. The sentence structure is corrected to convey the intended meaning clearly.