Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally relevant but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I will go', you can say 'I always take the opportunity to visit the library.'

Exemplo: I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment free from distractions, which helps me concentrate on my assignments and projects. Moreover, I prefer borrowing books rather than buying them, as it saves money and allows me to read a wide variety of materials. Therefore, whenever I have the chance, I make sure to visit the library.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and has some awkward phrasing. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect your points. Avoid filler words like 'you know'.

Exemplo: I usually go to the library to work on my assignments and projects. Additionally, when I need to research a specific topic that I cannot find online, I visit the library to broaden my knowledge.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using plural forms correctly. Also, use linking words like 'and' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to go to the library every weekend with my parents when I was a kid. It was a fantastic place to discover new books and stories, and it was also a quiet place to do assignments and homework.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to organize your answer logically. Also, be careful with word choice, for example, 'access' instead of 'assess'.

Exemplo: I am not very sure about Chinese kids, but I think many of them enjoy going to the library. However, with the development of digital technology, they can also access various resources online, which might reduce their visits to the library.

× I also love to borrow book rather than buying it who sent me a time and I can read a wide variety of book in the library.

✓ I also love to borrow books rather than buying them because it saves me time and I can read a wide variety of books in the library.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to the plural noun 'books'. Using singular forms here is incorrect when talking about more than one item.

× I also love to borrow book rather than buying it who sent me a time and I can read a wide variety of book in the library.

✓ I also love to borrow books rather than buying them because it saves me time and I can read a wide variety of books in the library.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'books', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them' for plural nouns. Also, 'who sent me a time' is unclear and likely a misuse; it should be 'because it saves me time'.

× I also love to borrow book rather than buying it who sent me a time and I can read a wide variety of book in the library.

✓ I also love to borrow books rather than buying them because it saves me time and I can read a wide variety of books in the library.

The phrase 'a wide variety of book' should be 'a wide variety of books' because 'variety' implies multiple items, so the noun should be plural.

× So whenever I had a chance to go to the library, I will go, I will go there.

✓ So whenever I have a chance to go to the library, I will go there.

The phrase 'had a chance' is past tense, but the sentence talks about future or habitual action. It should be present tense 'have a chance' to match the future tense 'will go'.

× I usually go to the library to do my assignment and my project, but I also go to the library if I need to do a research on a specific topic where I identify, you know, online.

✓ I usually go to the library to do my assignments and my projects, but I also go to the library if I need to do research on a specific topic that I identify online.

The phrase 'do a research' is incorrect; 'research' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also, 'where I identify' is unclear; 'that I identify' is more appropriate. 'Assignments' and 'projects' should be plural to match general usage.

× I usually go to the library to do my assignment and my project, but I also go to the library if I need to do a research on a specific topic where I identify, you know, online.

✓ I usually go to the library to do my assignments and my projects, but I also go to the library if I need to do research on a specific topic that I identify online.

'Assignment' and 'project' should be plural 'assignments' and 'projects' because they refer to multiple tasks generally.

× Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid with my parents in every weekend.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid with my parents every weekend.

The phrase 'in every weekend' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted, so it should be 'every weekend' without 'in'.

× Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid with my parents in every weekend.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid with my parents every weekend.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'every weekend'. The correct expression is simply 'every weekend' without a preposition.

× It was a fantastic place to discover new books and stories, and it was a quiet place to do assignment and homeworks.

✓ It was a fantastic place to discover new books and stories, and it was a quiet place to do assignments and homework.

'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to indicate multiple tasks. 'Homeworks' is incorrect; 'homework' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form.

× Well, I didn't know that much about the Chinese kid, but I think I think most, not all of the Chinese kid like love to go to the land because since there is a there, since there has been a huge development in a digital technology and they can assess and they can, they are, they can assess their, they can assess their issue, they can assess different types of things.

✓ Well, I don't know much about Chinese kids, but I think most, not all, Chinese kids love to go to the library because there has been huge development in digital technology and they can access different types of resources.

'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' when referring to children in general. 'Like love' is redundant; 'love' alone is sufficient. 'Land' is incorrect; it should be 'library'. 'Assess' is misused; the correct word is 'access'. Also, 'a digital technology' should be 'digital technology' without 'a'.