Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use proper sentence structure. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

Exemplo: I don't often go to the library nowadays. However, when I was in school and college, I visited the library about three times a week to study and borrow books.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Start with a direct response, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'play around' in this context.

Exemplo: As an engineering student, I usually read engineering textbooks in the library. For example, I often explore the physics section to learn about interesting topics related to my studies.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by reducing repetition and improving sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid informal expressions like 'not my cup of tea'.

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I didn't often go to the library because I was more interested in playing sports like cricket, football, and volleyball. However, now as an engineering student, I visit the library regularly to study and read books.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in India, many children visit libraries regularly. This usually depends on their parents' encouragement and their personal interest in reading.

× Not actually.

✓ Not actually, I do not.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb, which is necessary for a complete sentence in English. Adding 'I do not' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I like starting from a childhood.

✓ I liked starting from childhood.

The verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to match the past time frame indicated by 'starting from childhood'. Also, 'a childhood' is incorrect; 'childhood' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article.

× I used to go to school and then college and then stuff I used to play sports in on the weekends.

✓ I used to go to school and then college, and then I used to play sports on the weekends.

The sentence is run-on and unclear. Adding a comma and repeating 'I used to' clarifies the sequence. Also, 'stuff I used to play sports in' is awkward and unnecessary; 'play sports on the weekends' is sufficient.

× But not visiting libraries my habit but I used to visit library while I'm in my school and in my college I used to go to library like like thrice.

✓ But visiting libraries was not my habit, but I used to visit the library while I was in school and college; I used to go to the library about three times a week.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and article usage. 'Visiting libraries my habit' lacks a verb and article. 'While I'm in my school' should be past tense 'while I was in school'. 'Go to library like like thrice' is awkward; 'about three times a week' is clearer.

× Since I'm an engineering student so I prefer reading engineering books in the library and I I usually go to the engineering section and picture book and read some interesting story or interesting topic about the physics and I used to just play around.

✓ Since I'm an engineering student, I prefer reading engineering books in the library. I usually go to the engineering section and picture books and read some interesting stories or topics about physics, and I also just play around.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'Since' and 'so' together; only one is needed. Also, 'picture book' should be plural 'picture books'. 'Interesting story or interesting topic about the physics' should be plural and without 'the' before 'physics'. The sentence is long and should be split for clarity.

× Actually not.

✓ Actually, no.

The phrase 'Actually not' is incomplete and unnatural. 'Actually, no' is a more natural negative response.

× But not regularly visiting to the library.

✓ But I did not regularly visit the library.

The verb 'visit' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, the sentence needs a subject and auxiliary verb for clarity.

× That's not my cup of tea when I was a kid.

✓ That wasn't my cup of tea when I was a kid.

The phrase refers to the past, so 'wasn't' is appropriate instead of 'is not'.

× But now as an as an engineering student, I usually visit library and explore a lot of books.

✓ But now, as an engineering student, I usually visit the library and explore a lot of books.

The article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Also, the phrase 'as an as an' has a repeated word which should be corrected.

× I'm not much aware about the Chinese kids whether they go to the library or not but while while in India many people they often visit library but it depends on the situation and their need and depends on the parenthood also like if they if they were introduced to the library they'll visit the library if not like playing sports or like.

✓ I'm not very aware of whether Chinese kids go to the library or not, but in India, many people often visit the library. It depends on the situation, their needs, and also on parenthood. If they are introduced to the library, they'll visit it; if not, they might prefer playing sports or other activities.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'aware about' should be 'aware of'; 'many people they often visit library' is redundant and missing articles; 'depends on the parenthood' is awkward, better as 'depends on parenthood'; 'if they if they were introduced' is repetitive; sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity.