Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words like 'uh'. Try to make your response more concise and fluent by avoiding unnecessary pauses and redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment that helps me concentrate. Moreover, it offers a wide range of books which I can borrow instead of buying, making it convenient and economical.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many hesitations. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more precise in your descriptions.

Exemplo: Usually, I read books related to my work, which involves poetry and ceramics. For instance, I study how the kiln furnace temperature affects the glaze reactions, which helps me improve my craft.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and filler words. Try to use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and add specific details to enrich your response.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the public library in our city. Additionally, my school had a library where we borrowed books twice a week, which helped me develop my knowledge and vocabulary.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and hesitant. Try to express your opinion confidently even if you are unsure. Use clear sentences with linking words to explain your thoughts logically. Avoid filler words and be more specific in your response.

Exemplo: I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, but I believe that Chinese kids often visit libraries to increase their knowledge, as reading is encouraged in many cultures.

× I often go to library as it has a very quiet environment and it, uh, makes me, and it helps me to focus, to read books without distraction.

✓ I often go to the library as it has a very quiet environment and it, uh, makes me, and it helps me to focus, to read books without distraction.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required before the noun. Saying 'go to library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library'. This is because 'library' is a singular, countable noun and the listener knows which library is being referred to.

× Uh, and I really, uh, as library has many books.

✓ Uh, and I really, uh, as the library has many books.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before singular countable nouns in such contexts is incorrect.

× When I was a kid, I often go to library in our city, a Public Library.

✓ When I was a kid, I often went to the library in our city, a Public Library.

First, 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'When I was a kid'. Second, 'the' is required before 'library' as it refers to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect.

× When I was a kid, I often go to library in our city, a Public Library.

✓ When I was a kid, I often went to the library in our city, a Public Library.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a kid'), so the verb should be in past tense. 'Go' is present tense; it should be 'went' to maintain tense consistency.

× And additionally, my school also had a library which we had to, uh, to borrow books every twice a week and we had to finish them in that period of time.

✓ And additionally, my school also had a library from which we had to, uh, borrow books twice a week and we had to finish them in that period of time.

The phrase 'every twice a week' is incorrect; 'twice a week' suffices. Also, 'had to, uh, to borrow' has an extra 'to'. The preposition 'from' is needed to indicate the source of borrowing. The definite article 'the' before 'library' is correct here.

× And additionally, my school also had a library which we had to, uh, to borrow books every twice a week and we had to finish them in that period of time.

✓ And additionally, my school also had a library from which we had to borrow books twice a week and we had to finish them in that period of time.

The quantifier 'every twice a week' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'twice a week' without 'every'. Also, the extra 'to' after 'had to' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× Uh, this routine help us to develop knowledge and vocab, uh, also also.

✓ Uh, this routine helps us to develop knowledge and vocabulary, uh, also.

The subject 'this routine' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular present tense). Also, 'vocab' is informal; 'vocabulary' is more appropriate. The repeated 'also' is redundant and should be removed.

× Umm, I don't know much about the Chinese kids often go to the library as I have not much exposed to those, uh, Chinese, uh, culture.

✓ Umm, I don't know much about whether Chinese kids often go to the library as I have not been much exposed to Chinese culture.

The original sentence lacks clarity and correct pronoun usage. 'I have not much exposed' is incorrect; it should be 'I have not been much exposed'. Also, 'those Chinese culture' is incorrect; 'Chinese culture' is uncountable and does not need 'those'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× So, uh, I think so they might have, they might go on, uh, increase their knowledge.

✓ So, uh, I think they might go to increase their knowledge.

The phrase 'might have' is incomplete and unclear here. 'Might go on' is awkward; the correct modal verb usage is 'might go to' followed by the verb 'increase'. The sentence is simplified for clarity and correctness.