List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to use clear and correct sentences, avoid redundancy, and provide a complete thought. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I don't usually make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously when I see something I like in the store. However, for bigger or more important shopping trips, I do prepare a list to stay organized.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide a clear reason for not making a list.

Exemplo: I don't make a list for my work because my tasks are the same every day. Therefore, I already know what to do without needing a list.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use relevant vocabulary. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to keep things spontaneous. For instance, they may feel that planning too much reduces the excitement of making decisions on the spot. Additionally, some people might simply forget to make a list.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your preference clearly and provide reasons using complete sentences and appropriate linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and I can easily edit it whenever I need to. Using paper lists can be less practical for me.

× I don't usually make shopping list because I prefer to buy things sporting as it when I see something I like in the store.

✓ I don't usually make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously when I see something I like in the store.

The phrase 'shopping list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'sporting as it' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'spontaneously'. Using the correct article and adverb improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes I enjoy impulse buying. Each means I pick up items that catch my eyes at that moment.

✓ Sometimes I enjoy impulse buying, which means I pick up items that catch my eye at that moment.

The sentence 'Each means' is incorrect; 'which means' is the proper conjunction to explain the previous statement. Also, 'eyes' should be singular 'eye' as the phrase is idiomatic.

× However, for bigger or more important shopping trips.

✓ However, for bigger or more important shopping trips, I do make a list.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and predicate. Adding a complete clause clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× No, I don't make a list for my work. Big 'cause every day when I go to work.

✓ No, I don't make a list for my work because every day when I go to work,

'Big' is incorrect here; it seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'because'. Replacing it with 'because' corrects the sentence meaning and structure.

× My job doesn't change every day, I'm doing the same job each and every day.

✓ My job doesn't change every day; I do the same job each and every day.

The phrase 'I'm doing' suggests a continuous action, but the context is habitual, so simple present 'I do' is appropriate.

× So that's why I don't make a list of for my job 'cause I will all doing the same job.

✓ So that's why I don't make a list for my job because I am always doing the same job.

'A list of for' is incorrect; it should be 'a list for'. Also, 'I will all doing' is ungrammatical; 'I am always doing' correctly expresses the habitual action.

× Some people they don't like making list because they find it time consuming or prefer to keep things spontaneous.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to keep things spontaneous.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is appropriate here. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× For example, they might feel that cleaning too much takes away excitement for making decision on the post.

✓ For example, they might feel that planning too much takes away the excitement of making decisions on the spot.

'Cleaning too much' is likely a mishearing of 'planning too much'. Also, 'making decision' should be plural 'making decisions', and 'on the post' should be 'on the spot'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× On the spot it is Nellie.

✓ On the spot, it is necessary to be spontaneous.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. Providing a complete sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× Some people may simply forget to pick list.

✓ Some people may simply forget to bring a list.

'Pick list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bring a list' or 'make a list'. Also, 'list' should be preceded by an article 'a'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone. The naked in the paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper.

'The naked in the paper' is incorrect and unclear. The intended comparison is between phone and paper, so 'rather than on paper' is appropriate.

× 'Cause when I using my phone is much is it for me?

✓ Because when I use my phone, it is much easier for me.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Correcting verb form 'using' to 'use' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.