List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use linking words to connect your points smoothly. For example, you could say: "Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items and manage my budget effectively."

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items and manage my budget effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use a clear topic sentence and link your ideas logically. For example: "Yes, I sometimes make a list before work to ensure I don't forget important tasks, which helps me stay organised."

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes make a list before work to ensure I don't forget important tasks, which helps me stay organised.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to organise your points. For example: "Some people avoid making lists because they feel confident managing their budget or tasks without one. Others might find it too time-consuming or simply prefer to rely on their memory."

Exemplo: Some people avoid making lists because they feel confident managing their budget or tasks without one. Others might find it too time-consuming or simply prefer to rely on their memory.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and informal. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. For example: "I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check my list anytime."

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check my list anytime.

× Yes, I do make a list when I'm shopping because it helps me to not forget anything important and it also helps me to keep my budget.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I'm shopping because it helps me not to forget anything important and it also helps me to keep my budget.

The phrase 'helps me to not forget' is less natural than 'helps me not to forget'. The infinitive 'to' should not be split by 'not'. This is a common issue with verb + -ing or infinitive forms. The correction improves fluency and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, sometimes before I work I would make a list to prevent that I forget anything important for my job and it also helps me to remember every essential things I need to do.

✓ Yes, sometimes before I work I make a list to prevent forgetting anything important for my job and it also helps me to remember every essential thing I need to do.

The use of 'would' here is incorrect because it suggests a hypothetical or habitual past action, but the context is present habitual. Also, 'to prevent that I forget' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to prevent forgetting'. Additionally, 'every essential things' is incorrect because 'every' requires a singular noun, so it should be 'every essential thing'.

× Yes, sometimes before I work I would make a list to prevent that I forget anything important for my job and it also helps me to remember every essential things I need to do.

✓ Yes, sometimes before I work I make a list to prevent forgetting anything important for my job and it also helps me to remember every essential thing I need to do.

The phrase 'every essential things' is incorrect because 'every' is used with singular nouns. The correct phrase is 'every essential thing'. This is an issue with quantifiers and noun agreement.

× So I think if some people don't make a list during shopping like they feel confident about their budget or maybe they just lazy, but if some people don't make a list when they're working, like for example weren't there in job, I think they are like trusted ability and they are confident about it.

✓ So I think if some people don't make a list during shopping, it's because they feel confident about their budget or maybe they are just lazy, but if some people don't make a list when they're working, for example, if they weren't there at the job, I think they are trusted and confident about their ability.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'they just lazy' lacks the verb 'are'; 'weren't there in job' is incorrect preposition and structure; 'they are like trusted ability' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction fixes pronoun use, verb presence, prepositions, and clarifies meaning.

× So I think if some people don't make a list during shopping like they feel confident about their budget or maybe they just lazy, but if some people don't make a list when they're working, like for example weren't there in job, I think they are like trusted ability and they are confident about it.

✓ So I think if some people don't make a list during shopping, it's because they feel confident about their budget or maybe they are just lazy, but if some people don't make a list when they're working, for example, if they weren't there at the job, I think they are trusted and confident about their ability.

The phrase 'weren't there in job' uses incorrect preposition 'in' and lacks clarity. The correct preposition is 'at' for a specific job location. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because like if you wrote everything on paper, you cannot take the paper every time, but if you wrote a list on your phone, you can just quickly remembered it and you could just take your phone and check it. Yeah.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because if you write everything on paper, you cannot take the paper every time, but if you write a list on your phone, you can just quickly remember it and you can just take your phone and check it.

The original uses past tense 'wrote' and 'remembered' incorrectly when talking about general truths or habits, which require present tense. Also, 'you could just take your phone' is better as 'you can just take your phone' for consistency. The correction fixes tense and pronoun usage for clarity and grammatical accuracy.