List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and structured. Avoid redundancy such as repeating the idea of having a good memory twice. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a direct answer, then explain with supporting details using connectors like 'because' or 'however'.

Exemplo: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I have a good memory. However, if I forget something, I can always call my mom to remind me.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by directly answering the question first and then providing reasons. Also, avoid repeating the same idea about having a good memory. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: I don't have a job yet since I'm still in college. Regarding my assignments, I usually don't make lists because I find it time-consuming and prefer to remember tasks mentally.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar errors and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your points logically. Also, be careful with word choice and tense consistency.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and find writing things down unnecessary. Also, they may think it wastes time, so they prefer to remember tasks mentally.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar mistakes and using linking words for better flow. For example, use 'because' to explain your preference and 'however' to contrast paper lists. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'just' in this context.

Exemplo: If I had to choose, I would prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me and easy to check. However, paper lists can get damaged or lost, so they are less reliable.

× If I had to choose between them, I would rather making lists on my phone because my phone is always with me and I can check it at any time just to remember the items I forgot.

✓ If I had to choose between them, I would rather make lists on my phone because my phone is always with me and I can check it at any time just to remember the items I forgot.

The phrase 'would rather' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'would rather making' is incorrect; it should be 'would rather make'. This is a common modal verb usage rule.

× Or a day may also not like making lists and find it a waste of time.

✓ Or some people may also not like making lists and find it a waste of time.

The phrase 'a day' is incorrect in this context because it refers to a time period, not people. The intended meaning is about people who may not like making lists, so 'some people' is the correct plural subject here.

× So they don't write the things down and they preferred keeping items in their mind.

✓ So they don't write the things down and they prefer keeping items in their mind.

The verb 'preferred' is in the past tense, but the sentence context is present tense ('don't write'). Also, 'prefer' should agree with the plural subject 'they'. Therefore, 'preferred' should be corrected to 'prefer' to maintain tense consistency and subject-verb agreement.