List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I usually make a shopping list on paper before going to the supermarket because I often buy many items, sometimes more than ten.'

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on paper before going to the supermarket because I often buy many items, sometimes more than ten. This helps me remember everything I need and saves time while shopping.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helps you and your colleagues, using linking words for clarity. For example, 'Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized. Moreover, sharing the list with my colleagues allows them to keep track of tasks.'

Exemplo: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized. Moreover, sharing the list with my colleagues allows them to keep track of tasks and collaborate effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer does not address the question and is unclear. Try to give a direct response with reasons why some people might dislike making lists, using linking words and specific details. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things mentally.'

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things mentally. Additionally, they may feel that lists restrict their flexibility.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks detail. Provide a clear preference with reasons, using linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I prefer making lists on paper because it is easier to see and I find writing by hand helps me remember better.'

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because it is easier to see and I find writing by hand helps me remember better. Also, paper lists don't depend on battery life or technology.

× Yes sure I make the list when I go shopping out paper to supermarket mostly.

✓ Yes sure I make a list when I go shopping, mostly using paper at the supermarket.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'the list' and 'out paper to supermarket'. 'The list' should be 'a list' because it is not a specific list previously mentioned. Also, 'out paper to supermarket' is unclear; it should be 'using paper at the supermarket' to express the idea of making a list on paper while shopping.

× I made so many things so if I need anything more than 10 so I will need.

✓ I make many things, so if I need more than 10 items, I will add them.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'made' (past tense) instead of 'make' (present tense) to match the context. Also, 'anything more than 10' is vague; it should specify 'more than 10 items'. The sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Yes, are you really make a list for my work? Because it helps to organize my work and the password is help to my colleagues also so they can see the list.

✓ Yes, I really make a list for my work because it helps me organize my work, and the password helps my colleagues so they can see the list.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'are you really make' instead of 'I really make'. Also, 'the password is help to my colleagues' is incorrect; it should be 'the password helps my colleagues'. Pronouns and verb forms need correction for proper meaning and grammar.

× Awesome, I didn't make the listings for a different phone list.

✓ Actually, I don't make lists on my phone.

The phrase 'didn't make the listings for a different phone list' is confusing and incorrect. The correct expression is 'I don't make lists on my phone' to clearly convey the intended meaning.

× Paper because if I write down wallpaper is easy to see also this paper work.

✓ Paper, because if I write it down on paper, it is easy to see; also, this paperwork is helpful.

The original sentence misuses 'wallpaper' instead of 'on paper' and lacks clarity. The pronoun 'it' is needed to refer to what is written down. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.