List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid unclear or incorrect phrases such as 'until old school over the budget'. Use clear and natural expressions to explain your ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually bring a checklist when I go shopping. It helps me keep track of what I need and prevents me from spending too much.

Sugestão: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid unclear or incorrect words like 'Taco' and 'I'm last week'. Use linking words properly to connect ideas and provide specific examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a To-Do List for my work. This helps me stay focused and avoid distractions. For example, last week I finished all my tasks on time by following my list and crossing off each item as I completed it.

Sugestão: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms, such as 'hate making' instead of 'hate make'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more concise.

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because it can cause anxiety and pressure to complete tasks. Additionally, some prefer a flexible schedule, while others trust their memory and don't feel the need for lists.

Sugestão: Work on clarity and correct word usage. For example, 'I can't carry it about' should be 'I can carry it easily'. Avoid unclear phrases like 'make it all more key all over' and 'having a people can be a big conversation'. Keep your answer clear and concise.

Exemplo: I prefer to make my To-Do List on my phone because I can carry it easily and edit it whenever I want. It's more convenient than using paper lists.

× This helps me to keep track of my shopping and also allows me to shop efficiently until old school over the budget.

✓ This helps me to keep track of my shopping and also allows me to shop efficiently without going over the budget.

The phrase 'until old school over the budget' is incorrect and unclear. The correct preposition to express not exceeding the budget is 'without going over the budget'. This correction clarifies the meaning and uses the appropriate preposition.

× Yes, I usually have it To Do List for my work.

✓ Yes, I usually have a To Do List for my work.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used before 'To Do List'. The correct article here is 'a' because 'To Do List' is a singular countable noun. Removing 'it' and adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× and so also avoid unnecessary distractions and so Taco everything on my list more effectively.

✓ and also avoid unnecessary distractions and tackle everything on my list more effectively.

The phrase 'and so Taco everything' is incorrect. The intended word is 'tackle', meaning to deal with. Also, 'and so also' is redundant; 'and also' is sufficient. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× I'm last week I was able to finish my work because then I wrote them down and across them as I went.

✓ Last week I was able to finish my work because I wrote them down and crossed them off as I went.

The phrase 'I'm last week' is incorrect; it should be 'Last week'. Also, 'across them' should be 'crossed them off' to indicate marking tasks as completed. These corrections fix tense and phrase usage errors.

× I believe some people hate make a checklist for work because of the anxiety and also the pressure that comes to completing them.

✓ I believe some people hate making a checklist for work because of the anxiety and also the pressure that comes with completing them.

The verb 'hate' should be followed by the gerund form 'making' not the base form 'make'. Also, the phrase 'pressure that comes to completing' should be 'pressure that comes with completing'. These corrections fix verb form and preposition usage.

× Some people would rather have a flexible day and also some people are much more accountable and a much more reliable on their memory so they don't quite find the necessity to use a journal or a checklist.

✓ Some people would rather have a flexible day, and some people are much more accountable and much more reliable in their memory, so they don't find it necessary to use a journal or a checklist.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions and incorrect article usage. 'and also some people' is better as 'and some people'. 'a much more reliable' should be 'much more reliable' without 'a'. 'on their memory' should be 'in their memory'. Also, 'don't quite find the necessity' is better as 'don't find it necessary'. These corrections improve sentence flow and grammar.

× I would rather have in my phone for my To Do List.

✓ I would rather have it on my phone for my To Do List.

The phrase 'have in my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to something stored or kept on a device. Also, the pronoun 'it' is needed to refer to the list. This correction fixes preposition and pronoun usage.

× This is because with my phone I can't carry it about and I can also change anything I want just by simple delete method without having to make it all more key all over.

✓ This is because I can carry my phone about, and I can also change anything I want just by a simple delete method without having to rewrite it all over.

The original sentence has incorrect negation and awkward phrasing. 'I can't carry it about' should be 'I can carry my phone about'. 'make it all more key all over' is unclear; the intended meaning is likely 'rewrite it all over'. These corrections fix preposition use, negation, and clarity.

× Also the idea of having a people can be a big conversation.

✓ Also, the idea of having a paper list can be a big conversation.

The phrase 'having a people' is incorrect; likely the intended word is 'paper' referring to a paper list. This correction fixes the incorrect noun usage.