List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc cơ bản, nhưng cần chú ý sử dụng thì động từ nhất quán (ví dụ: "helps" thay vì "helped") và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "important things" không cần thiết.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before going shopping because it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying. Additionally, it allows me to focus on essential items so I don't forget anything important, especially since I'm not very good at math.

Sugestão: Bạn nên cải thiện cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "forming words" hay "really annoyed". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: I don't usually make lists for my work because I find it time-consuming and not very helpful for organizing my tasks. Also, I prefer to keep my work private in my mind so others don't interfere or judge what I'm doing, which I find quite annoying.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần được sắp xếp lại để rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu chủ ngữ trong câu "is very annoying". Bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

Exemplo: I think some people avoid making lists because they feel it restricts their spontaneity and flexibility. Writing everything down can be annoying and time-consuming, especially when they can easily keep track of things without lists. So, it really depends on a person's personality.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt với ý tưởng rõ ràng và tự nhiên. Tuy nhiên, cần chú ý ngữ pháp như "making list" nên là "making lists" và tránh lỗi nhỏ như "more easier" (chỉ cần "easier"). Sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Personally, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is much more convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can quickly jot down things whenever an idea pops into my head. Moreover, digital lists are easier to edit compared to traditional paper lists.

× Moreover, it also helped me to focus on essential items and not to forget.

✓ Moreover, it also helps me to focus on essential items and not to forget.

The sentence is describing a habitual action, so the present tense 'helps' should be used instead of the past tense 'helped'.

× Important things, you know, I'm not very good at math.

✓ Important things, you know; I'm not very good at math.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks proper punctuation. Using a semicolon or separating into two sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't usually make a list forming words.

✓ I don't usually make a list of forming words.

The phrase 'make a list forming words' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'of' to indicate the content of the list: 'a list of forming words'. Alternatively, the sentence could be rephrased for clarity.

× Moreover, I want to keep my work private in my mind so that other people won't have chance to interfere in my work or in like a judgment about what I am doing.

✓ Moreover, I want to keep my work private in my mind so that other people won't have a chance to interfere in my work or pass judgment about what I am doing.

The phrase 'won't have chance' is missing the article 'a' before 'chance'. Also, 'in like a judgment' is awkward; 'pass judgment' is the correct expression.

× I found it really annoyed.

✓ I found it really annoying.

The adjective 'annoyed' describes a feeling experienced by a person, while 'annoying' describes something that causes annoyance. Here, the correct form is 'annoying' to describe the situation.

× You know, is very annoying and time-consuming to write everything down is specially when you can keep track of things easily without any problems.

✓ You know, it is very annoying and time-consuming to write everything down, especially when you can keep track of things easily without any problems.

The original sentence is missing the subject 'it' and has a misplaced 'is'. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially'. Correcting these improves sentence clarity and grammar.

× So it all comes about personality I think.

✓ So it all comes down to personality, I think.

The phrase 'comes about personality' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'comes down to personality', meaning the reason is personality.

× Personally, I prefer making list on my phone is much more convenient because I always have my phone with me and I can quickly drop things down whenever an idea pops into my head.

✓ Personally, I prefer making a list on my phone because it is much more convenient; I always have my phone with me and can quickly jot things down whenever an idea pops into my head.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'drop things down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'jot things down'. The sentence structure is improved by splitting into two clauses.

× More over, the digital list is much more easier to edit compared to a traditional paper list.

✓ Moreover, the digital list is much easier to edit compared to a traditional paper list.

The phrase 'much more easier' is redundant; 'easier' alone or 'much easier' is correct. Also, 'Moreover' is one word.