List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and includes a reason and example, which is good. However, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity and naturalness. Try to use complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent by using linking words properly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organised and ensures I don't forget anything important. For instance, having a list allows me to find everything quickly without wandering around the store, which saves me time.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question directly and provides reasons and an example, which is good. However, there are some pronunciation and grammatical mistakes that reduce clarity. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organised and remember all the tasks I need to complete. It works very well as it reduces stress and allows me to manage my duties efficiently, especially on particularly busy days.

Sugestão: Your answer attempts to explain reasons and give an example, but it contains many incomplete sentences and unclear phrases that affect understanding. Focus on forming complete, clear sentences and avoid irrelevant or confusing statements. Also, provide a clear personal opinion if asked.

Exemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient or unnecessary. For example, they may feel that writing things down takes too much time or that they can remember everything without a list. Personally, I prefer making lists because it helps me stay organised.

Sugestão: Your answer tries to explain your preference and gives an example, but there are several grammatical errors and unclear phrases that make it difficult to understand. Try to use complete sentences and clear linking words to express your ideas logically and naturally.

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. For example, when I read a handwritten list, I find it easier to focus and organise the tasks compared to using my phone.

× Yes, I always make a little when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

The word 'little' is incorrect here as it refers to quantity and is uncountable, but the intended meaning is a countable noun 'list'. The correct phrase is 'make a list'.

× For example, when I prepare a list, I can quickly and everything I need without wondering around the store.

✓ For example, when I prepare a list, I can quickly find everything I need without wandering around the store.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the verb 'find' after 'quickly'. Also, 'wondering' is incorrect; the correct word is 'wandering' meaning to move around without purpose. The sentence structure needs correction to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× There's not only saves my time be but.

✓ It not only saves my time but also helps me shop efficiently.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'There's not only saves my time be but' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'It not only saves my time but also...' to properly connect the ideas.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and remember all the tasks I need to complete.

✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and remember all the tasks I need to complete.

If the student refers to making multiple lists over time, the plural 'lists' and plural pronoun 'they' are appropriate. However, if referring to a single list, the original is correct. Since the question is general, plural form is better to indicate habitual action.

× It works really well as it reduces stress and allows me to bring real tight my duties efficiently, for instance on particule articularly busy days.

✓ It works really well as it reduces stress and allows me to carry out my duties efficiently, for instance on particularly busy days.

The phrase 'bring real tight my duties' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'carry out my duties'. Also, 'particule articularly' is a misspelling of 'particularly'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I think some people don't like making it's because they find it inconvenient and unnecessary.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and unnecessary.

The phrase 'making it's' is incorrect. The pronoun 'it's' does not fit here. The correct phrase is 'making lists' to refer to the activity of list-making.

× For example, they might feel that writing things done takes too much time or they can remember everything.

✓ For example, they might feel that writing things down takes too much time or that they can remember everything.

The phrase 'writing things done' is incorrect; it should be 'writing things down'. Also, the sentence lacks the conjunction 'that' before the second clause for parallel structure.

× We don't help.

✓ It doesn't help.

The pronoun 'We' is incorrect here because the subject is the activity of making lists. The correct pronoun is 'It' referring to the activity, and the verb should agree accordingly.

× Personally, I also prefer not to make this because I find it easier to keep.

✓ Personally, I also prefer not to make them because I find it easier to keep track of things.

The pronoun 'this' is vague and incorrect here. The plural pronoun 'them' correctly refers to 'lists'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'track of things' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on people because the writing things down helps me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because writing things down helps me.

The word 'people' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'paper'. Also, the article 'the' before 'writing' is unnecessary.

× Remember the better.

✓ Remember better.

The phrase 'Remember the better' is incorrect. The article 'the' is unnecessary and should be removed to form the correct phrase 'Remember better'.

× For example, when I read a list by hand, I found it easier to focus and record the tasks letter one the under other hand if I make a list on my phone.

✓ For example, when I read a list by hand, I find it easier to focus and record the tasks letter one under the other. On the other hand, if I make a list on my phone...

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Read' is fine in present tense (pronounced 'reed'), so 'found' should be 'find' to maintain present tense consistency. The phrase 'letter one the under other hand' is unclear and corrected to 'letter one under the other'. Also, 'on the other hand' is a fixed phrase and should be separated properly.