Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and expand slightly with a clear reason using one linking word. Correct grammar (use articles and verb forms) and avoid vague phrases. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I’m not really a fan of singing, but I enjoy listening to music because it helps me relax and improves my mood.

Sugestão: Use correct past-tense grammar and a clear topic sentence. Add a short supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., because or so) and avoid repeating words. Keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I learned basic singing at primary school because we had a music class that taught us techniques, so I really enjoyed those lessons.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and word choice (e.g., 'prefer' not 'rather to', 'private room' not 'pirate room'). Start with a clear topic sentence and give one specific reason using a linking word. Reduce repetition.

Exemplo: I prefer not to sing for other people; I like singing alone in my private room because it gives me privacy and makes me feel more relaxed.

Sugestão: Make the response grammatically correct and more specific. Use a linking word to add a second point and give a concrete example of how singing helps. Avoid filler words and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing can reduce stress by releasing tension, and it also boosts mood because singing loudly often makes people feel more energetic and confident.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence and correct grammar (e.g., 'listening to others sing'). Use a linking word to add a specific example and be concise. Fix tense and article errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing. For example, my cousin is a talented singer, and I often listen to her songs when I have free time because they cheer me up.

Sugestão: Use consistent past tense and concise structure: answer directly, then give one detail. Correct article use and verb forms, and avoid repeating the same point twice.

Exemplo: Yes, I took a singing class in primary school. The class taught basic vocal techniques, and I enjoyed it because it helped me feel more confident singing.

× When I was in primary school, there's a subject is the teach us how to sing, so I quite enjoying the class.

✓ When I was in primary school, there was a subject that taught us how to sing, so I quite enjoyed the class.

This sentence misuses 'there's' (there is) with past context; use 'there was'. Also the clause is ungrammatical: 'a subject is the teach us' should be 'a subject that taught us'. 'Quite enjoying' conflicts with past time, so use past tense 'quite enjoyed'. Suggestions: match tense consistently (past), use 'that' or 'which' to introduce the relative clause, and use past tense verb forms for completed actions. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× I do not want to sing for anyone, I rather to sing by myself in my pirate room because I can feel, I can enjoy the sense of privacy where no one disturbance.

✓ I do not want to sing for anyone; I'd rather sing by myself in my private room because I can feel and enjoy a sense of privacy where no one disturbs me.

Errors: 'rather to sing' should be 'rather sing' (rare verbs: 'rather' + base verb). 'Pirate room' is a wrong word; use 'private room'. 'Sense of privacy' needs an article 'a'. 'Where no one disturbance' is ungrammatical; use active clause 'no one disturbs me' or 'there are no disturbances'. Suggestions: use correct collocations ('rather sing', 'private room'), include articles, and use proper verb forms for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Yes, it's definitely singing is a is a source of help people to restress. Beside that is also helpful to feel happy when they sing loud.

✓ Yes, singing is definitely a way to help people relax. Besides that, it is also helpful for people to feel happy when they sing loudly.

Problems: redundant 'it's definitely' with 'singing is a is a' and awkward phrase 'source of help people to restress'. Use 'a way to help people relax' or 'a source of stress relief'. 'Beside' should be 'Besides'. Use 'helpful for people to' and adverb 'loudly' modifies 'sing'. Suggestions: simplify structure, remove redundancies, use correct adverbs and prepositions ('Besides', 'helpful for'), and choose idiomatic expressions ('relax' not 'restress'). Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I do, I enjoy listening others singing. Example one of my cousins, she is a singer she sing very well. I often listen to her music song especially when I have my free time.

✓ I do; I enjoy listening to others sing. For example, one of my cousins is a singer; she sings very well. I often listen to her songs, especially when I have free time.

Errors: 'listening others singing' needs 'listening to others sing' (preposition 'to' and base verb after 'listen to'). 'Example' should be 'For example' and needs punctuation. 'She sing' requires third person singular 'she sings'. 'Music song' is redundant; use 'songs' or 'music'. 'My free time' can be 'free time' without 'my'. Suggestions: include required prepositions, correct subject-verb agreement for third person singular, and use idiomatic noun forms ('songs'). Grammar_problem_type_id:2

× Yes I did when I was in primary school. One of the subject is teach me how to sing so I quite enjoying the class.

✓ Yes, I did when I was in primary school. One of the subjects taught me how to sing, so I quite enjoyed the class.

Issues: 'One of the subject' should be plural 'subjects'. 'Is teach me' is wrong tense and form; use past 'taught me'. 'Quite enjoying' conflicts with past context, use 'quite enjoyed'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement ('one of the subjects'), use past tense for past events ('taught', 'enjoyed'), and match verb forms to the time frame. Grammar_problem_type_id:5

× Example one of my cousins, she is a singer she sing very well.

✓ For example, one of my cousins is a singer; she sings very well.

The verb 'sing' must agree with third person singular subject 'she', so use 'sings'. Also sentence needs connectors/punctuation; add 'For example' and proper clause boundaries. Suggestions: check subject-verb agreement for he/she/it and punctuate to separate ideas. Grammar_problem_type_id:2

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ For whom do you want to sing? (Informal: Who do you want to sing for?)

The original interrogative is informal but acceptable in spoken English. If formal grammar is required, 'for whom' is the correct prepositional placement. Suggestion: In spoken responses, 'Who do you want to sing for?' is fine; for formal questions use 'For whom do you want to sing?'. Grammar_problem_type_id:26

× When I was in primary school, there's a subject is the teach us how to sing, so I quite enjoying the class.

✓ When I was in primary school, there was a subject that taught us how to sing, so I quite enjoyed the class.

Duplicate of earlier sentence corrected: use past 'there was' instead of 'there's', use 'that taught us' and past tense 'enjoyed'. Suggestions: maintain consistent tense and correct relative clause structure. Grammar_problem_type_id:3}]}