Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较多信息但表达不够自然且存在语法与词汇错误。应直接回应问题（是否喜欢），并用1-2句简短原因，避免多余信息。注意时态和名词单复数（如 piano → the piano），使用连接词使句子更流畅。可以把重点放在唱歌本身而非练琴。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing. I started learning the piano in primary school, which helped me learn many songs I like, and singing along while practicing makes playing more enjoyable.

Sugestão: 答复直接但含混且有多处表达错误（exercise 与 practice 混淆，'not good at seeing' 无意义）。应用简洁句子说明原因并给一两条具体细节。注意时态一致性和词汇准确。

Exemplo: No, I haven't. When I was in primary and middle school I was very busy with schoolwork and extracurricular activities, so I didn't have time to take singing lessons.

Sugestão: 能回答目标对象但表达混乱且有语法错误。应先给出直接回答，然后用一两句具体说明原因（例如情感或场合）。修正用词（graduates, graduation, memorize）。

Exemplo: I'd like to sing for my middle school teachers. We graduated in 2021, and singing at graduation would be a nice way to thank them and remember that special moment.

Sugestão: 回答肯定但论证不够清晰，存在用词和句子结构问题（film? relaxable?重复）。建议先给观点，再用一两个具体日常情境举例说明音乐如何带来快乐，使用准确词汇如 relaxed, energised。

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing and music can make people happier. For example, listening to upbeat pop songs while cycling or exercising can lift your mood and give you more energy.

Sugestão: 回答含义基本明确但表达混乱，语法和词汇不准确（strong relationship between these people; in their seeing）。建议简洁回答并说明原因，举例说明听别人唱歌如何增进情感联系。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to my friends and teachers sing. Hearing them sing helps me connect with them and share emotions, which strengthens our relationships.

Sugestão: 答案重复且存在严重词汇和语法错误（letter? exercise? seeing?）。建议用简短明确的句子说明没有上过课的原因，避免重复，提供具体时间或替代活动作为细节。

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken any singing classes. During primary and middle school I was busy with schoolwork and other activities, so I didn't have time or interest to join singing lessons.

× Yes I do because I began to practice pianos when I was in primary school and I can play a lot of songs which I love.

✓ Yes, I do because I began to practise the piano when I was in primary school, and I can play a lot of songs that I love.

错误类型：过去时或名词用法。说明：将“pianos”改为单数不可数名词“the piano”（表示学钢琴这种活动）更自然；将“which”改为“that”或保留“which”并加逗号取决于限制性从句，使用“that I love”更常见。句中时态“began to practise”为过去时，保留原时态即可。建议：把“pianos”换为“the piano”，并在并列句前加逗号。

× During the practice, I can not only improve my piano but also listen to the favorite music.

✓ During practice, I can not only improve my piano playing but also listen to my favourite music.

错误类型：动词/名词搭配与冠词使用。说明：短语“improve my piano”不自然，应该用“improve my piano playing”或“improve at the piano”；“the favorite music”用法不当，应为“my favourite music”以表示个人喜好。建议：改为“improve my piano playing”并用“my favourite music”。

× No I haven't because the time is not right and I have too much exercise to do when I was in primary and middle school.

✓ No, I haven't, because the timing wasn't right and I had too many extracurricular activities to do when I was in primary and middle school.

错误类型：情态/时态与名词使用。说明：原句“the time is not right”与后半句“when I was...”时间上不一致，应使用过去时“wasn't right”。“too much exercise”用法错误，意图应为“很多课外活动”或“很多练习”，建议用“too many extracurricular activities”。建议：把现在时改为过去时，并用复数名词短语。

× I need to focus more on my studies instead of learning how to sing and I'm not good at seeing.

✓ I needed to focus more on my studies instead of learning how to sing, and I'm not good at sight-singing.

错误类型：代词/词汇用法错误。说明：“I need”与前文时态应保持过去时“needed”；“not good at seeing”语义不明，若想表达不会读谱或看谱唱歌，应为“not good at sight-singing”或“not good at reading music”。建议：根据语境改为过去时并使用正确表达，如“sight-singing”。

× I want to sing to my teachers in middle school because we are the graduates in 2021 and in the graduation we send to them, and I want to sing again to memorize these moments.

✓ I wanted to sing for my middle school teachers because we graduated in 2021, and at the graduation we sang for them; I wanted to sing again to remember those moments.

错误类型：时态与句子结构。说明：原句时态混乱且有错误短语“we are the graduates in 2021”和“we send to them”。应使用过去时“graduated in 2021”；“in the graduation we sang for them”更合适。最后“to memorize these moments”应为“to remember those moments”。建议：将句子改为过去时，使用正确表达“sing for”以及“remember”。

× When we go cycling, we can listen to these kinds of music to make our film more relaxable, feel relaxing and give energy to us.

✓ When we go cycling, we can listen to this kind of music to make our time more relaxing, feel relaxed, and give us energy.

错误类型：动名词/形容词使用不当。说明：“kinds of music”与“these”搭配可以，但更自然为“this kind of music”或“these kinds of music”二选一；“make our film more relaxable”中“film”用错词，应为“time”或“ride”，“relaxable”不是常用形容词，改为“relaxing”；“feel relaxing”应为“feel relaxed”；“give energy to us”更自然为“give us energy”。建议：修正名词，使用“relaxing/relaxed”，并把词序改为更自然的表达。

× I'm a person who has strong relationship between these people and I think we can share our feelings in their seeing and build a strong relationship.

✓ I'm a person who has strong relationships with these people, and I think we can share our feelings by seeing each other and build a strong relationship.

错误类型：代词和介词短语使用错误。说明：“has strong relationship between these people”结构错误，应为“has strong relationships with these people”；“share our feelings in their seeing”表达不通，推测想说“通过彼此见面/交流”，可改为“by seeing each other”或“by talking to each other”。建议：使用“with”表示关系对象，及更自然的短语“seeing each other/ talking to each other”。

× No, I haven't because the time is not right. And when I was in primary and middle school, I have a letter, a lot of exercise to take part in and I'm not a person who gets who like seeing very much.

✓ No, I haven't, because the timing wasn't right. When I was in primary and middle school, I had a lot of activities to take part in and I'm not a person who likes singing very much.

错误类型：时态与词汇选择。说明：将“the time is not right”改为过去时“wasn't right”；“I have a letter, a lot of exercise”无意义，应为“I had a lot of activities”或“a lot of exercises/practice”；“gets who like seeing”不通，应为“likes singing”。建议：使用过去时并替换为正确词汇“activities”与“singing”。

× So I didn't have a lot of interested in it, interested in it.

✓ So I wasn't very interested in it.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用错误。说明：原句“didn't have a lot of interested”语法错误；应使用形容词“interested”与动词be构成“wasn't very interested”或“didn't have much interest”。建议：改为“wasn't very interested in it”或“didn't have much interest in it”。