Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak more fluently and correct grammar. Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. “lead you straight from work”). Use correct verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a long day. For example, when I get home from work I sing for about 20 minutes to relieve stress, and this always improves my mood.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and then explain briefly with clear, simple sentences. Correct verb tenses and vocabulary (learn vs learnt/learned, singing). Avoid unclear phrases like “I obtain thing for all following”.

Exemplo: No, I haven't had formal singing lessons. However, I often practice by myself at home and watch online tutorials to improve my technique.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence identifying who you sing for. Explain reasons with linking words (because, so). Use correct words (perform/for people, not forcing) and express ideas about confidence and audience clearly.

Exemplo: I usually sing alone at home because I'm not confident performing in front of strangers. Occasionally I sing for close friends when we have small gatherings because I feel more comfortable with them.

Sugestão: Answer directly then give specific reasons and examples. Fix grammar (e.g. “I do think it can bring happiness,” “they can sing or listen to music to relax”). Avoid unclear phrases like “Radio State.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can make people happier because it reduces stress. For example, after a stressful day people often sing or listen to music and feel calmer and more positive.

Sugestão: Provide a clear reason why you enjoy listening to others, using correct grammar and coherence. Avoid confusing statements (e.g. “I cannot thinking”). Use linking words to expand your answer briefly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing because it inspires me and helps me learn new techniques. For instance, I often listen to professional singers on YouTube to pick up ideas for breathing and phrasing.

Sugestão: Give a clear past and future contrast: state whether you have taken lessons, then explain future plans with correct vocabulary (singing classes) and grammar. Be concise and specific about when or how you will learn.

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken formal singing classes yet. However, I plan to enroll in a weekly singing class next year to improve my vocal technique and boost my confidence.

× Yes, I enjoy singing because it's make me feel relaxed and enjoyable and it's also help me lead you straight from work that that's why I enjoy singing.

✓ Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel relaxed and happy, and it also helps me unwind after work; that's why I enjoy singing.

Multiple subject-verb agreement errors: 'it's make' should be 'it makes' (third person singular present), 'enjoyable' used as noun should be 'happy' (adjective describing feeling), and 'it's also help' should be 'it also helps'. 'Lead you straight from work' is unclear; replaced with 'unwind after work' to fit likely meaning. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with singular subject 'it' by adding -s in present simple and choose correct adjective or verb phrase for intended meaning.

× No I haven't I never learn about seeing. I obtain thing for all following follow my favorite thing and I confident.

✓ No, I haven't. I never learned about singing. I pick things related to my interests and I am confident.

'I never learn' should be past tense 'I never learned' or present perfect 'I have never learned' when discussing past experience. 'seeing' is incorrect spelling and should be 'singing'. 'I obtain thing for all following follow my favorite thing' is unclear; rephrased to 'I pick things related to my interests'. 'I confident' needs auxiliary verb 'am' to be 'I am confident'. Suggestion: use past tense or present perfect consistently for past experiences and include correct auxiliary verbs for adjectives.

× Well, actually I think I tend to sing alone at home because I'm not confident forcing with people. However, I usually think which my close friend.

✓ Well, actually I tend to sing alone at home because I'm not confident performing in front of people. However, I usually sing for my close friends.

'forcing with people' is incorrect; likely intended 'performing in front of people' (preposition and noun choice). 'I usually think which my close friend' is unclear and uses wrong pronouns and verbs; corrected to 'I usually sing for my close friends'. Suggestion: use 'perform' for singing before others, include correct prepositions ('in front of'), and ensure subject/verb/object order for clarity.

× Yes, I do thinking can being happiness to people, especially when they're stressed from work, they can sing and listen to music for Radio State and help them relax.

✓ Yes, I do. I think singing can bring happiness to people, especially when they're stressed from work; they can sing or listen to music to help them relax.

'I do thinking can being happiness' mixes verb forms incorrectly. Use 'I think' + clause, and 'bring happiness' is correct collocation; 'being happiness' is wrong. 'listen to music for Radio State' is unclear; likely 'listen to music' suffices. Suggestion: use base verb 'bring' after noun 'singing' and maintain parallel structure 'sing or listen'.

× Yes I do. I usually like listen to all the singing because I cannot thinking. I really like to listening to other more than thinking.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually like listening to others sing because it helps me think less. I prefer listening to others more than singing myself.

'like listen' should be 'like listening' (verb + -ing). 'all the singing' is odd; 'others sing' or 'other people's singing' is better. 'I cannot thinking' should be 'because it helps me think less' or 'so I stop thinking'. 'to listening' incorrect after 'like to' choose 'to listen' or 'listening'; here rephrased for clarity. Suggestion: use correct -ing form after 'like' when expressing enjoyment of an activity and ensure logical meaning.

× Not really, I never taken a singing cause umm. However in the future I plan to learn a sinking cars for improve myself and improve my confidence in.

✓ Not really, I have never taken a singing class. However, in the future I plan to take singing classes to improve myself and my confidence.

'I never taken' lacks auxiliary 'have' for present perfect: should be 'I have never taken'. 'a singing cause' should be 'a singing class'. 'learn a sinking cars' incorrect; use 'take singing classes' or 'learn to sing'. 'for improve myself and improve my confidence in' incorrect infinitive; use 'to improve myself and my confidence'. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary verbs for perfect tenses, correct nouns ('class' not 'cause'), and infinitive 'to' for purpose.