Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel comfortable and relaxed, especially after a long day at school.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu văn rõ ràng hơn. Tránh dùng những từ không phù hợp như "graphing exercise" nếu không đúng ngữ cảnh. Hãy trình bày câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in primary school, I took part in music lessons where my teachers taught us basic singing techniques and vocal exercises.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể, tránh những từ không đúng nghĩa.

Exemplo: Actually, I would like to sing for my family and best friends because they always support and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform better.

Sugestão: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ ràng về lợi ích của việc hát đối với cảm xúc con người.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and comforted, reducing stress after a busy day.

× Yes, I better like singing because when I singing I feel comfort table an make me relax after.

✓ Yes, I prefer singing because when I sing I feel comfortable and it makes me relax afterwards.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used after 'when I'; it should be the base form 'sing' to match the present tense. 'Comfort table' is a misspelling of 'comfortable'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'After' should be 'afterwards' to indicate time sequence.

× Yes, I better like singing because when I singing I feel comfort table an make me relax after.

✓ Yes, I prefer singing because when I sing I feel comfortable and it makes me relax afterwards.

The word 'comfort table' is a misspelling and incorrect use of the adjective 'comfortable'. It should be corrected to 'comfortable' to properly describe the feeling.

× Yes, I better like singing because when I singing I feel comfort table an make me relax after.

✓ Yes, I prefer singing because when I sing I feel comfortable and it makes me relax afterwards.

The phrase 'when I singing' is incorrect; after 'when I' the base verb 'sing' should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× Hot. Lesson in my school.

✓ I have music lessons at my school.

The phrase 'Hot. Lesson in my school.' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It likely intends to refer to 'music lessons' in plural form, and a complete sentence is needed.

× Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in primary school I took part in music lessons and my music teachers taught us basic thing techniques and graphing exercise.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing. When I was in primary school, I took part in music lessons and my music teachers taught us basic techniques and breathing exercises.

The phrase 'basic thing techniques and graphing exercise' is incorrect. It should be 'basic techniques and breathing exercises'. Also, 'graphing' is likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'breathing'. The past tense 'taught' is correct here.

× This is very heavily involved.

✓ This was very intensive.

The phrase 'very heavily involved' is awkward and incorrect. 'Intensive' better describes the nature of the lessons. Also, past tense 'was' fits the context.

× Actually I would like to see for my family or best friends because saying problem fails Spencer.

✓ Actually, I would like to sing for my family or best friends because singing helps me overcome problems.

The phrase 'see for my family' is incorrect; it should be 'sing for my family'. 'Saying problem fails Spencer' is unclear and likely a misstatement; corrected to 'singing helps me overcome problems' for clarity.

× They are supported an appreciate my effort which motivate me to perform better an it making.

✓ They support and appreciate my effort, which motivates me to perform better and keeps me motivated.

'They are supported' is incorrect; it should be 'They support'. 'Appreciate' needs to be in present tense to agree with 'They'. 'Motivate' should be 'motivates' to agree with singular 'which'. 'An it making' is unclear and corrected to 'and keeps me motivated'.

× Yes, I think they can bring happiness to people because when you seeing you can build very relaxed ends comforted with it.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you sing, you can feel very relaxed and comforted by it.

'When you seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'when you sing'. 'Build very relaxed ends comforted with it' is awkward and incorrect; corrected to 'feel very relaxed and comforted by it'.

× Also make you relax after. Oh, last.

✓ It also makes you relax afterwards.

The phrase 'Also make you relax after. Oh, last.' is fragmented and unclear. Corrected to a complete sentence with proper subject 'It' and verb agreement 'makes'. 'After' changed to 'afterwards'.