Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use complete sentences and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. For example, explain how singing helps express emotions and improves your mood in a clear and concise way.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions. When I'm feeling down, singing can lift my spirits and make me feel better. It also provides comfort when I'm sad.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some vocabulary mistakes and unclear expressions. Use the correct verb 'sing' instead of 'say' and clarify what you learned. Also, try to add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I learnt how to sing in primary school. Our teacher taught us about rhythm and melodies, which I found fascinating because it helped me understand music better.

Sugestão: Your answer is quite personal but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Avoid slang like 'past attic' and use correct verb forms such as 'hurt' instead of 'hurted'. Also, try to express your feelings more clearly and politely.

Exemplo: Honestly, I would like to sing for my ex-boyfriend to express my feelings because he hurt me. Although it might seem a bit emotional, singing helps me cope with those emotions.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains several mistakes and unclear words like 'saying' instead of 'singing' and 'post'. Try to use correct vocabulary and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Also, provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people, especially during Christmas or other celebrations. Singing lifts the atmosphere and encourages people to dance and enjoy the moment.

× Well, I love seeing an It can help me with express my emotions.

✓ Well, I love singing. It can help me express my emotions.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' to indicate the activity enjoyed. 'Seeing' is incorrect here. Also, 'help me with express' is incorrect; it should be 'help me express' without 'with'.

× It can really boost up my mood when I'm unhappy and.

✓ It can really boost my mood when I'm unhappy.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete and incorrect. Also, 'boost up' is redundant; 'boost' alone is sufficient.

× Also it can just be there with me when I'm sad.

✓ Also, it can just be there with me when I'm sad.

A comma is needed after 'Also' to separate the introductory word from the main clause.

× Yeah, I've learned how to say in my primary school and the teacher told us how to do the pace and melodies, which is fascinating to me.

✓ Yeah, I've learned how to sing in my primary school and the teacher told us how to do the pace and melodies, which is fascinating to me.

The word 'say' is incorrect; it should be 'sing' to match the context. The rest of the sentence is correct in tense.

× Well, it's a bit embarrassed about I want to sing for my ex-boyfriend because I want to sing a sad sound and so that he knew that he really hurted me.

✓ Well, I'm a bit embarrassed about wanting to sing for my ex-boyfriend because I want to sing a sad song so that he knows that he really hurt me.

'It's a bit embarrassed' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm a bit embarrassed'. 'About I want to sing' should be 'about wanting to sing'. 'Sad sound' should be 'sad song'. 'He knew' should be 'he knows' to maintain present tense. 'Hurted' is incorrect past tense; the correct past tense is 'hurt'.

× Well it's a little bit past attic, don't judge me.

✓ Well, it's a little bit pathetic, don't judge me.

The word 'past attic' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; the correct word is 'pathetic' to express embarrassment or self-deprecation.

× Yeah, I do think saying can bring happiness to people, especially during Christmas holidays or some other events.

✓ Yeah, I do think singing can bring happiness to people, especially during Christmas holidays or some other events.

The word 'saying' is incorrect; it should be 'singing' to match the context.

× Saying can really, you know, post, lift up the room and make people dance with the music and reason.

✓ Singing can really, you know, lift up the room and make people dance with the music and rhythm.

'Saying' should be 'singing'. 'Post' is incorrect here and should be removed. 'Reason' is incorrect; the correct word is 'rhythm' to fit the context of music.